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De lejos una historia god muy entretenida de leer vale la pena cada segundo.......................................................................................
Decent writing, funny, cool Mc. Being a genius reincarnate with supernatural energy, I wish he would recreate some of the awesome anime moves he saw in his last life but that kind of thing isn't the focus of the novel so that's just my bias speaking. Probably the first thing I'd do in his situation is see if I can create a rasengan or something.
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I wasn't expecting this story to be so fun to read. The MC is smart (but not too much), and much more patient than Yun Che. Honestly, the only thing I wish there was more of would be intereactions with known characters, but now that (spoilers to chapter 11) we are in the main continent then I believe things will only get better. The writing quality is actually quite good and there are very little grammar mistakes. Hopefully the author can keep the consistent updates, because overall this story is really good if you like ATG.
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. The good thing about this book is that it doesn't follow the original plot. The main character knows how to solve problems in that world, most of them with violence and blackmail, which makes it fun to read.
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This fanfic is great, especially the first chapter, lol! The plot is interesting, and the main character isn't bad at all.
This ATG fanfic is so good that it might be the most entertaining thing I have read in recent memory. This is a good Crack fic with an interesting plot. Hopefully, the story keeps entertaining me as it has so far.
Very good fanfic, I just hope there is no element of separation between the MC and his women, because the element of separation occurs too much in the OG story
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Muy buena historia me gusta bastante como se va desarrollando la trama y la interacción de los personajes ojalá no abandonen y continúen escribiendo este libro
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Overall was a good read. Just too much reference, it's putting me off from. Worth reading if you can handle the reference.
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Me gusta mucho hasta ahora y he leído muchos fanfics de atg Bro ,mas ,más,más,más,más capítulos 😃😸👍👍👍😸😸😸👍😸👍👍👍👍😸👍😸😸👍👍👍👍😸👍😸😸😸😸👍😸
It has one of the greatest starts in a ATG fanfic that I ever read. But after chapter 33 it becomes the same shit of always in this kind of fics. Women that falls in love for no reason or for a demostration of power from part of the MC and the same thropes of this kind of fics. In the first 30 chaptes I thought that was going to be a really good romance with deveopment, because of the way it develops the relationship of Chu Yuechan but after that, the women characters like Qinyue and Cang Yue act out of character, falling in love with the MC for whatever reason that it dosen't explain. I have to say It has some original things and the comedy is really good, but besides that, it is not good for me.
De lejos una historia god muy entretenida de leer vale la pena cada segundo.......................................................................................
Decent writing, funny, cool Mc. Being a genius reincarnate with supernatural energy, I wish he would recreate some of the awesome anime moves he saw in his last life but that kind of thing isn't the focus of the novel so that's just my bias speaking. Probably the first thing I'd do in his situation is see if I can create a rasengan or something.
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I wasn't expecting this story to be so fun to read. The MC is smart (but not too much), and much more patient than Yun Che. Honestly, the only thing I wish there was more of would be intereactions with known characters, but now that (spoilers to chapter 11) we are in the main continent then I believe things will only get better. The writing quality is actually quite good and there are very little grammar mistakes. Hopefully the author can keep the consistent updates, because overall this story is really good if you like ATG.
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. The good thing about this book is that it doesn't follow the original plot. The main character knows how to solve problems in that world, most of them with violence and blackmail, which makes it fun to read.
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This fanfic is great, especially the first chapter, lol! The plot is interesting, and the main character isn't bad at all.
This ATG fanfic is so good that it might be the most entertaining thing I have read in recent memory. This is a good Crack fic with an interesting plot. Hopefully, the story keeps entertaining me as it has so far.
Very good fanfic, I just hope there is no element of separation between the MC and his women, because the element of separation occurs too much in the OG story
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Muy buena historia me gusta bastante como se va desarrollando la trama y la interacción de los personajes ojalá no abandonen y continúen escribiendo este libro
Spoiler de révélation Overall was a good read. Just too much reference, it's putting me off from. Worth reading if you can handle the reference.
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Spoiler de révélation Me gusta mucho hasta ahora y he leído muchos fanfics de atg Bro ,mas ,más,más,más,más capítulos 😃😸👍👍👍😸😸😸👍😸👍👍👍👍😸👍😸😸👍👍👍👍😸👍😸😸😸😸👍😸
It has one of the greatest starts in a ATG fanfic that I ever read. But after chapter 33 it becomes the same shit of always in this kind of fics. Women that falls in love for no reason or for a demostration of power from part of the MC and the same thropes of this kind of fics. In the first 30 chaptes I thought that was going to be a really good romance with deveopment, because of the way it develops the relationship of Chu Yuechan but after that, the women characters like Qinyue and Cang Yue act out of character, falling in love with the MC for whatever reason that it dosen't explain. I have to say It has some original things and the comedy is really good, but besides that, it is not good for me.