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This is honestly one of the best fanfics I have read not to mention the best SU fanfic I have seen! Good job! I hope you continue this to the very end. And until I write again friend Talos guide you.
yes absolutely freaking yes I want more so much more it is warm and cuddly and intriguing and mysterious mmmm
muito bom,faz tempo que eu não leio uma historia que não fique enrrolando a historia ou dando descrisões desnessesaria sobre alguma coisa.
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What a good fic, it's the best fic of Steven Universe, I can say that it's the only one worthy of raising Myonir. You really should give it a chance, the author is very talented.
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I love this fanfic from the Steven Universe universe. The story captures the essence of the characters in a deep and authentic way, bringing their unique personalities to life. The narrative is so well structured that every scene seems to come to life, managing to convey all the magic and emotion of the original series.
Me parece un excelente fantic de Steven universe, la protagonista es muy interesante y, como dice su autor, la historia no es de acción o romance, simplemente es el día a día de una peridot,(no la peridot original sino otra). Se que ya se lo han dicho muchos pero yo igual espero que el autor no abandone este trabajo.
Too boring, too rambling, too slow, too problematic. There is no balance in this story, it just shows a cheap drama that is basically a protagonist complaining. Good grammar, bad narrative. The first chapter is interesting, then there's a bit of drama, and then some more, and then the cheap drama never ends.
Real story spoilers. it's a slow burn, burning low and slow. so slow that I got bored around chapter 25 and just started skimming the rest to see if anything interesting was going to happen. the entirety of the fic can be explained down to this. The MC is an overcooked peridot with analysis and minor transmutation abilities who wakes up on a husk of a planet. fixes an old warp pad and warps to earth, breaking her gem in the meantime. the break is clean and the MC can use her transmutation power on herself to keep her gem in one piece. the break turns her into an invalid for a long time, the warp pad took her to the desert where lion was. eventually lion takes her to a hospital where she gets adopted by connies mom. just reading the titles of the chapters I can assume connies mom abandons Connie. that may seem like a lot but remember, that's like 25+ chapters of stuff condensed into like, 3 paragraphs if I cared to partion it correctly.
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It is a very well-crafted story. I hope it continues to develop. Please write more!!
Just because it's from Steven Universe it's worth reading. [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
An amazing fanfic, I rarely leave any form of review unless something catches my interest and this did so perfectly. The only thing that I can say that is negative is that there isn't enough chapters.
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siendo sincero entre con bajas espectativas y me está encantando la historia, las interacciones del mc con los demás personajes es bastante entrertenido
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Perfection. This is a great really amazing story. The writing style of the author has me invested and I read up to the latest chaptee already and now I want more. 100% anybody seeing this, give this story a read.
Good morning/afternoon/night/whatever time you are in all I can say about this book is that ia can't find the words to express how much I love it or how good is the writing style of the author very creative and make the reader feel all the colourful emotions in it thank you very much for allowing me to read and enjoy such a book and I hope you continue the super good writing and never stop i truly enjoy reading it
Thank you for writing this, there's so few SU fics. I hope you can continue (make sure to not burn yourself put tho (taking breaks can help in the long run))
As a die-hard fan of this wonderful work of Fan-Fiction. I give it 5 stars. Seriously speaking, I love stories that take the trouble to give details of the interactions between the characters, how they think and that. It is ESSENCE.
I've already read 13 chapters, and I have to say, I love it. Great writing! I look forward to seeing more of your work, keep it up! 👌..........
Firstly, good morning, good afternoon and good night Writer and Readers. I would like to talk about this work, as the title itself says it is a Steven Universe fanfic, I know how there are many haters of this cartoon, but I suggest giving it a chance if you just want to enjoy a different fanfic from this very interesting Rebecca Sugar universe. About the work, it starts as a common cliché of reincarnation, even more so as technically a gender bender since the gens have a feminine appearance even though they don't technically have genders, but that doesn't matter, what matters is that this work works well with the characters secondary characters and with the construction of the world, while maintaining a fun side which is the mistake that the other characters have in relation to the protagonist because they do not understand the truth about the MC's past, but this at the same time develops a connection in a sublime way. true between this MC who is a poor fellow with the other characters in the work, and thank you very much for the cuteness of some moments in the work, this heart of a Badboy thanks you PS: I was very happy to see some words in Brazilian Portuguese in the work, it was a very pleasant surprise
I came looking for copper and found gems, joke intended. Aside from the fact that the tone of the fanfic is darker than I expected, I have nothing negative to say. The pace is slow, but that is clearly the intention and it is not to the detriment of the fanfic, on the contrary, I would say it is a strong point. The author manages to create a description of the characters' inner emotions and thoughts that really makes you feel immersed in them. It is a great read and I genuinely don't understand where the author got the legendary lost ability to combine multiple points of view into a coherent and engaging narrative.
This is honestly one of the best fanfics I have read not to mention the best SU fanfic I have seen! Good job! I hope you continue this to the very end. And until I write again friend Talos guide you.
yes absolutely freaking yes I want more so much more it is warm and cuddly and intriguing and mysterious mmmm
muito bom,faz tempo que eu não leio uma historia que não fique enrrolando a historia ou dando descrisões desnessesaria sobre alguma coisa.
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What a good fic, it's the best fic of Steven Universe, I can say that it's the only one worthy of raising Myonir. You really should give it a chance, the author is very talented.
It's a fantastic fic, I just love it, love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice, love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice,love it, love it, love it, love it , it nice, it nice, it nice.
I love this fanfic from the Steven Universe universe. The story captures the essence of the characters in a deep and authentic way, bringing their unique personalities to life. The narrative is so well structured that every scene seems to come to life, managing to convey all the magic and emotion of the original series.
Me parece un excelente fantic de Steven universe, la protagonista es muy interesante y, como dice su autor, la historia no es de acción o romance, simplemente es el día a día de una peridot,(no la peridot original sino otra). Se que ya se lo han dicho muchos pero yo igual espero que el autor no abandone este trabajo.
Too boring, too rambling, too slow, too problematic. There is no balance in this story, it just shows a cheap drama that is basically a protagonist complaining. Good grammar, bad narrative. The first chapter is interesting, then there's a bit of drama, and then some more, and then the cheap drama never ends.
Real story spoilers. it's a slow burn, burning low and slow. so slow that I got bored around chapter 25 and just started skimming the rest to see if anything interesting was going to happen. the entirety of the fic can be explained down to this. The MC is an overcooked peridot with analysis and minor transmutation abilities who wakes up on a husk of a planet. fixes an old warp pad and warps to earth, breaking her gem in the meantime. the break is clean and the MC can use her transmutation power on herself to keep her gem in one piece. the break turns her into an invalid for a long time, the warp pad took her to the desert where lion was. eventually lion takes her to a hospital where she gets adopted by connies mom. just reading the titles of the chapters I can assume connies mom abandons Connie. that may seem like a lot but remember, that's like 25+ chapters of stuff condensed into like, 3 paragraphs if I cared to partion it correctly.
Spoiler de révélation It is a very well-crafted story. I hope it continues to develop. Please write more!!
Just because it's from Steven Universe it's worth reading. [img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
An amazing fanfic, I rarely leave any form of review unless something catches my interest and this did so perfectly. The only thing that I can say that is negative is that there isn't enough chapters.
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siendo sincero entre con bajas espectativas y me está encantando la historia, las interacciones del mc con los demás personajes es bastante entrertenido
Cute cute cute the disguise is tooooo cuteeeeeeeee.... .................. ................. .................. ......... .................. ..................
Perfection. This is a great really amazing story. The writing style of the author has me invested and I read up to the latest chaptee already and now I want more. 100% anybody seeing this, give this story a read.
Good morning/afternoon/night/whatever time you are in all I can say about this book is that ia can't find the words to express how much I love it or how good is the writing style of the author very creative and make the reader feel all the colourful emotions in it thank you very much for allowing me to read and enjoy such a book and I hope you continue the super good writing and never stop i truly enjoy reading it
Thank you for writing this, there's so few SU fics. I hope you can continue (make sure to not burn yourself put tho (taking breaks can help in the long run))
As a die-hard fan of this wonderful work of Fan-Fiction. I give it 5 stars. Seriously speaking, I love stories that take the trouble to give details of the interactions between the characters, how they think and that. It is ESSENCE.
I've already read 13 chapters, and I have to say, I love it. Great writing! I look forward to seeing more of your work, keep it up! 👌..........
Firstly, good morning, good afternoon and good night Writer and Readers. I would like to talk about this work, as the title itself says it is a Steven Universe fanfic, I know how there are many haters of this cartoon, but I suggest giving it a chance if you just want to enjoy a different fanfic from this very interesting Rebecca Sugar universe. About the work, it starts as a common cliché of reincarnation, even more so as technically a gender bender since the gens have a feminine appearance even though they don't technically have genders, but that doesn't matter, what matters is that this work works well with the characters secondary characters and with the construction of the world, while maintaining a fun side which is the mistake that the other characters have in relation to the protagonist because they do not understand the truth about the MC's past, but this at the same time develops a connection in a sublime way. true between this MC who is a poor fellow with the other characters in the work, and thank you very much for the cuteness of some moments in the work, this heart of a Badboy thanks you PS: I was very happy to see some words in Brazilian Portuguese in the work, it was a very pleasant surprise
I came looking for copper and found gems, joke intended. Aside from the fact that the tone of the fanfic is darker than I expected, I have nothing negative to say. The pace is slow, but that is clearly the intention and it is not to the detriment of the fanfic, on the contrary, I would say it is a strong point. The author manages to create a description of the characters' inner emotions and thoughts that really makes you feel immersed in them. It is a great read and I genuinely don't understand where the author got the legendary lost ability to combine multiple points of view into a coherent and engaging narrative.
Absolutely one of the best stories ever.