Game of Thrones: The Legend of Jon Arctic – ASOIAF/GOT GOT

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RaccoonLeague

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Bogdan7

this story has some problems with logic... and the way people act/ behave is like in a book for kids...the pov changes in the same pharagraph ... and other stuff....

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Lord_Crims0n

I really have mixed feelings about this fic, I really like kingdom building and the prospect of a kingdom beyond the wall really attracts me, I think the story has a lot of potential. however, it really bothers me the way catelyn and ned are portrayed, catelyn is portrayed as executively disgusting, much worse than she should be, and ned, is portrayed as if he had no fault of his own, a literal saint, and jon idolizes him... which is really stupid, other than that, the story is really good, I really hope to see the end.

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ShuYme

Idk, the paceing and writing style kinda throws me off, it seems kinda unnatural or kinda robotic.

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Plug_O_Stien

The novel presents an intriguing premise but suffers from poor execution. The dialogue is excessively verbose and often nonsensical, severely impacting the story's credibility. The protagonist, Jon, behaves inconsistently with his supposed age, resembling someone in their late teens or early twenties rather than his actual age (9). This disconnect, alongside poor portrayals of other important characters (including their decisions and dialogue) highlights the author's lack of understanding of the characters, further detracting from the narrative. Additionally, the reliance on the trope of "the old gods granting knowledge" as a convenient explanation undermines the plot's integrity. Overall, a promising idea, but not her more.

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Mobzill75

amazing story I hope author will continue this story with no stopping [img=update]

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Blue_Hell52

Honestly was one of the best ASOIAF stories out there but because people didn’t understand that this was a Fanfic they got dissatisfied with the current story so those people can f right off!!! Author you are a fantastic author and I follow your other stories and never let these people that only spend time tearing others down to fill there so called pride. Hope you continue this later on in the future and sorry you had to take those comments and anything else!! Keep up your writing because you will go so far with it!!!

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TheGeekWhoLived

Dude Pleaseeee!!!!!!!!!!! don't delete this, I was eagerly waiting for its updates. Atleast, continue posting it on some other platform. This is the best Ongoing GOT fanfictions. Your work is great. Please resume posting it!

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The_Dark_Hydrax

Bring this back please[img=update][img=recommend]

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khazar

it's really good fanfiction .a little heavy on the bad cat stark thinygy but it's good

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DaoistGazv5E

Sad to see it go this was one of the best stories I’ve ever read

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jamwerewolf

why was this deleted????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

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Just_ForFun

what happened was the fabric deleted, or was it flagged, I was enjoying the story 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢

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SILENT_NECR0N

bro is it a translation ...the story is good but u had made mc to op

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Gurry_Bewrha

love the story and writing hope to read to completion

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RC1138

Good Story. it pulls you in. Thanks.....

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Jan_Cheater

it's a real sham that such good fanfic is dropped.

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TheGeekWhoLived

Very interesting and well written story, one of the best GOT Fics out there.

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Chris25rick

I love kingdom-building stories like this!! Great work so far!

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Darkman90

Honestly one of the really good fanfics I have read in a while. The story is pleasant to read and gives off emotions while reading. The pace could be a bit faster but the different POVs also make it fun to read, I am glad other POVs don’t overwhelm Jon’s POV, it has a good balance. The details do add depth, the author doesn’t overwhelm with unnecessary details or words. The language and the writing part is very well done, nice and easy to read with good vocabulary. Really enjoying it, and hope to see more of it!