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magnifique, très belle prémisse et l'auteur nous tient en haleine tout le long, et une bonne fin. Enfin une bonne histoire complète.
It's beautiful, that's all there is to it. Sam is the most gentle and loving womanizer I have seen, the cast is filled with unique and lively personalities, the tone is somber yet uplifting like every summer end. Of all the harem and romance novels i have ever read, this one is the first to make me honestly shed a tear in the end out of its sweetness, hats off to you author, the way you understand romance is wonderful and has helped me understand it better too. Hope you and every other reader who sees this finds their own loved one in this life. ❤️ 🧇
Great story. Seemed a little rushed at the end but overall I enjoyed every minute of the book.
Truly masterpiece, enjoy every second of reading this novel, and even after reading 400 chapter I can’t be get enough of it,i’d like to point out how every character written amazingly and you can easily understand or empathize them and big W to male lead and female leads development truly love them all, to summarize I just can’t find any words to describe my feelings about this novel,I wish authors all great to be very very healthy and end this masterpiece how it deserves beautifully. P.S. Honestly, I with all of my heart want it to never be ended and please my eyes for much more amount of time this is how I attached to this story:)❤️
I really love the novel. Although the beginning of the novel was a bit wonky and j really hated the protagonist for being a wuss and not being able to cofront the female leads or running away from them. After around 40 chapters passed i realised the girls are more than just crazy yanderes and their interesting interactions, those wholesome moments between all the crazy stuff makes reading it worth it. I hope the author keeps adding more wholesome scenes. Now discussing some spoilers: I have read till around ch 140ish. So m pretty satisfied with the first chapters where mc lost his virginity was quite a unique experience and fun to read. Btw author san i have a question other than angel has mc gone all the way with any other female lead yet? Plz tell me soon. m curious???
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this one of if not the best harem/slice of life I've ever read. the way the author uses his vocabulary is smoothly done, and the conversation between characters is really interesting every female lead has their own and unique charms that one might or might not like, but that's made them so memorable and made me want to get to know more about the women in this story and finally our mc, he's not perfect like a Mary sue in many other stories but that what I love about him, he's dense or stupid or a pervert alpha want to be, may be a little passive at time but not a wimpy characters I've been reading this story for the last 2-3 months till the latest chapter, and this author never failed to update 2 chapter/day. So overall pls give this a try. I highly recommend it
It good and all but I hate manipulation in relation plus I like yandere and there Alway a way to control them not like manipulation but not making them kill every girl it was fun and all but I quit mc to much of a dense to realize some thing and not doing something even tho it a r18. Author I wish u all the luck with this novel I'm out
well written good plot great characters awesome lemons recommend! its a shame its locked i wanted to read more :( if you can afford it you should read it
This is not a review. Is is it just me or do the people in the images section look underage?
good write I enjoy it but mc are real pushover and kind of beta male type if U dont like mc of this type u will notlike this novel this mc hod no upperhand with girl atall 😂😂
I like the concept. Sam is thrown into a game world and he has to make the heroines fall in love with him so they don’t send him to swim with the fish. Each heroine is bat s**t crazy. They’re all possessive and want Sam exclusively for themselves, the only problem is he can’t belong to just one chick as that’s a one way ticket to visit king Yama. The writing is ok, great update stability. My major gripe is that Sam has 0 backbone. He lets the women push him around, belittle him and threaten him & he just goes with the flow. Angel(I can’t stand her), is great for that. She continuously threatens him and looks down on him and he can’t stand his ground and say no. Most of these chicks have attempted reverse r as well and he just accepted it even tho he didn’t want it. Ugh, I get mad just thinking about Angel’s character. In my book, Angel is def up there with Rachel. Anyway, as of ch 158, our giga chad(less) mc lies to most of the girls about each other, even if it was something innocuous like meeting them in a store. He doesn’t appear to have any solid plans on how to make the girls fall for him or anything. Ok, whew, rant over. Overall, I do enjoy the story and it has potential, but I don’t know how much longer I can tolerate Angel and for Sam to be so passive. I’ll give it a couple more chapters and after that, who knows 🤷🏽♀️
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Quality story and great writing, looking forward to more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The premise is good but the story progression is kinda rétàrded, it would be great if there was at least some semblance of logic in the story.
It's good though the only thing that ruined it for me is the harem tag , why does everyone loves harem , it's not true love if it's harem
After re-reading this novel, here I am. Well, where do I start? Firstly, the writing is good, I feel comfortable when reading, and there are a few words that I do not understand because I am not a native English speaker. Grammar too, I guess. Importantly, the quality is great. But the type of story is not my type, frankly. I find myself forced to continue reading while my insides are twisting. It can be said that the story is not my type, but I like the writing very much. It is a contradictory feeling, haha. Anyway, one of my expectations at first was that I would find a sweet, romantic story. Well, there is romance, but not the romance I know; Indulging in love and spreading sweetness and becoming diabetic. Instead, replace it with threats, possessiveness (like having a toy that you own and do whatever you want with it), sexual harassment, blackmail... And the last thing is that MC started to fall in love with them, I think he has Stockholm Syndrome.
Spoiler de révélation
Big story so far, makes me laugh a lot as well as get excited cough cough, yes, excited. Don't drop them please
This is my first time leaving a review and it’s due to the fact of how surprised I was reading this. Coming in to it I expected it to be a generic harem/system novel but the author has really outdone himself. The way the MC speaks is not like any of the other novels I’ve read the author has a way with words that makes this novel so much better and I’m so glad that I have come across this novel. So keep up the good work.
Read till ch.18, I really hate doing a review after soo little chapters but I honestly couldn’t go on reading the novel. I came in thinking it would be a cuthroat(literally) yandere novel with romance bits but it just looks like the ”heroines” see him as an accommodity or a possession rather than a loved one. All he has is face value, they do not care about him...all they care about his face, thats all. And its making me remember bad memories... honestly, but great writing quality with little to none grammar mistakes. Good job author and also if you do decide to write another novel...will read that for sure but not just this one..sorry
Although it has only a few chapters it has a very promising plot and MC and is written by a good author, cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this novel; the plot and the design of the female leads are fantastic. I will recommend it to my friends........................................
Interesting plot.I'm really enjoying this novel and have subscribed to all the current chapters. The storyline is very coherent, and I hope it won't let me down.
Nice piece of Work but as every good novel webnovel's paywall reached it. .............................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................. ..............................................................................................................................................
A great romance/harem novel in a modern world, slice of life setting. While the ending was a bit rushed, at least it gave closure.
magnifique, très belle prémisse et l'auteur nous tient en haleine tout le long, et une bonne fin. Enfin une bonne histoire complète.
It's beautiful, that's all there is to it. Sam is the most gentle and loving womanizer I have seen, the cast is filled with unique and lively personalities, the tone is somber yet uplifting like every summer end. Of all the harem and romance novels i have ever read, this one is the first to make me honestly shed a tear in the end out of its sweetness, hats off to you author, the way you understand romance is wonderful and has helped me understand it better too. Hope you and every other reader who sees this finds their own loved one in this life. ❤️ 🧇
Great story. Seemed a little rushed at the end but overall I enjoyed every minute of the book.
Truly masterpiece, enjoy every second of reading this novel, and even after reading 400 chapter I can’t be get enough of it,i’d like to point out how every character written amazingly and you can easily understand or empathize them and big W to male lead and female leads development truly love them all, to summarize I just can’t find any words to describe my feelings about this novel,I wish authors all great to be very very healthy and end this masterpiece how it deserves beautifully. P.S. Honestly, I with all of my heart want it to never be ended and please my eyes for much more amount of time this is how I attached to this story:)❤️
I really love the novel. Although the beginning of the novel was a bit wonky and j really hated the protagonist for being a wuss and not being able to cofront the female leads or running away from them. After around 40 chapters passed i realised the girls are more than just crazy yanderes and their interesting interactions, those wholesome moments between all the crazy stuff makes reading it worth it. I hope the author keeps adding more wholesome scenes. Now discussing some spoilers: I have read till around ch 140ish. So m pretty satisfied with the first chapters where mc lost his virginity was quite a unique experience and fun to read. Btw author san i have a question other than angel has mc gone all the way with any other female lead yet? Plz tell me soon. m curious???
Spoiler de révélation this one of if not the best harem/slice of life I've ever read. the way the author uses his vocabulary is smoothly done, and the conversation between characters is really interesting every female lead has their own and unique charms that one might or might not like, but that's made them so memorable and made me want to get to know more about the women in this story and finally our mc, he's not perfect like a Mary sue in many other stories but that what I love about him, he's dense or stupid or a pervert alpha want to be, may be a little passive at time but not a wimpy characters I've been reading this story for the last 2-3 months till the latest chapter, and this author never failed to update 2 chapter/day. So overall pls give this a try. I highly recommend it
It good and all but I hate manipulation in relation plus I like yandere and there Alway a way to control them not like manipulation but not making them kill every girl it was fun and all but I quit mc to much of a dense to realize some thing and not doing something even tho it a r18. Author I wish u all the luck with this novel I'm out
well written good plot great characters awesome lemons recommend! its a shame its locked i wanted to read more :( if you can afford it you should read it
This is not a review. Is is it just me or do the people in the images section look underage?
good write I enjoy it but mc are real pushover and kind of beta male type if U dont like mc of this type u will notlike this novel this mc hod no upperhand with girl atall 😂😂
I like the concept. Sam is thrown into a game world and he has to make the heroines fall in love with him so they don’t send him to swim with the fish. Each heroine is bat s**t crazy. They’re all possessive and want Sam exclusively for themselves, the only problem is he can’t belong to just one chick as that’s a one way ticket to visit king Yama. The writing is ok, great update stability. My major gripe is that Sam has 0 backbone. He lets the women push him around, belittle him and threaten him & he just goes with the flow. Angel(I can’t stand her), is great for that. She continuously threatens him and looks down on him and he can’t stand his ground and say no. Most of these chicks have attempted reverse r as well and he just accepted it even tho he didn’t want it. Ugh, I get mad just thinking about Angel’s character. In my book, Angel is def up there with Rachel. Anyway, as of ch 158, our giga chad(less) mc lies to most of the girls about each other, even if it was something innocuous like meeting them in a store. He doesn’t appear to have any solid plans on how to make the girls fall for him or anything. Ok, whew, rant over. Overall, I do enjoy the story and it has potential, but I don’t know how much longer I can tolerate Angel and for Sam to be so passive. I’ll give it a couple more chapters and after that, who knows 🤷🏽♀️
Spoiler de révélation Quality story and great writing, looking forward to more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The premise is good but the story progression is kinda rétàrded, it would be great if there was at least some semblance of logic in the story.
It's good though the only thing that ruined it for me is the harem tag , why does everyone loves harem , it's not true love if it's harem
After re-reading this novel, here I am. Well, where do I start? Firstly, the writing is good, I feel comfortable when reading, and there are a few words that I do not understand because I am not a native English speaker. Grammar too, I guess. Importantly, the quality is great. But the type of story is not my type, frankly. I find myself forced to continue reading while my insides are twisting. It can be said that the story is not my type, but I like the writing very much. It is a contradictory feeling, haha. Anyway, one of my expectations at first was that I would find a sweet, romantic story. Well, there is romance, but not the romance I know; Indulging in love and spreading sweetness and becoming diabetic. Instead, replace it with threats, possessiveness (like having a toy that you own and do whatever you want with it), sexual harassment, blackmail... And the last thing is that MC started to fall in love with them, I think he has Stockholm Syndrome.
Spoiler de révélation Big story so far, makes me laugh a lot as well as get excited cough cough, yes, excited. Don't drop them please
This is my first time leaving a review and it’s due to the fact of how surprised I was reading this. Coming in to it I expected it to be a generic harem/system novel but the author has really outdone himself. The way the MC speaks is not like any of the other novels I’ve read the author has a way with words that makes this novel so much better and I’m so glad that I have come across this novel. So keep up the good work.
Read till ch.18, I really hate doing a review after soo little chapters but I honestly couldn’t go on reading the novel. I came in thinking it would be a cuthroat(literally) yandere novel with romance bits but it just looks like the ”heroines” see him as an accommodity or a possession rather than a loved one. All he has is face value, they do not care about him...all they care about his face, thats all. And its making me remember bad memories... honestly, but great writing quality with little to none grammar mistakes. Good job author and also if you do decide to write another novel...will read that for sure but not just this one..sorry
Although it has only a few chapters it has a very promising plot and MC and is written by a good author, cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love this novel; the plot and the design of the female leads are fantastic. I will recommend it to my friends........................................
Interesting plot.I'm really enjoying this novel and have subscribed to all the current chapters. The storyline is very coherent, and I hope it won't let me down.
Nice piece of Work but as every good novel webnovel's paywall reached it. .............................................................................................................................................. .............................................................................................................................................. ..............................................................................................................................................
A great romance/harem novel in a modern world, slice of life setting. While the ending was a bit rushed, at least it gave closure.