Bro pls stop making him saying the name of the technique every time. It’s annoying.
Why don’t you give him some erosion like power?
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(Devour other people dao mark to increase his own dao mark number)
Then can you make the MC create a move to devour dao mark and another to increase his competence in every path like spectral soul?
Johan against Gun tried to copy UI Daniel and become ultra OP but he couldn’t copy it for more than a few second because he doesn’t have a Perfect body and he ended up getting beaten
Seok-Jin swiped his snot away, smiling, and yelled the words "MIMIC SKILL!" Now reassured, with a big smile on his face, he was interrupted by a familiar ping and a blue screen in front of him. The words on the blue screen were: "We will now provide you with all the memories you need to know about the body you are inhabiting." Abruptly, the blue screen erupted with an intense burst of black light, enveloping the entire room Seok-Jin was staying in.
Transmigrated Into Lookism
Anime & Comics · Lusierrier
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Good fanfiction. I think it will be better if you make the narration of the “game part” go more faster, but it’s not that important. I also hope that you give the Eldritch Form more “screen time” and make its principal/more used power.
Because the name it’s too long. At least make it shorter. For example don’t make him shout: “ immagination magic: trap creation” but only “trap creation”
Black Clover: Imagination Magic
Anime & Comics · Mr_ExtraLover