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plagiarized work so far from what I've read the exact same as DC-remastered edition made by sir Lucifer Morning Star over on fanfiction.net do not read this here
I like this but the updateing stability makes me wonder at first if I should read this but after reading it I think the long updates are okay cause it is a good fic
Genial👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌[img=Good night][img=More pls][img=Unalived][img=Why][img=Why][img=Unalived][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=More pls][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Smug][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The synopsis sounds interesting and it’s pretty detailed but it reads like chatGPT.
will update one answered. are you going to be continuing where the author left off, or will you be adding your own spin to his story. this is story has been on fan.fiction also I think maybe here for years and was dropped so I would like a answer please
So far so good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I haven’t read any of this story but I love this idea and the author so 5 stars. 😄
Overhaul has one weakness he needs his hand to utilize his power. I wonder how the author will end that weakness
a eu tenho poder entao eu sou um deus todo poderoso posso fazer o que eu quiser com os humanos kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
plagiarized work so far from what I've read the exact same as DC-remastered edition made by sir Lucifer Morning Star over on fanfiction.net do not read this here
I like this but the updateing stability makes me wonder at first if I should read this but after reading it I think the long updates are okay cause it is a good fic
Genial👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌[img=Good night][img=More pls][img=Unalived][img=Why][img=Why][img=Unalived][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=More pls][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Speechless][img=Smug][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The synopsis sounds interesting and it’s pretty detailed but it reads like chatGPT.
will update one answered. are you going to be continuing where the author left off, or will you be adding your own spin to his story. this is story has been on fan.fiction also I think maybe here for years and was dropped so I would like a answer please
So far so good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I haven’t read any of this story but I love this idea and the author so 5 stars. 😄
Overhaul has one weakness he needs his hand to utilize his power. I wonder how the author will end that weakness
a eu tenho poder entao eu sou um deus todo poderoso posso fazer o que eu quiser com os humanos kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk