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this shit is so dam peak , double life based mc , the out of reach teased romance , the growth and status along with the twist on characters yet the main character stays true to what he set on at the beginning of the story bro this shit so dam peak anything other than 5 stars is a lie !!!!!!
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One of the best fanfics i have read, keeps interest on every line no skipping chapters. waiting for more chapters
It's a great translation, I'm currently on chapter 173, I looked at the original raw and there are about 100 chapters left to finish, it's a short chapter but it's good, I recommend it
it is amazing. it take some idea from novels i have read before that was bad and turned it into some thing that i love
I think my only pet peeve with this novel is the fact that he's taking so long to do what the description implies clan killing, even though he has the power to do it.
This novel has really good writing. The main character has a very good motivation to do what he does and if weren't for the romantic subplot i'd say this fanfic is perfect.
to be honest, i thought this would be an edgy type novel. I'm really glad that i give this novel a chance
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Very good translation. The MC is a branch-family Hyuga, who betrays the village and clan, with only his own benefits in mind though he hides it. The characters feel alive, they aren't made dumber for the plot, and plot&power progression is smooth. spoiler clones have a devouring fetish
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If it wasn’t included in the synopsis and the authors notes, I would really struggle to ascertain that this is a translation. The grammar and word usage is as good if not better than most original English fanfictions, so massive kudos for that alone. I really enjoy the different elements of the world building and the only gripe I have is that certain settings are a bit rushed leading to a lack of detail in some aspects. MC is surprisingly enjoyable despite my general dislike for scheming “youth” character and while sometimes I scratch my head at certain choices, it’s nothing detrimental to my enjoyment of the story. The thing I’d like to highlight the most is the navigation of emotions. While the original author definitely forced certain aspects of some characters emotions and choices, it’s simply to help tie together points in the plot so nothing too bad. But beyond that, I love the subtleties of emotional change and importance in lots of the conversations. Overall (while trying not to spoil anything); this is a very very good novel that everyone who stumbles across it should definitely give a chance.
the max i can give if is five stars unfortunately, should be 10/5, a real gem, never thought i see a story with such great quality and story development
An amazing translation of a wonderful fanfic, I'm here for the ride as the new chapters are finished. By far the best Hyuga story I have read.
one of the better on going Naruto fanfics rn. I'm honestly surprised this was a translation.
fanfics these good have the curse of being dropped eventually, but this one has not, crossed it has one hundred chapters. excited I am, for its future.
Simple review Had to put this is my favorites as the main character, growth, interactions between characters, and especially the written combat is something to absolutely enjoy. A sucker for good combat and characters interactions.
An MC that's not edgy and actually has a brain? 😱 Well I saw another Naruto fanfic where the MC is also From the hyuga clan and he also doesn't have a system or a golden finger other than the knowledge of the plot Which already sets it above the rest System fanfics And especially the sentient ones really ruin it for me
It’s looking very good so far and i especially like the high character release
A bit slow paced. The translation is good . The story is great 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
A really good one with Hyuga focus. I would like to see how this goes Till the end and hope that you continue this work with a good translation that you have been doing till now.
an anti-hero naruto fanfic that isn’t just 2k words of distilled edginess?! the mc actually seems to use his brain and the translation is awesome, this is worth a read
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this shit is so dam peak , double life based mc , the out of reach teased romance , the growth and status along with the twist on characters yet the main character stays true to what he set on at the beginning of the story bro this shit so dam peak anything other than 5 stars is a lie !!!!!!
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One of the best fanfics i have read, keeps interest on every line no skipping chapters. waiting for more chapters
It's a great translation, I'm currently on chapter 173, I looked at the original raw and there are about 100 chapters left to finish, it's a short chapter but it's good, I recommend it
it is amazing. it take some idea from novels i have read before that was bad and turned it into some thing that i love
I think my only pet peeve with this novel is the fact that he's taking so long to do what the description implies clan killing, even though he has the power to do it.
This novel has really good writing. The main character has a very good motivation to do what he does and if weren't for the romantic subplot i'd say this fanfic is perfect.
to be honest, i thought this would be an edgy type novel. I'm really glad that i give this novel a chance
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Spoiler de révélation Very good translation. The MC is a branch-family Hyuga, who betrays the village and clan, with only his own benefits in mind though he hides it. The characters feel alive, they aren't made dumber for the plot, and plot&power progression is smooth. spoiler clones have a devouring fetish
Spoiler de révélation If it wasn’t included in the synopsis and the authors notes, I would really struggle to ascertain that this is a translation. The grammar and word usage is as good if not better than most original English fanfictions, so massive kudos for that alone. I really enjoy the different elements of the world building and the only gripe I have is that certain settings are a bit rushed leading to a lack of detail in some aspects. MC is surprisingly enjoyable despite my general dislike for scheming “youth” character and while sometimes I scratch my head at certain choices, it’s nothing detrimental to my enjoyment of the story. The thing I’d like to highlight the most is the navigation of emotions. While the original author definitely forced certain aspects of some characters emotions and choices, it’s simply to help tie together points in the plot so nothing too bad. But beyond that, I love the subtleties of emotional change and importance in lots of the conversations. Overall (while trying not to spoil anything); this is a very very good novel that everyone who stumbles across it should definitely give a chance.
the max i can give if is five stars unfortunately, should be 10/5, a real gem, never thought i see a story with such great quality and story development
An amazing translation of a wonderful fanfic, I'm here for the ride as the new chapters are finished. By far the best Hyuga story I have read.
one of the better on going Naruto fanfics rn. I'm honestly surprised this was a translation.
fanfics these good have the curse of being dropped eventually, but this one has not, crossed it has one hundred chapters. excited I am, for its future.
Simple review Had to put this is my favorites as the main character, growth, interactions between characters, and especially the written combat is something to absolutely enjoy. A sucker for good combat and characters interactions.
An MC that's not edgy and actually has a brain? 😱 Well I saw another Naruto fanfic where the MC is also From the hyuga clan and he also doesn't have a system or a golden finger other than the knowledge of the plot Which already sets it above the rest System fanfics And especially the sentient ones really ruin it for me
It’s looking very good so far and i especially like the high character release
A bit slow paced. The translation is good . The story is great 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
A really good one with Hyuga focus. I would like to see how this goes Till the end and hope that you continue this work with a good translation that you have been doing till now.
an anti-hero naruto fanfic that isn’t just 2k words of distilled edginess?! the mc actually seems to use his brain and the translation is awesome, this is worth a read
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idk what to say, this is just Peak.........