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honestly one of my favorites it's funny and has a great selections of characters
I somewhat enjoyed the novel, but there are issues that made it hard to continue. An 8-year-old acting like an adult is unrealistic, especially in a world with magic and gods—why didn’t anyone wonder if Harry was possessed? The way he talks to his grandparents was frustrating and off-putting. While I understand the portrayal of the British wizarding community, his behavior was just annoying to read. Additionally, while the grammar and spelling aren’t as bad as MTL, they’re still distracting at times."
I usually don't summarize a fanfic without reading 100 chapters first, but in this case I make an exception, the secondary characters have their time which is good, we see a Harry with the 3 dark, gray and white facets, and the cherry on the cake he is crazy this brings a distinction over other HP fanfics, a good description of the world, a good development of characters, and as the world is a mix of several works I think it has a lot of potential, the fanfic has very good writing and grammar. I highly recommend reading it!!! I leave my wish to the author that, if he could put Tiamat (dxd) and/or Irene Belserion (Fairy Tail) as his wife, it could be both or one of them, a dragon wife, a very interesting series lol
Well, I don't usually do reviews but I feel like I should talk about this novel. When the author said in the synopsis that Harry would be a more "tough" guy, I liked it because no one likes a cowardly MC, I also never expected a hero because of the synopsis, but I definitely didn't expect an emotionless psychopath. Don't get me wrong author, but I expected him to be at least a little human in his choices, a lot of the time he was unnecessarily violent. not to mention that he is an extremely dull MC, understand that a person improves himself with a goal in mind, whether that goal is good or bad, and I haven't found any reason why this MC improves himself, he is just a curious being who basically doesn't care about anyone and it's as if he only tolerates those who are next to him. no passion, no desire to protect something or follow an ideal, just keep researching and becoming strong in the process and running over whoever. all that said, the world building and writing is good but the mc just ruins it. (This entire review was done using Google Translate, so if there are any errors, please forgive me)
The story is pretty good so far. Harry is smart and OP. The magic he re-creates is from other worlds which is cool. But recently the magic with the hexagons in the magic shield and the whole bunch of spells remind me of Youjo Senki.
Not really a huge HP fan but this is an interesting take on the story. Definitely worth the read.
this is an outstanding book. it has a very different perspective on the story but between the plot, world building, and general characters development.... this is a phenomenal read and I couldn't put it down as soon as I started. if I have any complaints it would be the MC is a bit too neurotic or mad scientist for my taste but even that fits in well with the story maybe tone it down a little when it comes to the females in his life... like mellow some with age and/or marriage, kids etc and I would say perfect book. looking forward to reading more.
the book is an interesting take on harry with more commn sense applied to him against a dark Dumbledore
OMG you're back! I'm pretty sure this is a great book if he is the author! And coincidentally, again, I'm drinking some beer right now! Maybe the god of beers guided me to this book!
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Overall this is a pretty straight forward wish fulfillment story, where the MC starts weak, but is a genius so that won't last long. My one problem with it is the authors spelling and incorrect word choice problems. Frequently, the author uses the wrong word that looks or sounds the same. Like using "peace" instead of "piece", or "Scurrying" instead of "scrying" and things like that. There is also the occasional word with one letter off of being correct.
Uma história sobre Harry Potter e desde extremamente criativa como sempre ótimos histórias como essas são raras é bom ver alguém escrevendo algo que preste cara não se preocupa com quem fala mal da sua história é só inveja presta atenção nos caras que te apoiam porque ele sim querem o melhor para essa história 🤔🤔🤔😁😁😁👍👍👍
I got some big expectations for this story, and I see a very good amount of potential with the story idea itself. It is up to the author to cultivate this potential and create an enjoyable story, I’ll come back and write a proper review after reading 30 chapters.
Well... - MC is self insert, as Harry Potter. - Harry have 10 oldyears. Is OP, potions master, very smart and at that age he concludes his magical studies at the Salen school with amazing grades. The author writes that the protagonist is the greatest genius in history. - The protagonist only does 3 relevant things: study, seek to be the center of attention and praise himself as the best magician in history. I repeat, the protagonist finished studying at the magic school in Salen. Therefore, going to study at Hogwarts would prove that the protagonist has mental retardation and autism.
Another great work. Good flow. I don't really need to know how he conducts experiments. Only what it's about, how it works and the end results. There's no droning to increase word count. Every chapter moves the story forward. Will see how it goes further.
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its good ..............................................................................................
alcoholic panda only show us good things, and now is a mad doctor harry? put me in, i just hope that the updates will be atlest weekly....
It’s a good story just like your other works and I hope you keep doing good work on this story as well as the other.
I haven’t read it let, but I know it’s going to be amazing like all the other books you’ve written so far.I can’t wait to read another masterpiece from you. Please keep up the amazing writing!!!
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honestly one of my favorites it's funny and has a great selections of characters
I somewhat enjoyed the novel, but there are issues that made it hard to continue. An 8-year-old acting like an adult is unrealistic, especially in a world with magic and gods—why didn’t anyone wonder if Harry was possessed? The way he talks to his grandparents was frustrating and off-putting. While I understand the portrayal of the British wizarding community, his behavior was just annoying to read. Additionally, while the grammar and spelling aren’t as bad as MTL, they’re still distracting at times."
I usually don't summarize a fanfic without reading 100 chapters first, but in this case I make an exception, the secondary characters have their time which is good, we see a Harry with the 3 dark, gray and white facets, and the cherry on the cake he is crazy this brings a distinction over other HP fanfics, a good description of the world, a good development of characters, and as the world is a mix of several works I think it has a lot of potential, the fanfic has very good writing and grammar. I highly recommend reading it!!! I leave my wish to the author that, if he could put Tiamat (dxd) and/or Irene Belserion (Fairy Tail) as his wife, it could be both or one of them, a dragon wife, a very interesting series lol
Well, I don't usually do reviews but I feel like I should talk about this novel. When the author said in the synopsis that Harry would be a more "tough" guy, I liked it because no one likes a cowardly MC, I also never expected a hero because of the synopsis, but I definitely didn't expect an emotionless psychopath. Don't get me wrong author, but I expected him to be at least a little human in his choices, a lot of the time he was unnecessarily violent. not to mention that he is an extremely dull MC, understand that a person improves himself with a goal in mind, whether that goal is good or bad, and I haven't found any reason why this MC improves himself, he is just a curious being who basically doesn't care about anyone and it's as if he only tolerates those who are next to him. no passion, no desire to protect something or follow an ideal, just keep researching and becoming strong in the process and running over whoever. all that said, the world building and writing is good but the mc just ruins it. (This entire review was done using Google Translate, so if there are any errors, please forgive me)
The story is pretty good so far. Harry is smart and OP. The magic he re-creates is from other worlds which is cool. But recently the magic with the hexagons in the magic shield and the whole bunch of spells remind me of Youjo Senki.
Not really a huge HP fan but this is an interesting take on the story. Definitely worth the read.
this is an outstanding book. it has a very different perspective on the story but between the plot, world building, and general characters development.... this is a phenomenal read and I couldn't put it down as soon as I started. if I have any complaints it would be the MC is a bit too neurotic or mad scientist for my taste but even that fits in well with the story maybe tone it down a little when it comes to the females in his life... like mellow some with age and/or marriage, kids etc and I would say perfect book. looking forward to reading more.
the book is an interesting take on harry with more commn sense applied to him against a dark Dumbledore
OMG you're back! I'm pretty sure this is a great book if he is the author! And coincidentally, again, I'm drinking some beer right now! Maybe the god of beers guided me to this book!
Spoiler de révélation Overall this is a pretty straight forward wish fulfillment story, where the MC starts weak, but is a genius so that won't last long. My one problem with it is the authors spelling and incorrect word choice problems. Frequently, the author uses the wrong word that looks or sounds the same. Like using "peace" instead of "piece", or "Scurrying" instead of "scrying" and things like that. There is also the occasional word with one letter off of being correct.
Uma história sobre Harry Potter e desde extremamente criativa como sempre ótimos histórias como essas são raras é bom ver alguém escrevendo algo que preste cara não se preocupa com quem fala mal da sua história é só inveja presta atenção nos caras que te apoiam porque ele sim querem o melhor para essa história 🤔🤔🤔😁😁😁👍👍👍
I got some big expectations for this story, and I see a very good amount of potential with the story idea itself. It is up to the author to cultivate this potential and create an enjoyable story, I’ll come back and write a proper review after reading 30 chapters.
Well... - MC is self insert, as Harry Potter. - Harry have 10 oldyears. Is OP, potions master, very smart and at that age he concludes his magical studies at the Salen school with amazing grades. The author writes that the protagonist is the greatest genius in history. - The protagonist only does 3 relevant things: study, seek to be the center of attention and praise himself as the best magician in history. I repeat, the protagonist finished studying at the magic school in Salen. Therefore, going to study at Hogwarts would prove that the protagonist has mental retardation and autism.
Another great work. Good flow. I don't really need to know how he conducts experiments. Only what it's about, how it works and the end results. There's no droning to increase word count. Every chapter moves the story forward. Will see how it goes further.
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its good ..............................................................................................
alcoholic panda only show us good things, and now is a mad doctor harry? put me in, i just hope that the updates will be atlest weekly....
It’s a good story just like your other works and I hope you keep doing good work on this story as well as the other.
I haven’t read it let, but I know it’s going to be amazing like all the other books you’ve written so far.I can’t wait to read another masterpiece from you. Please keep up the amazing writing!!!
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