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Game of Thrones : Nano Machines

TV 41 Chapitres 1.1M Affichage

Auteur: The3Entities

4.2 (18 audimat)

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After having dealt with the case of Jacob in the TWILIGHT saga and Ron Weasley in the Harry Potter universe, primordial entities fans of human works decided to improve the story of Jon Snow so that he is no longer the chicken that we have been served in the last two season. I don't own any characters from the work, I don't know the books but I've been told about some interesting characters so maybe they will be in the story.
It's a different reality and some behaviors will be quite different. Jon will be very different here, he won't be an asshole with a harem but let's say he'll have no problem with free sex. I wish you a good read, if you don't like the story, There are other authors 100 times more talented than me who have written about this universe. This fanfiction is an English adaptation of the same story I wrote in French on my old account(TheDarkOne241) .
English is not my first language so bear with me, sometimes the grammar will sting but the regulars of my stories certainly already know that. I hope you enjoy reading and thank you for your time

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LV 4

m3gah1tss

This novel is just authors bashing, nothing makes sense. Not a single character is behaving not even close to their personality. The power-ups are meaningless, and makes 0 sense. Its just a fast paced, 0 plot wish fullfilling rushed draft. Author is traying to make a BAMF Jon Snow, but all he managed is a angry bull, with 0 control. Dialogue is vague, fake and dry. No emotions are felt, despite the CAPS, that is not how you create emotions. The number of things wrong here, is endless.

1yr 21

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LV 4

m3gah1tss

Ok, Daenerys bashing, all this opness. Wish fulfillment+ useless....gonna read it just cuz, nothing else atm. It's like " f,,,,last woman on Earth situation". Robb tried to poison Jon, which the character would never do. The only reason that happent, was because Author did not wanted to get MC a reason to either go into war or help/save Robb. Daenerys is bashed hard, just cause, forgetting the writers sucked+ rushed ending.

1yr 15

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LV 4

glorytofanfic

the story's got a good idea but the delivery is so bad. The author has given no thought to the behaviour of established characters that it almost hurts reading it

1yr 4

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LV 5

Blood_Sage

Love it, great writer, nice face pace. Could you please do a vampire diaries or originals fanfiction please

1yr 3

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Daoist2xhw19

nah. don't mind them author. u doing a good job. i like the new jon snow. nah. don't mind them author. u doing a good job. i like the new jon snow. nah. don't mind them author. u doing a good job. i like the new jon snow

1yr 2

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LV 1

DaoistGLDAR4

Super Fanfictions. Aussi bien celle ci que les autres. Je ne suis pas un grand FAN de ce monde (GOT), mais j'apprécie ton travail. J'attends la suite !!

7mth 1

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LV 1

Zenos_Maxima2611

I've reached 23 chapters, but unfortunately I can't take it anymore. the conversations are too bland, not showing the characters' feelings at all. Jon Snow is too bull. Arrogance is fine, but being too arrogant doesn't make him good at all, he actually looks like a literal villain.

1yr 1

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AbelWizard

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1yr 1

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Santos_Rivera

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9mth

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Adam_Yusef

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1yr

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RaccoonLeague

Goooooooooooo Gooooooooo Gooooooooo Gooooooooo Gooooooooo Gooooooooo

1yr

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Monarch_freereader

this novel is a treasure taken out from a treasure chest i hope the author continue this and not dropped this one it's really really good 👍

1yr

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Craterzech3

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1yr

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GHOSTRIDER27127

honestly I love what you're doing if I should give a review it's that I think you went a little fast but otherwise I really like it and I can't wait for the next chapters to arrive. CONTINUE

1yr

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PengZ

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Joemeister19

I really like the premise of the story. Thanks! ........,.......... ...........................................................................,.......,...