Destiny Divine: The Divine Threads

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TheBlackstar

I like the overall creativity when it comes to the naming of the characters and the slow but steady world building. Over all it’s pretty good. I’m also writing something similar to your work feel free to check it out!

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Sinve_Koc

the story started off a bit slow but as I read on the author improved 🤩 Jake is my favorite ❤️ I believe the author can improve

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Tres_Aguila

This story is unique and captivating from the very first chapter. I'm eager to find out if the prophecy of the elder has something to do with the ML's gift. Kudos to the author.

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Warren_Jay

i really loved reading it it's soo exciting soo I'll be just finishing the other chapters..📚🥰

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Cripys

the plot is so intriguing that it keep me up to read it even more.... It was fantastic!

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Alalibo_Samuel

I love how the story started along with how well the character were developed. But among all, the plot in the novel is very intriguing along with it's development. I highly recommend this novel if you are in need of an enticing novel

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Kline0815

What a fun and refreshing storyline! I love the world that you have built and your writing is very good! Keep up the good work!

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SoftBreezeWasTaken

loved the story dude. the feeling that this story is something so big is just a yes from me, and your writing is pretty good I loved it keep going my man!

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Gift_Maigida

wow interesting am already hooked on this book big ups to the author

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Sante_Perez

I love a good story about a world different from reality, love cliff hangers and this story gives me both. #loving it

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_Shuang_Wei

Good story with good wording and setting .I love it how it starts from a crisis discussion. Easy to understand and intriguing . The story unfolds smoothly .

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Lord_GrimX101

Not bad, bruh your novel ain't half bad, plus you named your mc after yourself like I did, RESPECT. Hope your book keeps on improving, congrats in advance.

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Ekwonna_Irene

I will call the master piece an amazing plot-filled story but has a lot of grammatical errors, and if corrected, will be better. Good luck Author

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kasurindusk

I gave your first few chapters a read, and I genuinely want to tell you, without any offense but a mere suggestion as a fellow writer, consider editing your work. You can use Grammarly to check your grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Please continue striving to be a better writer.

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Notti_Mind

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MBU_Overlord_6594

I love the world building concept you used.Its unique and now you got me hooked and hanging around for more.Keep those chapters coming and don't stop.

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SHADOW_IV

Author's shameless review 😂 This novel has a slow start but trust me when I say it's a real gem , from the power system to the story and my awesome world building *wipes a tear* it's a fresh perspective on the fantasy genre with the MC being a black person i know a few author's have done this before but trust me this is a gem, Mc is more of a smart and quiet kid who is neither a hero or a villain he does what he feels is right I won't put much detail Into it but give it a chance you won't regret it

Okay this is different , the pacing is kinda slow but the story has a lot of potential 🔥 definitely adding this to my collection , A little bit stingy on the action but I believe it will be amazing