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Not bad. But mc is heavily nerfed. Mc is going to be op anyway so make him so instead of slowing down his progress. Story has potential. Hopefully it won’t be dropped
Esta historia es buena pero las actualizaciones son basura prácticamente una historia que comencé a seguir que empezó al mismo tiempo que esta comenzó y terminó el mismo tiempo que esta se tardaba en subir capítulos o algo , aún así me gusta pero me encabrona q sea así ni modo toca donar piedras
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Mc should have just been a evil villain that wins. Rather than having a tragic backstory like every other edgy protagonist has ....,.................... .... ... .. . . .. ... .. .. .. .. . .. . . ... ..
The author has done a good job at making a character that is ruthless while not being a murder hobo. The interactions with other characters feel natural, and I like how the story is progressing. It's definitely a good read.
Just going to say one thing rewrite this a lot of unnecessary draw out stuff happens for some wired reason kingpin should have been dead but it’s your fic I can only give my opinion
This is so insane. A bunch of people have left reviews saying the power scaling is off or the characters behave weird or the plot is forced but the real problem is that it is all ChatGPT. I skimmed through all the chaps posted so far and it pretty obvious that ChatGPT is doing all the plot and dialogue. every character is just ChatGPT in a different disguise which is why every character is dumb as rocks and nobodies actions/motivations make any sense. The fact that so many people are reading this and don’t even realize is genuinely terrifying
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I am so happy to have someone do a crossover of sukuna with marvel! Thank you so much. The quality of writing is good also.
Eyyy. Just read your latest chapter and I must say I am satisfied. Please release new chapters soon. Keep up the good work and good luck 👍👍👍👍
too forced. The author just doesn't want to kill important characters. he could have easily killed all the mutants but no that author had to go cliche.
The plot is overly drawn out, and nonsensical. The mc killed juggernaut (aka one of the most resilient, durable characters in Marvel) but struggles against Magneto...yeah right. The MC is pretty much a worse version of Sukuna, with none of the charm. The most accurate way I can describe him is "Emo" "Teenager" and whatever else comes with that. And that "Emo" aspect isn't even remotely appealing, as it was done poorly. The story has stalled drastically as of around 15-20 chapters in, and has fallen off horribly. It was a good read in the beginning, but not anymore. And for that, I'm giving it a 2.0 out 5. I hope the author actually pays attention to the feedback and improves, but I somehow doubt that will happen.
The author is probably a new one or...a bad one, im saying this because he breake one of the sacred laws about writting fanfictions, what law? the next one -Nerfs (the MC get nerfed or the author makes X power nerfed for "plot" convenience or bad aplication/underperformance of said power)
Well, I would have given it more if it was in the past. But, the arthur started to drag the chapters with useless moments and what not. Jjk is mostly about fighting and killing. Sukuna is the main villain of the series. If you going to make a fic about Sukuna and give that kind of background, you have to make the story more interesting not to drag the story. If you do that, than you should stop cooking.
It's disappointing that the author doesn't know the power scale of the characters, the protagonist could easily kill most of everyone who is against him, but the author insists on forcing the plot. When I read the title and synopsis, I thought it would be a story where the protagonist gets Sukuna's powers, and shows the Marvel and X-Men characters how trash they are.
great potential but completly wasted... mc is just edgy sukuna wanabe with no charisma, his mentality just suddenly completly changed moment he got his powers (and even after that), he completly dont mind killing tens of ppl in brutal way (and even plays with some) even tho he didnt killed anyone before... he act dumb and ilogocal as well. Writing is pretty good grammer vise but he use unusual words to point it even looks like ai wrote it (or at least helped him)... overall very unoroginal story with mid writing and bad main character... nothing i can praise author for
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He is artificially elongating the fight scenes and nerfing the MC so that the story and conflict goes on longer than is necessary. ...............
Thought that this fanfic might be to my liking because it has a MC with Sukuna abilities but the Author does not know the proper power level of other Marvel characters as he made other characters which should not stand a chance against Sukuna survive the fight just because Author want to stretch the story longer Overall Not worth your time (my opinion)
Mano está interessante até agora , se ele puder usar outras técnicas inatas será bem útil principalmente a do mahito que tem a expansão de domínio mais letal por ser hit kit diferente da do sukuna que dá pra "counterar" com domínio simples + técnica de energia reversa , ou tentar counterar com expansão de domínio comprimida , e por favor dê as 10 sombras pra ele poder usar o mahoraga pra se adaptar a ataques mentais e outros a mais que são chatos de counterar.
It's not that bad, but it has a forced plot, as well as dragging out plots for the silliest things, just because it was easy for the MC, so it gets more and more boring when the drama doesn't end.
Premise is good but the plot is a lil bit meh and nonsensical plus the writing is heavily influenced by ai
Good writing hands off to writer i realy enjoys to reading it i hope you does not lose motivation cause of bad comment👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Not bad. But mc is heavily nerfed. Mc is going to be op anyway so make him so instead of slowing down his progress. Story has potential. Hopefully it won’t be dropped
Esta historia es buena pero las actualizaciones son basura prácticamente una historia que comencé a seguir que empezó al mismo tiempo que esta comenzó y terminó el mismo tiempo que esta se tardaba en subir capítulos o algo , aún así me gusta pero me encabrona q sea así ni modo toca donar piedras
Masterclass j’attend la suite avec impatiene //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Mc should have just been a evil villain that wins. Rather than having a tragic backstory like every other edgy protagonist has ....,.................... .... ... .. . . .. ... .. .. .. .. . .. . . ... ..
The author has done a good job at making a character that is ruthless while not being a murder hobo. The interactions with other characters feel natural, and I like how the story is progressing. It's definitely a good read.
Just going to say one thing rewrite this a lot of unnecessary draw out stuff happens for some wired reason kingpin should have been dead but it’s your fic I can only give my opinion
This is so insane. A bunch of people have left reviews saying the power scaling is off or the characters behave weird or the plot is forced but the real problem is that it is all ChatGPT. I skimmed through all the chaps posted so far and it pretty obvious that ChatGPT is doing all the plot and dialogue. every character is just ChatGPT in a different disguise which is why every character is dumb as rocks and nobodies actions/motivations make any sense. The fact that so many people are reading this and don’t even realize is genuinely terrifying
MC and autor [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I am so happy to have someone do a crossover of sukuna with marvel! Thank you so much. The quality of writing is good also.
Eyyy. Just read your latest chapter and I must say I am satisfied. Please release new chapters soon. Keep up the good work and good luck 👍👍👍👍
too forced. The author just doesn't want to kill important characters. he could have easily killed all the mutants but no that author had to go cliche.
The plot is overly drawn out, and nonsensical. The mc killed juggernaut (aka one of the most resilient, durable characters in Marvel) but struggles against Magneto...yeah right. The MC is pretty much a worse version of Sukuna, with none of the charm. The most accurate way I can describe him is "Emo" "Teenager" and whatever else comes with that. And that "Emo" aspect isn't even remotely appealing, as it was done poorly. The story has stalled drastically as of around 15-20 chapters in, and has fallen off horribly. It was a good read in the beginning, but not anymore. And for that, I'm giving it a 2.0 out 5. I hope the author actually pays attention to the feedback and improves, but I somehow doubt that will happen.
The author is probably a new one or...a bad one, im saying this because he breake one of the sacred laws about writting fanfictions, what law? the next one -Nerfs (the MC get nerfed or the author makes X power nerfed for "plot" convenience or bad aplication/underperformance of said power)
Well, I would have given it more if it was in the past. But, the arthur started to drag the chapters with useless moments and what not. Jjk is mostly about fighting and killing. Sukuna is the main villain of the series. If you going to make a fic about Sukuna and give that kind of background, you have to make the story more interesting not to drag the story. If you do that, than you should stop cooking.
It's disappointing that the author doesn't know the power scale of the characters, the protagonist could easily kill most of everyone who is against him, but the author insists on forcing the plot. When I read the title and synopsis, I thought it would be a story where the protagonist gets Sukuna's powers, and shows the Marvel and X-Men characters how trash they are.
great potential but completly wasted... mc is just edgy sukuna wanabe with no charisma, his mentality just suddenly completly changed moment he got his powers (and even after that), he completly dont mind killing tens of ppl in brutal way (and even plays with some) even tho he didnt killed anyone before... he act dumb and ilogocal as well. Writing is pretty good grammer vise but he use unusual words to point it even looks like ai wrote it (or at least helped him)... overall very unoroginal story with mid writing and bad main character... nothing i can praise author for
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He is artificially elongating the fight scenes and nerfing the MC so that the story and conflict goes on longer than is necessary. ...............
Thought that this fanfic might be to my liking because it has a MC with Sukuna abilities but the Author does not know the proper power level of other Marvel characters as he made other characters which should not stand a chance against Sukuna survive the fight just because Author want to stretch the story longer Overall Not worth your time (my opinion)
Mano está interessante até agora , se ele puder usar outras técnicas inatas será bem útil principalmente a do mahito que tem a expansão de domínio mais letal por ser hit kit diferente da do sukuna que dá pra "counterar" com domínio simples + técnica de energia reversa , ou tentar counterar com expansão de domínio comprimida , e por favor dê as 10 sombras pra ele poder usar o mahoraga pra se adaptar a ataques mentais e outros a mais que são chatos de counterar.
It's not that bad, but it has a forced plot, as well as dragging out plots for the silliest things, just because it was easy for the MC, so it gets more and more boring when the drama doesn't end.
Premise is good but the plot is a lil bit meh and nonsensical plus the writing is heavily influenced by ai
Good writing hands off to writer i realy enjoys to reading it i hope you does not lose motivation cause of bad comment👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍