Synopsis
Barbara Reylson had all; a warm family, a loving fiance and rich parents, but it all changed with the appearance of the real daughter of Marquis Reylson at her birthday party.
Barbara is a beautiful, arrogant noble lady. She was preparing herself to get her family's business on her birthday but all she got was the harsh truth that she wasn't the real daughter of the Marquis.
Suddenly everything changed in her mansion, her parents' behaviour, her sister's unexpected kindness, and the workers' mocking stares. However, the only thing that didn't change was her fiance, Richard.
After being pushed into the lake, Barbara woke up in a different body of a poor woman, named Kristie, living from theft and was involved with dangerous bandits.
Being stuck in Kristie's body, Barbara returned to her house disguised to find her 'sister' taking her place in everything. Burning with revenge, she collaborated with Kristie to take down the Marquis' family, finding many secrets that would change her life.
Follow Barbara to experience a whirlwind of heartbreak, betrayal, friendship, and love. And to discover more about the secret behind Barbara's real identity and the reason for her body swap with Kristie.
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Écrire un avisDifícil avaliar com tão poucos capítulos. Fundo mundial? Pode jogar a pontuação no lixo quando se supõe romance histórico ou fantasia. De resto, até capítulo 11, uma mudança boa de a intrusa não ser automaticamente a má pessoa. Isso pode vir mais tarde, apesar de já ter sido ditto que ela inveja o relacionamento do casal E boa coisa que o ML tem uma história também.
so far story is interesting got hooked but MC character needs to grow. her attitude drives me nuts, too irrational
the story is so captivating, I'm impatiently waiting for the next chapter to know what happens next.
The story has a good starting point. It needs polishing though. Both in terms of writing, choise of words for example, and character traits. Fl's actions or thought patterns doesn't mirror a successful buisness woman that's been in charge of important contracts for years. Nor a person that's battled with other buissnes ppl and carried the bruden of responsibility for an entire family company. If it's in her character to walk away from a situation like her birthday she should not be describe as an arrogant noble lady and her thought process should be explained. Is it to save he families face? Is it to escape her own humiliation? Why doesn't she question their decision there and then she should be used to unconfortable situations from her time i the buissnes world.
Auteur MIMI24
Got captivated by the cover of the book and surely the first 8 chapters did not disappoint, very interesting