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I immediately got hooked from the synopsis, the main storyline didn't fail either. A book worth reading.
the synopsis is intrudging bad the chapters I have read so far is intresting .keep it up 😊
Good Synopsis. There is a bit of a lore dump at the start and it does some telling vs showing, but I believe as the story goes on, and the author gets a good feel for the writing, that this will change and improve. Overall, worth a read.
I came into this novel with high expectations based off the reviews it got, and it did not disappoint. Right off the first chapter, I just kept going and going and going til I hit the paywalled chapter. This is my early review, and I'm here to tell you that you won't be disappointed. Kudos, author. Love this work so much![img=recommend]
'The Forsaken Ones' is straight-up fire! 🌟 The synopsis got me intrigued, but once I started reading, I was hooked. The author's storytelling is on point, and the characters, especially Henry, are lit 🔥 Their backstories hit you right in the feels, and the attention to detail is next level. Can't wait to see what's next from this author! Keep slaying!
I enjoyed the story till the last chapter. The synopsis piqued my interest, and from the moment I started reading, I realized this was going to be a standout piece. The author did a great job crafting the narrative. The characters are well-developed.
Reading the synopsis of the story interested me, but as soon as I began reading the story I knew this was going to be a gem. The author did nice job with the story. The characters are written good. Good job author.
The first chapter of this story immediately pulls the reader into a completely new world. The back stories of the characters are touching, and the manner in which the author describes every detail of the character's actions is excellent. All the characters in the story are very unique, especially Henry. I can't wait to read this story further. Keep up the good work author!
Yo!, not so shameless author here so I'll rate this 5 stars! I hope you enjoy reading. you are encouraged to voice out opinions and whatever you might want to say.
This is one of my favorite genres. Fantasy and historical together is on another level for real. And personally I think it's a hard one to write. But the author has presented their story immaculately.
I immediately got hooked from the synopsis, the main storyline didn't fail either. A book worth reading.
the synopsis is intrudging bad the chapters I have read so far is intresting .keep it up 😊
Good Synopsis. There is a bit of a lore dump at the start and it does some telling vs showing, but I believe as the story goes on, and the author gets a good feel for the writing, that this will change and improve. Overall, worth a read.
I came into this novel with high expectations based off the reviews it got, and it did not disappoint. Right off the first chapter, I just kept going and going and going til I hit the paywalled chapter. This is my early review, and I'm here to tell you that you won't be disappointed. Kudos, author. Love this work so much![img=recommend]
'The Forsaken Ones' is straight-up fire! 🌟 The synopsis got me intrigued, but once I started reading, I was hooked. The author's storytelling is on point, and the characters, especially Henry, are lit 🔥 Their backstories hit you right in the feels, and the attention to detail is next level. Can't wait to see what's next from this author! Keep slaying!
I enjoyed the story till the last chapter. The synopsis piqued my interest, and from the moment I started reading, I realized this was going to be a standout piece. The author did a great job crafting the narrative. The characters are well-developed.
Reading the synopsis of the story interested me, but as soon as I began reading the story I knew this was going to be a gem. The author did nice job with the story. The characters are written good. Good job author.
The first chapter of this story immediately pulls the reader into a completely new world. The back stories of the characters are touching, and the manner in which the author describes every detail of the character's actions is excellent. All the characters in the story are very unique, especially Henry. I can't wait to read this story further. Keep up the good work author!
Yo!, not so shameless author here so I'll rate this 5 stars! I hope you enjoy reading. you are encouraged to voice out opinions and whatever you might want to say.
This is one of my favorite genres. Fantasy and historical together is on another level for real. And personally I think it's a hard one to write. But the author has presented their story immaculately.