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The Mc has character development, don’t expect him to be everything you want in the beginning. The Author clearly improves his writing and you can tell he works hard on the plot. I would suggest giving it a chance and seeing how you feel about it. No system and nothing too OP.
shocked this book isn't getting more love, in a sea of shitty Chinese translations this book is an absolute godsend. I think this is possibly the best one piece fanfic I have read on here. Definitely top 5.
I wake up every morning and see another chapter of this wonderful story uploaded, It honestly one of the things that gets me out of bed.[img=exp]
I like this story because it’s a one piece fan fiction that isn’t a translationt and because the author doesn’t mainly focus on the main character but also on worl building and other characters like it’s most recent chapter and how it focused on big mom and her family and the aftermath of her them failing to protect Toto land from skiki
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Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!! Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!! Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!! Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!! Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!!
I would like to say that this is one of the best stories... no, one of the best novels that I have had the pleasure of reading. To say anything less would be a disservice to both the story that has been written and the author and everyone else who supports it.
One of the best or if the best One Piece Fanfic out here. Have read many but dropped em all before reaching 3 digits. This is is one of the 5 Fan fics iam eagerly waiting every day for a new update. Kudos to the author for such a wonderful work. Don't Hold back. Give it your best like always.
This story keeps it's pace nicely through the One Piece world with interesting and most importantly, sustainable changes to the storyline/history of the world. Believable changes to characters with backstory driven reasoning and a decent amount of progression in strength for the characters the author follows.
JUST READ IT. Has genuine character develoment, author is not afriad of changing the canon timeline, which is good, whats the purpose of a fanfic is to change things.
Review update: The writing quality is much better than I remembered and the characters feels so alive they have personalities and the author has great knowledge about the one piece word and does not even afraid to add oc antagonist to the novel with op powers to keep it interesting. And the other great thing is that it is not a harem like many other one piece fanfic. I just wanted to write this down as my token of gratitude.
Great storytelling man. I love how you don't shy away from creating butterflies in your story, and creating new storylines from the MC's effects on the world.
Gooòoòooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Love the fic, but at the rate where going canon is going to start at chapter 500. It’s gonna be a long read.
honestly i really liked this novel but it is not my type the fact that Mc is whole into brotherhood with doflamingo I can't accept as you know one piece world is truly tragic world death slavery abuse of authority and many more crimes but out of all things you had to make mc dream of becoming a king do you know how much blood will be spilled and lets not get into mc whole personality he is a merger of two souls one kind and another Dark but you showed us that mc wholeheartedly understand the suffering of common people but what about his brother as you know doflamingo is cruel to his core even mc could not change it but still mc says that he will make his brother king so no that is not how i like it
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author can you make ross's sword eat devil fruit, i kind of wanna see what will happen
Best fan fic that post daily What more can I ask👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Это лучшее что я читал по One piece. Очень нравится Росс с его преданностью, отношением к семье. Интересно еще то что Росс невсегда добивается своих целей, как например принятие Эйса в семю.
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pretty good. I'm just feed up of this sentence 'unwavering determination' like what the heck I saw like 7 times in one chapter....
Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This is one of the better one piece stories on the app. The update stability is great with a chapter coming out every other day. The quality of the writing is great with rarely any misspellings (it really rarely ever happens). The story itself is fun as the main character doesn’t take a secondary character role to help doffy more while still keeping the main intent of the story where the mc helps his brother become the king or leader of the world.
just read this. this is good just read this. this is good just read this. this is good just read this. this is good just read this. this is good just read this. this is good just read this. this is good just read this. this is good
Been reading this for a while, I have to say it's 1 of the best works ever. No exaggeration, 👍👍 Keep on doing you author and you'll keep on getting stoned...⭐😆😂
one word, excellent. Stable update, Likable MC and characters, some decisions are questionable, but we can't put the MC in a situation where he can always choose the optimal path to solve a problem so that's a plus. If you're looking for a One Piece ff give this a shot you won't be disappointed. I won't give too many spoilers, but I'm happy that some characters here had the chance to live. That alone is worth it 5/5 "I'll raze everything to the ground if my family members are in danger." - MC probably.
why isn't there more likes on this fanfic, this is like one of the best one piece fanfic i have ever read, good work author, looking forward for more chaptere, i just want to suggest if you could give mc a second devil fruit, like how there is a theory that black beard has 2 hearts thats why he can have the power of 2 devil fruit, its just the suggestion, loved your fanfixc looking forward for more
The Mc has character development, don’t expect him to be everything you want in the beginning. The Author clearly improves his writing and you can tell he works hard on the plot. I would suggest giving it a chance and seeing how you feel about it. No system and nothing too OP.
shocked this book isn't getting more love, in a sea of shitty Chinese translations this book is an absolute godsend. I think this is possibly the best one piece fanfic I have read on here. Definitely top 5.
I wake up every morning and see another chapter of this wonderful story uploaded, It honestly one of the things that gets me out of bed.[img=exp]
I like this story because it’s a one piece fan fiction that isn’t a translationt and because the author doesn’t mainly focus on the main character but also on worl building and other characters like it’s most recent chapter and how it focused on big mom and her family and the aftermath of her them failing to protect Toto land from skiki
Spoiler de révélation Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!! Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!! Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!! Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!! Good kepp going !!!!!!!!!!!!!
I would like to say that this is one of the best stories... no, one of the best novels that I have had the pleasure of reading. To say anything less would be a disservice to both the story that has been written and the author and everyone else who supports it.
One of the best or if the best One Piece Fanfic out here. Have read many but dropped em all before reaching 3 digits. This is is one of the 5 Fan fics iam eagerly waiting every day for a new update. Kudos to the author for such a wonderful work. Don't Hold back. Give it your best like always.
This story keeps it's pace nicely through the One Piece world with interesting and most importantly, sustainable changes to the storyline/history of the world. Believable changes to characters with backstory driven reasoning and a decent amount of progression in strength for the characters the author follows.
JUST READ IT. Has genuine character develoment, author is not afriad of changing the canon timeline, which is good, whats the purpose of a fanfic is to change things.
Review update: The writing quality is much better than I remembered and the characters feels so alive they have personalities and the author has great knowledge about the one piece word and does not even afraid to add oc antagonist to the novel with op powers to keep it interesting. And the other great thing is that it is not a harem like many other one piece fanfic. I just wanted to write this down as my token of gratitude.
Great storytelling man. I love how you don't shy away from creating butterflies in your story, and creating new storylines from the MC's effects on the world.
Gooòoòooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Love the fic, but at the rate where going canon is going to start at chapter 500. It’s gonna be a long read.
honestly i really liked this novel but it is not my type the fact that Mc is whole into brotherhood with doflamingo I can't accept as you know one piece world is truly tragic world death slavery abuse of authority and many more crimes but out of all things you had to make mc dream of becoming a king do you know how much blood will be spilled and lets not get into mc whole personality he is a merger of two souls one kind and another Dark but you showed us that mc wholeheartedly understand the suffering of common people but what about his brother as you know doflamingo is cruel to his core even mc could not change it but still mc says that he will make his brother king so no that is not how i like it
[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
author can you make ross's sword eat devil fruit, i kind of wanna see what will happen
Best fan fic that post daily What more can I ask👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Это лучшее что я читал по One piece. Очень нравится Росс с его преданностью, отношением к семье. Интересно еще то что Росс невсегда добивается своих целей, как например принятие Эйса в семю.
Spoiler de révélation pretty good. I'm just feed up of this sentence 'unwavering determination' like what the heck I saw like 7 times in one chapter....
Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
This is one of the better one piece stories on the app. The update stability is great with a chapter coming out every other day. The quality of the writing is great with rarely any misspellings (it really rarely ever happens). The story itself is fun as the main character doesn’t take a secondary character role to help doffy more while still keeping the main intent of the story where the mc helps his brother become the king or leader of the world.
just read this. this is good just read this. this is good just read this. this is good just read this. this is good just read this. this is good just read this. this is good just read this. this is good just read this. this is good
Been reading this for a while, I have to say it's 1 of the best works ever. No exaggeration, 👍👍 Keep on doing you author and you'll keep on getting stoned...⭐😆😂
one word, excellent. Stable update, Likable MC and characters, some decisions are questionable, but we can't put the MC in a situation where he can always choose the optimal path to solve a problem so that's a plus. If you're looking for a One Piece ff give this a shot you won't be disappointed. I won't give too many spoilers, but I'm happy that some characters here had the chance to live. That alone is worth it 5/5 "I'll raze everything to the ground if my family members are in danger." - MC probably.
why isn't there more likes on this fanfic, this is like one of the best one piece fanfic i have ever read, good work author, looking forward for more chaptere, i just want to suggest if you could give mc a second devil fruit, like how there is a theory that black beard has 2 hearts thats why he can have the power of 2 devil fruit, its just the suggestion, loved your fanfixc looking forward for more