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Good fic 👌.. chapters are a bit short. the premise and story are amazing Keep Updating.
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Five star story, I've read the previous one and oh boy, if this is a revamped version of that, then this is gonna be Peak! well if only the author can show consistency and upload more often than once every new moon that is. Also, it goes without saying we need a flashback of Karna and Shizue's journey to flesh out their relationship, maybe the encounter with Black? or even the training would be nice, even though we've got a glimpse of it. Also, I hope you can finish this story as there are too many stories you've yet to even reach five chapters, well I'm not one to say that anyways😅😅😂 Also, I love Karna x Shizue!!
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Goood one. I see you have changed unique skills, thats good. I hope you do not drop this novel half way. Hope to see how good this tensura fan fic comes out in end. .
First of all, I plan to finish this. And as always we should give ourselves five stars, we should validate ourselves first to be validated by others, while I Don't care about other's validation, this is my confidence..You should be confident too..
Good fic 👌.. chapters are a bit short. the premise and story are amazing Keep Updating.
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Five star story, I've read the previous one and oh boy, if this is a revamped version of that, then this is gonna be Peak! well if only the author can show consistency and upload more often than once every new moon that is. Also, it goes without saying we need a flashback of Karna and Shizue's journey to flesh out their relationship, maybe the encounter with Black? or even the training would be nice, even though we've got a glimpse of it. Also, I hope you can finish this story as there are too many stories you've yet to even reach five chapters, well I'm not one to say that anyways😅😅😂 Also, I love Karna x Shizue!!
Spoiler de révélation Goood one. I see you have changed unique skills, thats good. I hope you do not drop this novel half way. Hope to see how good this tensura fan fic comes out in end. .
First of all, I plan to finish this. And as always we should give ourselves five stars, we should validate ourselves first to be validated by others, while I Don't care about other's validation, this is my confidence..You should be confident too..
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