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I don't like clones I hope you aren't offended by the short review.............................................................................
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Best ATG fanfic of all I read, best main character! ...........................................,.........,.............................................................................
Great book for the first 50 chapters before the quality drops significantly. As of the Frozen Cloud Immortal Palace, the focus shifts from his genius and new inventions to harem, sex, and more harem. He actually tries to turn the sect of 2000 women into his harem and that's when my opinion of this book hit an all time low. I just wished the author would have stayed consistent and not changed the focus of the book.
The novel is great and funny, but please stop writing pornography. You are writing chapters of lemons. This is very general. Save your effort with this to advance the novel.
Holy shit. I don't usually read fanfictions but from a huge fan of Against the Gods (my absolute favorite novel), I can only say: holy shit. This novel is pretty good... I like it very much. The story progression is fast but well written and well connected with the original story plot and is also funny some times. The MC is a huge OP character and very narcisistic but as the story is well written, you can't dislike it but you'll like it instead. For the first time, I even purchased the patreon (the highest membership tier) just to continue reading more but alas, now that I have finished reading I need to wait new chapters c.c
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Very good, I really liked it, the plot is incredible, the development of the characters and their personalities is very good, especially the protagonist and the heroines.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
It's an amazing fanfic, I recommend that you all read it. It's one of my favorite atg fanfics. - - -
the beginning of the story is good but as the story continues all he thinks about is how to get women the story starts to decline. it's a shame I hope the mc will follow his goal from the beginning to the end and about women let it be natural and not the mc who tries to get them.
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AWESOME just Awesome, if you are looking for comedy, 'logical aka non chinese logic', not a young master MC and some really amazing 'Action'.............. *cough* and fighting as well, then close the review section immediately and start reading it. You will definitely love it 😘
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Действительно круто, довольно мало фанфиков по ATG, которые не заканчиваются после пары десятков глав. Я заметил этот фанфик ещё давно, когда тут было глав 7? Но читать не стал, потому что был почти уверен, что ещё пару глав и больше глав не будет, но я ошибся. Спасибо автор, что ты есть, и за то, что ты делаешь. Keep going/
if you want to read a fanfic then read this , you will surprised 🤯 to find how amazing it is ❤️...
5 stars it's good, but too much women destroying the plot. And MC like to cook
The beginning chapters from like 1-30 is really good and comical to me. But from there it goes down hill to me. It seems like at that point the author changed the story to the mc gathering women from every where he goes. I’m not interested in reading a dumb harem gathering story right now.
It has one of the greatest starts in a ATG fanfic that I ever read. But after chapter 33 it becomes the same shit of always in this kind of fics. Women that falls in love for no reason or for a demostration of power from part of the MC and the same thropes of this kind of fics. In the first 30 chaptes I thought that was going to be a really good romance with deveopment, because of the way it develops the relationship of Chu Yuechan but after that, the women characters like Qinyue and Cang Yue act out of character, falling in love with the MC for whatever reason that it dosen't explain. I have to say It has some original things and the comedy is really good, but besides that, it is not good for me.
De lejos una historia god muy entretenida de leer vale la pena cada segundo.......................................................................................
I don't like clones I hope you aren't offended by the short review.............................................................................
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Best ATG fanfic of all I read, best main character! ...........................................,.........,.............................................................................
Great book for the first 50 chapters before the quality drops significantly. As of the Frozen Cloud Immortal Palace, the focus shifts from his genius and new inventions to harem, sex, and more harem. He actually tries to turn the sect of 2000 women into his harem and that's when my opinion of this book hit an all time low. I just wished the author would have stayed consistent and not changed the focus of the book.
The novel is great and funny, but please stop writing pornography. You are writing chapters of lemons. This is very general. Save your effort with this to advance the novel.
Holy shit. I don't usually read fanfictions but from a huge fan of Against the Gods (my absolute favorite novel), I can only say: holy shit. This novel is pretty good... I like it very much. The story progression is fast but well written and well connected with the original story plot and is also funny some times. The MC is a huge OP character and very narcisistic but as the story is well written, you can't dislike it but you'll like it instead. For the first time, I even purchased the patreon (the highest membership tier) just to continue reading more but alas, now that I have finished reading I need to wait new chapters c.c
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Nice......................................... . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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Very good, I really liked it, the plot is incredible, the development of the characters and their personalities is very good, especially the protagonist and the heroines.
hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998 so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you
It's an amazing fanfic, I recommend that you all read it. It's one of my favorite atg fanfics. - - -
the beginning of the story is good but as the story continues all he thinks about is how to get women the story starts to decline. it's a shame I hope the mc will follow his goal from the beginning to the end and about women let it be natural and not the mc who tries to get them.
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
AWESOME just Awesome, if you are looking for comedy, 'logical aka non chinese logic', not a young master MC and some really amazing 'Action'.............. *cough* and fighting as well, then close the review section immediately and start reading it. You will definitely love it 😘
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Действительно круто, довольно мало фанфиков по ATG, которые не заканчиваются после пары десятков глав. Я заметил этот фанфик ещё давно, когда тут было глав 7? Но читать не стал, потому что был почти уверен, что ещё пару глав и больше глав не будет, но я ошибся. Спасибо автор, что ты есть, и за то, что ты делаешь. Keep going/
if you want to read a fanfic then read this , you will surprised 🤯 to find how amazing it is ❤️...
5 stars it's good, but too much women destroying the plot. And MC like to cook
The beginning chapters from like 1-30 is really good and comical to me. But from there it goes down hill to me. It seems like at that point the author changed the story to the mc gathering women from every where he goes. I’m not interested in reading a dumb harem gathering story right now.
It has one of the greatest starts in a ATG fanfic that I ever read. But after chapter 33 it becomes the same shit of always in this kind of fics. Women that falls in love for no reason or for a demostration of power from part of the MC and the same thropes of this kind of fics. In the first 30 chaptes I thought that was going to be a really good romance with deveopment, because of the way it develops the relationship of Chu Yuechan but after that, the women characters like Qinyue and Cang Yue act out of character, falling in love with the MC for whatever reason that it dosen't explain. I have to say It has some original things and the comedy is really good, but besides that, it is not good for me.
De lejos una historia god muy entretenida de leer vale la pena cada segundo.......................................................................................
I'll give myself five stars, obviously.