Reviews of Harry Potter: The combat instructor by AssClappicus - Webnovel

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JSirMixalotL

Another interesting idea, another AI translation that is annoying to read. If yoh have no problem with that you should give the story a try

7mth
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nobody189

a combat professor without any combat experience🤮🤮😆😆

8mth
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hiatusy
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good read so far. hopefully it won't be dropped.

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8mth
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Darkiling

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8mth
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Starry_Sky_0213

man I've never read such a boring novel in my life like nothing was good nothing was bad just pure I wish this story would end already vibes the whole time. like seriously the mc is useless he doesn't train he doesn't try to get strong only taking the easy way out nothing special happens, the mc is a rock and feels like one the story flow is just a normal guy doing normal things in a normal boring way

8mth
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David19687

the translations feels like it getts worse and worse every chapter the gender of the mc switches multipel times and at this point its a chore to keep reading so im dropping it.

9mth
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Tim_QQQ

Its AI translated im pretty sure. the writing is much better than MTL but its still clearly some trashy chinese novel. also, the AI translated the spells into proper english so you get the mc using fantastic spells such as "flames come out!" *vomits in mouth*

9mth
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Hippo9999

This story is good. The writing is commendable all the way till chapter 36. From chapter 37 and beyond, spelling mistakes, gender-benders, grammar mistakes, and odd phrases become visible. It’s almost like the translation gets worse and worse. A couple of chapters include hard to read paragraphs, but otherwise the story is good.

9mth
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Daoist4nO38i

Me ha gustado mucho la verdad, me parece parece interesante lo que se propone........................áaaaaaaaaaasssssssssaaasssaassaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaajdkdksakskdjkslalsjdjdjsklalsjsdjjkdkslsksjdjddlslaksjdjskslsksjdj

9mth
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Gray224

overall it's not a bad story just a few bits that could be checked to make the reading smoother and constant gender change of the MC drag it down

9mth
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Whadyamean

Just find this translation weird as the person who did so seems to not know English all that well, put it through a translator or just couldn’t care to go back and fix mistakes. It feels and reads like an above average native English chinese author, which although bearable isn‘t all that good. who made their work English to grab a larger audience. I’m all for translations however going back theough chapters at least once would be nice as it stands the grammar severely inhubits the characterization. Not to mention that if you don’t read nonsensical books with weird grammar you’ll barely have any idea of what’s going on. Overall just find it a little lazy which because of the neglect has the characterization and overall worldbuilding suffer. It also makes you feel dumber as with all badly translated works you have to pick iut what makes sense slowing down your reading quite a bit.

11mth
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ChibiPanda65

Haven’t actually read it so I just gave five stars but was wondering if there’s romance in this

11mth
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Hmmmmmmmh

is it good ??????????!!!!!!?!?!!!!!!!!!!

11mth
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aragis

not bad beginning, but rather is bold mc. he wants to steal sorting hat. which 1000 years old, there must way summon, mark thief... magical world after all. original name?

11mth
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1stDrunkenImmortal

How do you become a combat teacher if you never seen combat

Spoiler de révélation
11mth
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Mortal_God

I want to ask beforeI read this. is this reincarnation or transmigration or just self insert?

11mth
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interven

raw name ?....................................................................................................................................

11mth
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WaitWhoWhat

Word count chapter. There's not much more to say.

11mth
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AssClappicus

shameful 5 stars liked the story so i decided to translate it

11mth
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JSirMixalotL

Another interesting idea, another AI translation that is annoying to read. If yoh have no problem with that you should give the story a try

7mth
Voir 0 Réponses
nobody189

a combat professor without any combat experience🤮🤮😆😆

8mth
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hiatusy
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good read so far. hopefully it won't be dropped.

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8mth
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Darkiling

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8mth
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Starry_Sky_0213

man I've never read such a boring novel in my life like nothing was good nothing was bad just pure I wish this story would end already vibes the whole time. like seriously the mc is useless he doesn't train he doesn't try to get strong only taking the easy way out nothing special happens, the mc is a rock and feels like one the story flow is just a normal guy doing normal things in a normal boring way

8mth
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David19687

the translations feels like it getts worse and worse every chapter the gender of the mc switches multipel times and at this point its a chore to keep reading so im dropping it.

9mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Tim_QQQ

Its AI translated im pretty sure. the writing is much better than MTL but its still clearly some trashy chinese novel. also, the AI translated the spells into proper english so you get the mc using fantastic spells such as "flames come out!" *vomits in mouth*

9mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Hippo9999

This story is good. The writing is commendable all the way till chapter 36. From chapter 37 and beyond, spelling mistakes, gender-benders, grammar mistakes, and odd phrases become visible. It’s almost like the translation gets worse and worse. A couple of chapters include hard to read paragraphs, but otherwise the story is good.

9mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Daoist4nO38i

Me ha gustado mucho la verdad, me parece parece interesante lo que se propone........................áaaaaaaaaaasssssssssaaasssaassaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaajdkdksakskdjkslalsjdjdjsklalsjsdjjkdkslsksjdjddlslaksjdjskslsksjdj

9mth
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Gray224

overall it's not a bad story just a few bits that could be checked to make the reading smoother and constant gender change of the MC drag it down

9mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Whadyamean

Just find this translation weird as the person who did so seems to not know English all that well, put it through a translator or just couldn’t care to go back and fix mistakes. It feels and reads like an above average native English chinese author, which although bearable isn‘t all that good. who made their work English to grab a larger audience. I’m all for translations however going back theough chapters at least once would be nice as it stands the grammar severely inhubits the characterization. Not to mention that if you don’t read nonsensical books with weird grammar you’ll barely have any idea of what’s going on. Overall just find it a little lazy which because of the neglect has the characterization and overall worldbuilding suffer. It also makes you feel dumber as with all badly translated works you have to pick iut what makes sense slowing down your reading quite a bit.

11mth
Voir 8 Réponses
ChibiPanda65

Haven’t actually read it so I just gave five stars but was wondering if there’s romance in this

11mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Hmmmmmmmh

is it good ??????????!!!!!!?!?!!!!!!!!!!

11mth
Voir 0 Réponses
aragis

not bad beginning, but rather is bold mc. he wants to steal sorting hat. which 1000 years old, there must way summon, mark thief... magical world after all. original name?

11mth
Voir 1 Réponses
1stDrunkenImmortal

How do you become a combat teacher if you never seen combat

Spoiler de révélation
11mth
Voir 2 Réponses
Mortal_God

I want to ask beforeI read this. is this reincarnation or transmigration or just self insert?

11mth
Voir 2 Réponses
interven

raw name ?....................................................................................................................................

11mth
Voir 3 Réponses
WaitWhoWhat

Word count chapter. There's not much more to say.

11mth
Voir 7 Réponses
AssClappicus

shameful 5 stars liked the story so i decided to translate it

11mth
Voir 3 Réponses