do you just like censoring half the chapter and duplicating
why does it feel like there's a part missing?
what's with the random cuts in sentences to start a new line
I thought Ophelia was a zombie why is she holding her breath
The word enigmatic loses it's meaning when used so much. Open a thesaurus dude.
i know he's the villain and they're the heroines but are they on the same side or are they enemies
what mutation did he choose for his mama veins? what asteri variant did the 3 become ? dhruv isn't the only one who has more questions the more he knows. there are so many gaps in information that it's actually not funny, like whole chapters are just pulled out at random. don't get me wrong I'm loving the storyline, progression, character building, world building, etc. but you're missing so many little details that can be valuable or not well never know. some could alter the course of the fights or just provide you with an extra chapter or two to write about explaining how useful or not something is.
what ability did he get from Alaric ? you keep glossing over it . first the 2nd main quest came then you just completely skipped what he got in this chapter
I've been waiting for the next chapter but I came to the comments to see if anyone asked about it but then I seen this. hope you get better . this part may sound insensitive, but you still alive?
what ink blade isn't it in the shop
Immortality: Raising an Ant Queen to Cultivate by increasing stat points
Eastern · Smoke Painted