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It's good I just want to know what happened to Narutos son that almost got killed. I hope he still exists and at the end of the novel we see naruto save him.
ATÉ O MOMENTO É UMA NOVEL MUITO BOA, ME ENTRETEU POR MUITAS HORAS, CURTI MUITO ESPECIALMENTE O COMEÇO, O PERSONAGEM DO JIRAYA E AS INTERAÇÕES ENTRE OS PERSONAGENS. ESPERO QUE CONTINUE.
Great story, definitely worth a ten rating and display rating. Looking forward to new chapters. The modified image is simply top. Inspiration to the author.
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Fresh and new story... We can see many of POV from other character that can make us enjoy the story and understand how they feel... I hope author can have a good released update...
This is like fresh breath from all Naruto stories and very intersting story... Hope you continue till end... All major loopholes has been covered by author...not like others stories where manoto or Naruto get random bloodline without any reason just for fun... author keep it up 😉
very interesting story. I've never met a Naruto story that has an otherworldly theme. and this story has good grammar too, and because there is a multiverse entity. I'm not sure if mc will do the multiversal trip
Shameless author here. If I don't value my own story no one will. I will try to create what I always wanted to read in a Naruto fanfic
It's good I just want to know what happened to Narutos son that almost got killed. I hope he still exists and at the end of the novel we see naruto save him.
ATÉ O MOMENTO É UMA NOVEL MUITO BOA, ME ENTRETEU POR MUITAS HORAS, CURTI MUITO ESPECIALMENTE O COMEÇO, O PERSONAGEM DO JIRAYA E AS INTERAÇÕES ENTRE OS PERSONAGENS. ESPERO QUE CONTINUE.
Great story, definitely worth a ten rating and display rating. Looking forward to new chapters. The modified image is simply top. Inspiration to the author.
🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🔥🔥🔥........................... ...........................................................................................................
Fresh and new story... We can see many of POV from other character that can make us enjoy the story and understand how they feel... I hope author can have a good released update...
This is like fresh breath from all Naruto stories and very intersting story... Hope you continue till end... All major loopholes has been covered by author...not like others stories where manoto or Naruto get random bloodline without any reason just for fun... author keep it up 😉
very interesting story. I've never met a Naruto story that has an otherworldly theme. and this story has good grammar too, and because there is a multiverse entity. I'm not sure if mc will do the multiversal trip
Shameless author here. If I don't value my own story no one will. I will try to create what I always wanted to read in a Naruto fanfic
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