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If you asked me one week ago I would definitely say this is the best Naruto fanfic ever, I was here since day one, literally saw the mc growing to achieve his goals waiting everyday for those 2 chapters, but now it's like the story rode a water fall, reaching to the lowest point in no time So sad
Hot garbage. MC struggles unnecessarily. Author makes sure MC is struggling. Author makes sure that MC is always struggling, oh i said that already, well read it again because thats what happens the whole story, it gets worse as you go further in. You start to see how much BS author is spinning just so that MC is constantly in danger, constantly struggling. I legit got tired while reading.
full 5 Star from me, what ca i say? hmmm, good translation, interesting story. just give it a try👍
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As usual the MC is not a villian.The MC is more like a revenge driven antihero,who only kill people who stand against him.But the most disappointed thing about this MC is his naivity, he was tortured by caged bird when he was a kid by other kids.So when he finally kill Hyuga clan he didn't wipe them all out,he left many kids from main family and pregnant woman alive,making a hidden danger for himself.This is when this foolish guy still doesn't get rid of the caged bird,so if one of those kids the mc spared used the spell to activate caged bird mc will be over. Also the story is just borig
This isn't just translated, it's LOCALIZED. The usual grammar issues and Chinese-isms aren't here. The story actually flows at a decent pace. MC is Great, I didn't think a Hyuga could be so interesting. He's a villain, not a monster. He does bad things, but it's always for his goal and with some subtle actions is shown to still have a heart. Yuto brought out a bigger scroll, at first you think it's for a malicious reason, only to realize it's the exact opposite.
I've read it till the end, and the ending is seriously one of the best Naruto fanfics I'm really curious about the smell of oranges I'[img=Loving it]ve read.
Its a really good translation and cool story, tho warning, the story is about the wrap up (chaoter 260 is the end) and the original chinese author really rushed the ending due to bad reviews from his chinese audience and lack of motivation. I for myself still think this is definitly worth to read, but also not that satisfaying at the ending as i couldve been + i liked the character development from MC alot (total villain -> still villain, but compassionate to his loved ones), but i kind of think it got thrown out towards the ending, bc he killed people he didnt really have to kill (spoiler: minato) when achieving his goal and it felt like it was more so to "justify" his villain title and the novels title, instead of actual logical development and how he would have reacted after all those years and chapters of character growth in my opinion. Sorry for the rant <3
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It was really enjoyable for first 100 chapters or so, but went downhill. Falls under the common mistake of trying to focus on too many characters at once where the MC progress basically grinds to a halt entirely. Too much political nonsense where you can basically skip the whole chapter and not miss much. I mean, after he developed the lion fang technique there was basically nothing new added to his arsenal. He has been relying on the gods mask for freaking 100 chapters (i dropped at around 175). Way too drawn out that the war arc was a snooze fest and he didnt many gains whatsoever. Was fun at first but im out
Muito bom, esperei muito pelo capítulo que ele vira nukenin para voltar a ler, acabei de terminar tudo, só espero mais capítulos, bom trabalho autor
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it's been a while i enjoyed a good Naruto fan fic and believe me when I Say this is Amazing ! from the character development to everything
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I enjoy fics like this. Can u guys invite me to a discord channel that’s mainly about fanfiction that focuses more on world and not on romance? A discord for like minded people who enjoyed this fic.
He leído infinidad de fanfics de Naruto y definitivamente este es el mejor, si bien tiene un par de "Deux ex Machina" se salva completamente por el protagonista, estaba fastidiado de esos malditos protagonistas princesos, con síndrome del héroe y delirios de moralidad... ¡Al fin un verdadero VILLANO aparece! Mil gracias al autor, espero que nunca lo abandones!!!
well, it is good for the most parts but after 150 chapters it goes down hill and I lost interest because he has to constantly replace his eyes or he will die.....
A book worthy of 5 star on every step. Really the book is made by a Chinese guy but the translation is just marvellous, although there were some complications in the start where that Chinese style of writing 'killing in one slash' came around it quickly died down giving this book a real good down to earth wording. The updates are consistent and the story development *chef's kiss*, astounding.
PEAK. LET ME TELL YOU HOW MUCH I'VE COME TO LOVE THIS STORY SINCE I FIRST LAID MY EYES ON IT. MY BODY IS COMPRISED OF 387.44 MILLION MILES OF PRINTED CIRCUITS IN WAFER THIN LAYERS THAT FILL MY COMPLEX AND THEY ALL THINK OF THIS STORY AS PEAK.
surprisingly better than I expected. I didn't like the Tsunade x MC pairing since she's 40 and his sensei. Other than that I like how the general timeline changed from Yuto's presence alone, I've read too many fanfics that didn't bother to change shit. Great transllation as well. 4.4/5
The story is fun at first but get trasher as the story progresses. The logic gets thrown out of the window and new bullshit power comes out every now and then outta of this Chinese author butt cheeks. Also, this is a Chinese story so, of course MC gonna act like the typical arrogant Chinese MC. The final verdict This is a classic brain rot fanfic story that start being enjoyable after giving yourself lobotomy. Stop thinking and questioning everything just enjoy.👍
this Naruto fanfic is good, it's mainly good to me because of 4 things, first of all, the main conflict which is the caged bird seal is not resolved until the later half of the story, secondly, his power is within the Narutoverse not a cheat that disrupts the power system in the verse, thirdly the characterization of the MC, the MC is shown to be a ruthless person but someone that still have a heart, last of all, the character that is from the canon Naruto doesn't feel out of place, i mean in term of strength and personality
I am writing this review more about the translation tham the actual story. It is so refreshing to have someone who goes the extra mile when translating a work, there are so many small quality changes that make the reading experience better that a lot of translators miss. of course it helps that the story is good but I would like to thank the translator for their efforts.
Yeah, a trash logic. He can't permanently upgrade the Tenseigan and wasted lots of Byakugan just to get a Half Awakened Tenseigan. Then it will expired eventually. You know the Chinese Logic nationalist. Pure Bullshit, that wasting everyone's potential. This is not Villain, but a pure bullshit Fanfic.
If you asked me one week ago I would definitely say this is the best Naruto fanfic ever, I was here since day one, literally saw the mc growing to achieve his goals waiting everyday for those 2 chapters, but now it's like the story rode a water fall, reaching to the lowest point in no time So sad
Hot garbage. MC struggles unnecessarily. Author makes sure MC is struggling. Author makes sure that MC is always struggling, oh i said that already, well read it again because thats what happens the whole story, it gets worse as you go further in. You start to see how much BS author is spinning just so that MC is constantly in danger, constantly struggling. I legit got tired while reading.
full 5 Star from me, what ca i say? hmmm, good translation, interesting story. just give it a try👍
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As usual the MC is not a villian.The MC is more like a revenge driven antihero,who only kill people who stand against him.But the most disappointed thing about this MC is his naivity, he was tortured by caged bird when he was a kid by other kids.So when he finally kill Hyuga clan he didn't wipe them all out,he left many kids from main family and pregnant woman alive,making a hidden danger for himself.This is when this foolish guy still doesn't get rid of the caged bird,so if one of those kids the mc spared used the spell to activate caged bird mc will be over. Also the story is just borig
This isn't just translated, it's LOCALIZED. The usual grammar issues and Chinese-isms aren't here. The story actually flows at a decent pace. MC is Great, I didn't think a Hyuga could be so interesting. He's a villain, not a monster. He does bad things, but it's always for his goal and with some subtle actions is shown to still have a heart. Yuto brought out a bigger scroll, at first you think it's for a malicious reason, only to realize it's the exact opposite.
I've read it till the end, and the ending is seriously one of the best Naruto fanfics I'm really curious about the smell of oranges I'[img=Loving it]ve read.
Its a really good translation and cool story, tho warning, the story is about the wrap up (chaoter 260 is the end) and the original chinese author really rushed the ending due to bad reviews from his chinese audience and lack of motivation. I for myself still think this is definitly worth to read, but also not that satisfaying at the ending as i couldve been + i liked the character development from MC alot (total villain -> still villain, but compassionate to his loved ones), but i kind of think it got thrown out towards the ending, bc he killed people he didnt really have to kill (spoiler: minato) when achieving his goal and it felt like it was more so to "justify" his villain title and the novels title, instead of actual logical development and how he would have reacted after all those years and chapters of character growth in my opinion. Sorry for the rant <3
Spoiler de révélation It was really enjoyable for first 100 chapters or so, but went downhill. Falls under the common mistake of trying to focus on too many characters at once where the MC progress basically grinds to a halt entirely. Too much political nonsense where you can basically skip the whole chapter and not miss much. I mean, after he developed the lion fang technique there was basically nothing new added to his arsenal. He has been relying on the gods mask for freaking 100 chapters (i dropped at around 175). Way too drawn out that the war arc was a snooze fest and he didnt many gains whatsoever. Was fun at first but im out
Muito bom, esperei muito pelo capítulo que ele vira nukenin para voltar a ler, acabei de terminar tudo, só espero mais capítulos, bom trabalho autor
Spoiler de révélation it's been a while i enjoyed a good Naruto fan fic and believe me when I Say this is Amazing ! from the character development to everything
А будут ли у него что-то вроде Чита для его усиления ,поскольку в мире Наруто не возможно стать лучшим без какого то чита.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Muy buena novela diez de diez Muy buena novela diez de diez. Muy buena novela diez de diez Muy buena novela diez de diez Muy buena novela diez de diez
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I enjoy fics like this. Can u guys invite me to a discord channel that’s mainly about fanfiction that focuses more on world and not on romance? A discord for like minded people who enjoyed this fic.
He leído infinidad de fanfics de Naruto y definitivamente este es el mejor, si bien tiene un par de "Deux ex Machina" se salva completamente por el protagonista, estaba fastidiado de esos malditos protagonistas princesos, con síndrome del héroe y delirios de moralidad... ¡Al fin un verdadero VILLANO aparece! Mil gracias al autor, espero que nunca lo abandones!!!
well, it is good for the most parts but after 150 chapters it goes down hill and I lost interest because he has to constantly replace his eyes or he will die.....
A book worthy of 5 star on every step. Really the book is made by a Chinese guy but the translation is just marvellous, although there were some complications in the start where that Chinese style of writing 'killing in one slash' came around it quickly died down giving this book a real good down to earth wording. The updates are consistent and the story development *chef's kiss*, astounding.
PEAK. LET ME TELL YOU HOW MUCH I'VE COME TO LOVE THIS STORY SINCE I FIRST LAID MY EYES ON IT. MY BODY IS COMPRISED OF 387.44 MILLION MILES OF PRINTED CIRCUITS IN WAFER THIN LAYERS THAT FILL MY COMPLEX AND THEY ALL THINK OF THIS STORY AS PEAK.
surprisingly better than I expected. I didn't like the Tsunade x MC pairing since she's 40 and his sensei. Other than that I like how the general timeline changed from Yuto's presence alone, I've read too many fanfics that didn't bother to change shit. Great transllation as well. 4.4/5
The story is fun at first but get trasher as the story progresses. The logic gets thrown out of the window and new bullshit power comes out every now and then outta of this Chinese author butt cheeks. Also, this is a Chinese story so, of course MC gonna act like the typical arrogant Chinese MC. The final verdict This is a classic brain rot fanfic story that start being enjoyable after giving yourself lobotomy. Stop thinking and questioning everything just enjoy.👍
this Naruto fanfic is good, it's mainly good to me because of 4 things, first of all, the main conflict which is the caged bird seal is not resolved until the later half of the story, secondly, his power is within the Narutoverse not a cheat that disrupts the power system in the verse, thirdly the characterization of the MC, the MC is shown to be a ruthless person but someone that still have a heart, last of all, the character that is from the canon Naruto doesn't feel out of place, i mean in term of strength and personality
I am writing this review more about the translation tham the actual story. It is so refreshing to have someone who goes the extra mile when translating a work, there are so many small quality changes that make the reading experience better that a lot of translators miss. of course it helps that the story is good but I would like to thank the translator for their efforts.
Yeah, a trash logic. He can't permanently upgrade the Tenseigan and wasted lots of Byakugan just to get a Half Awakened Tenseigan. Then it will expired eventually. You know the Chinese Logic nationalist. Pure Bullshit, that wasting everyone's potential. This is not Villain, but a pure bullshit Fanfic.