Reviews of Immortality: Raising an Ant Queen to Cultivate by increasing stat points by Smoke Painted - Webnovel

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RedKaizer

Even though the story can consider lack luster but for some reason this novel is one of my most anticipated to read every week. I don't even remembered what the MC's cheat or golden finger anymore because except using it to view attributes but still the story is good though. The ending was rushed due to the author not feeling well....that his excuse so the the novel ends abruptly.

4d
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Azriclu
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It's unique in ways a struggle to articulate. Weak to strong steady progression that has more power spikes than I'd like but only one that can truly be considered broken and it is...somewhat limited. Great series, author says it has stopped but hope to see more in the future

23d
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TGKxNasty

I would like to get in touch to see about lending a hand if needed if you enjoy your piece an wouldn't mind continuing this novel it quickly grew an seeing it completed an re done to fix Lil errors would be a great thing especially with your thoughts on Qin niu were the world's possibility for growth an longevity could be endless for a foreseeable future an interesting expansion branching and creating entertainment for a wider variety of humans

1mth
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TGKxNasty

man this book is a big but great change and I would love to see more chapters

1mth
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Carl_Ricafrente

The flow of the story was quite smooth and addicting, the only problem that I notices is the confusing translation — I had no idea if his pet was ant or termites.

3mth
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Uselesschild92

I hope there's another book. Thank you for this one.

3mth
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N3xUs
LV 13 Badge

the story is super great and it's a little bit sad about the sudden ending because of your health issues. I also wish that you can recover and comeback again. PS: Waiting for you to continue the story 😊

4mth
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DimensionalDaddy

very good unfortunately ended very quickly and without a clear end.

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4mth
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CJMCC26
LV 15 Badge

Anyone know why it was finished like this!

4mth
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Asgar1224

good novel with potential.But being ended at mid, it is such a huge loss. I hope that the writer ask help for completing the novel if he is I'll and so that the novel gets justice as the novel background and story has deep potential

5mth
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Elvis_Iwunze

A nice novel, but a rough ending. And you deviated from the main focus of the book, which was cultivating an ant Queen by adding starts points and also forgot about your gold finger.,

5mth
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Julie_Alegre

Great story relaxing ... [img=update][img=fp]

5mth
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WackyT
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Great read, shame it had stopped. If you like something different, go for it.

5mth
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Norman_Givens

this is reading at its best ,magnificence is the only way too describe it,cant wait to see what's next.

5mth
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Daoist1bqKpk

sometimes you just want a story without super power jumps

5mth
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Sven_Erickson

nice character growth. the writing style changes after a little bit. i preferred the original style, but ive gotten over it.

6mth
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Eric_Sauber

well written, very enjoyable to read. ,..............

6mth
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Henry_Juan

I absolutely loved this novel and am deeply saddened that it ended so soon it was just getting to a good bit and just ended so although an amazing book if you don't want to be left unsatisfied and disappointed don't read it but on the flip side if you want a short and amazing read i would definitely recommend

6mth
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_Andy_101

Great book would recommend to any one looking for something new

6mth
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Clay_Osborn

this book was a fantastic read and I would recommend it to others if they want to read a decent book that is not too long. it would have been nice if the author could have ended the book better and not on a massive cliff hanger.

6mth
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ProfManny

nicely written and very engaging. it makes you feel the scene and characters. once start reading your'e hooked until to the last chapter. well done.... Bravo

6mth
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P_Paq
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Enjoying the story 👍 keep it up author ✍️ [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

6mth
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Patheror

overall good story so far. my issue is that it seems like author forgot about the system-like stats, so it kinda changed focus of story in my eyes.

6mth
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Nighty
LV 14 Badge

Translation is so bad that its barely readable, story is somewhat original due to the fact that it is about insect taming, but the rest of the story is an amalgamation of clichees.

6mth
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Tardtastic

complete trash. The ant is a termite and the termite is an ant. Machine translate at its finest.

7mth
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Deeznuts69_

overall pretty good, it's just that ant/termite and bee/hornet keep getting mixed up

7mth
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Clay_Osborn

I have been enjoying this book quite well and I love how the story seems to speed up then it slows down quickly.

7mth
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Thomas_Plocher

Would get full marks but idk if he has an ant or a termite and the fact that you go back and forth between the two is starting to get annoying otherwise a great story

7mth
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Ak_Gamer_Fourth

in chapter 249 MC to a citizen of other clan/ country which is it in war with an Evil person just because he (reported him/patriotic to country) an enemy nation. I didn't understand is every person in path of your destination is an Evil person. did you this flaw for MC intentionally or it's your view or mistake in translation and also MC panel for farming why don't he fouces more on Farming? he has huge advantage he can be immortal just by that what's to catch did everyone has it or what? also is it MC first life or not? btw like this novel a lot I'm not complaining just some confusion it has far less than any other I read thank you for your hard work 😁

7mth
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StitchedUpTomat0

when a professional youtube shorts yapper becomes a webnovel writer...all else are very good

8mth
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RedKaizer

Even though the story can consider lack luster but for some reason this novel is one of my most anticipated to read every week. I don't even remembered what the MC's cheat or golden finger anymore because except using it to view attributes but still the story is good though. The ending was rushed due to the author not feeling well....that his excuse so the the novel ends abruptly.

4d
Voir 0 Réponses
Azriclu
LV 13 Badge

It's unique in ways a struggle to articulate. Weak to strong steady progression that has more power spikes than I'd like but only one that can truly be considered broken and it is...somewhat limited. Great series, author says it has stopped but hope to see more in the future

23d
Voir 0 Réponses
TGKxNasty

I would like to get in touch to see about lending a hand if needed if you enjoy your piece an wouldn't mind continuing this novel it quickly grew an seeing it completed an re done to fix Lil errors would be a great thing especially with your thoughts on Qin niu were the world's possibility for growth an longevity could be endless for a foreseeable future an interesting expansion branching and creating entertainment for a wider variety of humans

1mth
Voir 0 Réponses
TGKxNasty

man this book is a big but great change and I would love to see more chapters

1mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Carl_Ricafrente

The flow of the story was quite smooth and addicting, the only problem that I notices is the confusing translation — I had no idea if his pet was ant or termites.

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Uselesschild92

I hope there's another book. Thank you for this one.

3mth
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N3xUs
LV 13 Badge

the story is super great and it's a little bit sad about the sudden ending because of your health issues. I also wish that you can recover and comeback again. PS: Waiting for you to continue the story 😊

4mth
Voir 0 Réponses
DimensionalDaddy

very good unfortunately ended very quickly and without a clear end.

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4mth
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CJMCC26
LV 15 Badge

Anyone know why it was finished like this!

4mth
Voir 3 Réponses
Asgar1224

good novel with potential.But being ended at mid, it is such a huge loss. I hope that the writer ask help for completing the novel if he is I'll and so that the novel gets justice as the novel background and story has deep potential

5mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Elvis_Iwunze

A nice novel, but a rough ending. And you deviated from the main focus of the book, which was cultivating an ant Queen by adding starts points and also forgot about your gold finger.,

5mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Julie_Alegre

Great story relaxing ... [img=update][img=fp]

5mth
Voir 0 Réponses
WackyT
LV 14 Badge

Great read, shame it had stopped. If you like something different, go for it.

5mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Norman_Givens

this is reading at its best ,magnificence is the only way too describe it,cant wait to see what's next.

5mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Daoist1bqKpk

sometimes you just want a story without super power jumps

5mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Sven_Erickson

nice character growth. the writing style changes after a little bit. i preferred the original style, but ive gotten over it.

6mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Eric_Sauber

well written, very enjoyable to read. ,..............

6mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Henry_Juan

I absolutely loved this novel and am deeply saddened that it ended so soon it was just getting to a good bit and just ended so although an amazing book if you don't want to be left unsatisfied and disappointed don't read it but on the flip side if you want a short and amazing read i would definitely recommend

6mth
Voir 0 Réponses
_Andy_101

Great book would recommend to any one looking for something new

6mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Clay_Osborn

this book was a fantastic read and I would recommend it to others if they want to read a decent book that is not too long. it would have been nice if the author could have ended the book better and not on a massive cliff hanger.

6mth
Voir 0 Réponses
ProfManny

nicely written and very engaging. it makes you feel the scene and characters. once start reading your'e hooked until to the last chapter. well done.... Bravo

6mth
Voir 0 Réponses
P_Paq
LV 15 Badge

Enjoying the story 👍 keep it up author ✍️ [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

6mth
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Patheror

overall good story so far. my issue is that it seems like author forgot about the system-like stats, so it kinda changed focus of story in my eyes.

6mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Nighty
LV 14 Badge

Translation is so bad that its barely readable, story is somewhat original due to the fact that it is about insect taming, but the rest of the story is an amalgamation of clichees.

6mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Tardtastic

complete trash. The ant is a termite and the termite is an ant. Machine translate at its finest.

7mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Deeznuts69_

overall pretty good, it's just that ant/termite and bee/hornet keep getting mixed up

7mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Clay_Osborn

I have been enjoying this book quite well and I love how the story seems to speed up then it slows down quickly.

7mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Thomas_Plocher

Would get full marks but idk if he has an ant or a termite and the fact that you go back and forth between the two is starting to get annoying otherwise a great story

7mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Ak_Gamer_Fourth

in chapter 249 MC to a citizen of other clan/ country which is it in war with an Evil person just because he (reported him/patriotic to country) an enemy nation. I didn't understand is every person in path of your destination is an Evil person. did you this flaw for MC intentionally or it's your view or mistake in translation and also MC panel for farming why don't he fouces more on Farming? he has huge advantage he can be immortal just by that what's to catch did everyone has it or what? also is it MC first life or not? btw like this novel a lot I'm not complaining just some confusion it has far less than any other I read thank you for your hard work 😁

7mth
Voir 4 Réponses
StitchedUpTomat0

when a professional youtube shorts yapper becomes a webnovel writer...all else are very good

8mth
Voir 0 Réponses
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