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Interesting story though by making his power grow by reaping souls you locked any other form of devolopment by training, what happens when he kills everything in his area, goes somewhere else to exterminate the fauna and/or people? It either makes it seems there are respawns for animals/people or the story is forced in such a way where it becomes a inevitability
author here, shamelessly rating this a 5. This is my first fanfic, ive been wanting to try for a while. suggestions are accepted and appreciated. ill do my best to update weekly.
Author why it's takes to long to update a new chapter you could have given us a warning in the first place
Interesting story though by making his power grow by reaping souls you locked any other form of devolopment by training, what happens when he kills everything in his area, goes somewhere else to exterminate the fauna and/or people? It either makes it seems there are respawns for animals/people or the story is forced in such a way where it becomes a inevitability
author here, shamelessly rating this a 5. This is my first fanfic, ive been wanting to try for a while. suggestions are accepted and appreciated. ill do my best to update weekly.
Author why it's takes to long to update a new chapter you could have given us a warning in the first place