MHA : Adaptation

LV 2

LKz

DONT DROP ! !

LV 4

Helia_King

You pretty much ruined your ff when you made ch 11 but I’ll keep reading to see if it gets better but I recommend not making your mc op if your going to have some bs like that happen again.

LV 15

Anthiaris

Very good story, a little rushed maybe and I think the synopsis doesn't really correlate to the actual story, he isn't shunned or feared at all (and that's good tbh). Good work !

LV 14

Astral_Silver

I really like this Story. Please continue with this and don't drop it and if necessary you could give him a dimension travel ability if you ran out of Ideas. 👍

LV 1

A_calm_daoist

a very good story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 4

DaoistvxXXIK

Okay look, I get the life can get in a way but you have something here that is very good, please continue it, pls?

LV 10

Shawn_0858

This story was amazing I can't wait for an update or another story similar to it please continue to indulge in your fantasies I love how your mind works thank you for this chapter

LV 11

Kayapan

Too bad, it had potential but suddenly just turned into a power copier/All for one story. Would be much better if it stuck to doomsday/mahoraga type powers.

LV 14

MrSimo

it was looking great but I think he got to strong to fast. the story was rushed. by chapter 7 he's basically un killable. there's no tention In the story so ya that's my review.

LV 3

_D_S_

La idea del fanfic es muy buena, pero creo que falla en que es muy apresurado todo, hubo ocasiones en que tuve que leer varias veces para comprender, me da la impresión de que el autor escribía para si mismo y no pensaba desde la perspectiva del lector, creo que una reescritura le vendría bien.