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The sole reason why I dropped this novel is because it's written in First Person Perspective. It just feels weird trying to read it. Feels like I'm reading a diary. If you guys have no problem with it, go ahead.
I absolutely loved this story .but my man, that ending?! like wtaf???!!! like honestly that ending was not an ending. please tell me you will go back and write more. like that was the worst cliff hanger and I'm begging you please resolve this story. like bruh you did not actually answer anything but left more questions. boo .but I still love what I read .
WARNING: Do not get to invested in this book or you will be disappointed. This book starts of pretty great the writing isn’t the best but its not the best but not the worst. The major selling point of this books is the way the author writes the MC and the knowledge the author uses to write this novel. With clear mathematical formulas aswell as physics and chemistry principles. Altough the other characters can seem a bit shallow sometimes it dosent really matter as this novel is more focused on the MC. Although the author dives a lot into theoretical concepts especially in quantum physics and mathematics in the beginning, its not some incoherent garabage since the author makes an effort and delivers very clear understandable theories and thought processes. As I mentioned the book starts of great but as the author starts introducing some sci-fi like theories and multiverse it slowly starts spiralling into chaos and the ending is absolutely trash in my humble opinion. Overall this is a perfect book to read to pass time a bit and explore some intersesting theories and ideas but defenetly do not get too invested if you do not like inconclusive “bad” endings If you do not have high school level of maths and physics at least and some surface level knowledge of quantum physics you will find yourself a bit lost sometimes, but the author explains everything well. This novel feels like a mix between a novel and an academic paper. ALSO check out authors current novel since in my opinion the author’s writing improved greatly and everything from world building to character wiriting is way better in my opinion, one of the best novels on this page.
I would say this was an average level story. Some parts are rushed some are slow. And the ending leaves much to be desired. I cannot comment on update stability due to it being done before I read the book. Very broad stoke talks about technologies but very detailed about math equations.
Started out good. Liked all the math stuff but story takes a nose dive in the 2nd half. The story is marked complete so I can only assume the end was the ending. That end was terrible. In other words if this was a murder mystery, the killer is never identified and got away with it. Read the free chapters and then stop there.
To be blunt, this is simply a story of unsolved complex mathematics being proven years before they should be, combined with lots of sexy time and drugs because the author thinks you’ll get bored of the math. Overall, if you have an hour or two spare on a weekend I would give this a read. Kind of interesting.
an enjoyable read, and different from my normal types. must say that this novel actually deserves 5 stars but I mentioned to the author that I'm removing half star due to my pettiness at realising how stupid & dumb I am when reading the novel. so 4.5 star rating(cue stereotypical evil triumphant laughter) seriously its still quite the enjoyable & well paced novel
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This is the best book I have read in this app. The character development is great. The mystery is just perfect. I don't know how the author came up with an idea like this but it's really good. The s*x scenes are great and timed greatly. There is just enough information so you can understand the story but not be a professor in every field. But I am really interested in how is he going to explain us nonexistent concept's as the story develops. I recommend giving this book a try.
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the idea is unique and everything here is good except for the ch author plz pump more ch [img=strong]
The first few chapters had me thinking I recognised this from somewhere, and then I remembered another story on webnovel called Scholars Advanced Technology System. In the end, I enjoyed reading all 1500 chapters from that one, but I'm stopping here on C16 because these characters just don't interest me.
As of chapter 14, what is the biggest problem of this novel? The answer is everything related to romance. The pacing is bad, the transitions are bad, the motive behind the interest is bad, the time it takes between interest and relationship is bad, a bunch of red flags towards who will be part of the harem etc. If you're like me and want quality content, I suggest you either skip this novel entirely or skip every single paragraph with a girl in it. This book is supposedly a western original but everything related to romance feels like the most generic Chinese trash. Every bit of romance I read downgraded the quality of the story by at least 50 percent. I don't understand what's with webnovel and western authors repeating the same mistakes again and again. It's not enjoyable, it's frustrating, it's boring and repetitive. Go read some Sherlock Holmes, Agatha Christie or anything else for a more real and mature outlook on what romance is, anything but Chinese webnovels for god's sake. Other than that, the science is interesting and the story is almost non-existent till this point. It's just an endless slice of life of him learning and talking to people around him in an environment that feels like it will quickly lose its meaning by virtue of whatever the supernatural element presented at the beginning is. I can only give it a score of 3.2 after reading so much.
I’m surprised by the quality of this story. I thought it would fall apart when he, with minimal interaction with his crush up to that point, revealed what he believed to be his biggest secret. Fortunately, the level of the story remained consistent. Now, there’s hope that this won’t be another promising story that gets abandoned.
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the story is OK, grammar and such are OK. the story isn't bad. I guess if you are into scientific formulae. the formulas really annoy me, and the way the mc talks by using hipster terms is annoying. Also, he is a genius, but he's trying to talk like the cool him. rge story is getting a little loopy also. the story was OK to read for free, but I wouldn't spend for it.
Way better after you get past the first 5 or 6 chapters. MC stops speaking like he's some 90s high school kid, and dialog between characters becomes way better to read. im starting to really love this novel.
I just want to ask the author of his background in math particularly statistics. I am quite interested in PDF estimation using Kernel Functions, but I am not really familiar with Bayesian something. I am solving these equations for me to be able to approximate the PDF for a research study of mine for Social Science about the relationship of distance of dorm rooms and the probability of friendship. It will also serve as practice for me to be able to use the Kelly Criterion by plugging a PDF instead of just a constant. I will maximize the growth of investment that way even if the probability has some level of uncertainty. I am also delving into Beta Distributions. Actually, I rarely have an internet connection so I rediscovered it myself. Anyways, the point of my comment is not to flex, but to find a colleague that has the same interests. Namely earning money by analyzing probability distribution functions.
this book told me that I was dumb in all types of ways so I decided not to be dumb and installed the app brilliant to get better at math and I realized that math could be fun ,because its the way its teached that makes it boring and tiring not math in of its self atleast for me. but any way the story isn't just about math but the mc geting general super intelligence and something deeper something more... but anyway wont spoil to much as this is my first review so things that I might say will probably be wrong.
I love this novel so much! It combines the science and slice of live aspect in such a nice way! Additionally, the bits of mystery which are slowly added to the story are also implemented fantasticly! For those who know the novel, it sometimes gives me "Scholar's Advanced Technological System" vibes but written in a better way with more story building and more specific! All in all, it's one of my favorite novels by far! Post Scriptum: I hope the Author keeps updating consistently and doesn't drop this!
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Kinda nice. The MC is not egoistic right now so I want to see if it changes. I think it's cool to see an academic journey from him. I've read only one novel similar to this in the past.
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This is an interesting novel, not the best, but I'm digging it overall. Only thing, wish the MC wasn't so hard-bend on university live, anyways, it's pretty chill. and the main plot is starting to show up.
After the recent chapter I must write a review, the mystery is gearing up which is nice and some interesting plot-points are incomming. The science is pretty detailed. Wanna see how the author is gonna continue this.[img=update][img=update]
Interesting concept, a bit different than everything else I've read. There is no systwm, but there is something that makes him smarter, nothing that could be pinpointed at the moment. The ideas are described in detail, there are hot scenes and you can see the progress.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Interesting concept, a bit different than everything else I've read. There is no systwm, but there is something that makes him smarter, nothing that could be pinpointed at the moment. The ideas are described in detail, there are hot scenes and you can see the progress.
This is pretty good at the moment. There are some interesting fact used to make it more colorfull and I like the mystery, but it doesn't feel like a harem novel and the MC doesn't seem egoistic or arogant, so I'm looking forward to see how this will develop will he cheat on Oliv?
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I really enjoyed the first 14 chapters. The science is on point so far, I think the author is going for more of a scientific curiosities approach, at least in the later stages. The mystery is developing slowly. The hot scenes are pretty good. Some of the characters are interesting. I guess we have kind of an average guy becoming smart trope here. Will see where this goes. It's in the early stages, but I can't wait to read more of this. [img=update]
Shameless review from the Scholar here.This story is not simply about a smart MC who comes up with smart ideas and brings up technology to the table, as the mysteries start to unfold, and the characters change this will transform to a story about what lays beyond human reach.
The sole reason why I dropped this novel is because it's written in First Person Perspective. It just feels weird trying to read it. Feels like I'm reading a diary. If you guys have no problem with it, go ahead.
I absolutely loved this story .but my man, that ending?! like wtaf???!!! like honestly that ending was not an ending. please tell me you will go back and write more. like that was the worst cliff hanger and I'm begging you please resolve this story. like bruh you did not actually answer anything but left more questions. boo .but I still love what I read .
WARNING: Do not get to invested in this book or you will be disappointed. This book starts of pretty great the writing isn’t the best but its not the best but not the worst. The major selling point of this books is the way the author writes the MC and the knowledge the author uses to write this novel. With clear mathematical formulas aswell as physics and chemistry principles. Altough the other characters can seem a bit shallow sometimes it dosent really matter as this novel is more focused on the MC. Although the author dives a lot into theoretical concepts especially in quantum physics and mathematics in the beginning, its not some incoherent garabage since the author makes an effort and delivers very clear understandable theories and thought processes. As I mentioned the book starts of great but as the author starts introducing some sci-fi like theories and multiverse it slowly starts spiralling into chaos and the ending is absolutely trash in my humble opinion. Overall this is a perfect book to read to pass time a bit and explore some intersesting theories and ideas but defenetly do not get too invested if you do not like inconclusive “bad” endings If you do not have high school level of maths and physics at least and some surface level knowledge of quantum physics you will find yourself a bit lost sometimes, but the author explains everything well. This novel feels like a mix between a novel and an academic paper. ALSO check out authors current novel since in my opinion the author’s writing improved greatly and everything from world building to character wiriting is way better in my opinion, one of the best novels on this page.
I would say this was an average level story. Some parts are rushed some are slow. And the ending leaves much to be desired. I cannot comment on update stability due to it being done before I read the book. Very broad stoke talks about technologies but very detailed about math equations.
Started out good. Liked all the math stuff but story takes a nose dive in the 2nd half. The story is marked complete so I can only assume the end was the ending. That end was terrible. In other words if this was a murder mystery, the killer is never identified and got away with it. Read the free chapters and then stop there.
To be blunt, this is simply a story of unsolved complex mathematics being proven years before they should be, combined with lots of sexy time and drugs because the author thinks you’ll get bored of the math. Overall, if you have an hour or two spare on a weekend I would give this a read. Kind of interesting.
an enjoyable read, and different from my normal types. must say that this novel actually deserves 5 stars but I mentioned to the author that I'm removing half star due to my pettiness at realising how stupid & dumb I am when reading the novel. so 4.5 star rating(cue stereotypical evil triumphant laughter) seriously its still quite the enjoyable & well paced novel
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This is the best book I have read in this app. The character development is great. The mystery is just perfect. I don't know how the author came up with an idea like this but it's really good. The s*x scenes are great and timed greatly. There is just enough information so you can understand the story but not be a professor in every field. But I am really interested in how is he going to explain us nonexistent concept's as the story develops. I recommend giving this book a try.
Experience the awe-inspiring tale penned by an exceptional author. Are you seeking a captivating trailer video that befits your remarkable book? Connect with me on FB at "TRANMAXX PRO" for more info
the idea is unique and everything here is good except for the ch author plz pump more ch [img=strong]
The first few chapters had me thinking I recognised this from somewhere, and then I remembered another story on webnovel called Scholars Advanced Technology System. In the end, I enjoyed reading all 1500 chapters from that one, but I'm stopping here on C16 because these characters just don't interest me.
As of chapter 14, what is the biggest problem of this novel? The answer is everything related to romance. The pacing is bad, the transitions are bad, the motive behind the interest is bad, the time it takes between interest and relationship is bad, a bunch of red flags towards who will be part of the harem etc. If you're like me and want quality content, I suggest you either skip this novel entirely or skip every single paragraph with a girl in it. This book is supposedly a western original but everything related to romance feels like the most generic Chinese trash. Every bit of romance I read downgraded the quality of the story by at least 50 percent. I don't understand what's with webnovel and western authors repeating the same mistakes again and again. It's not enjoyable, it's frustrating, it's boring and repetitive. Go read some Sherlock Holmes, Agatha Christie or anything else for a more real and mature outlook on what romance is, anything but Chinese webnovels for god's sake. Other than that, the science is interesting and the story is almost non-existent till this point. It's just an endless slice of life of him learning and talking to people around him in an environment that feels like it will quickly lose its meaning by virtue of whatever the supernatural element presented at the beginning is. I can only give it a score of 3.2 after reading so much.
I’m surprised by the quality of this story. I thought it would fall apart when he, with minimal interaction with his crush up to that point, revealed what he believed to be his biggest secret. Fortunately, the level of the story remained consistent. Now, there’s hope that this won’t be another promising story that gets abandoned.
Spoiler de révélation the story is OK, grammar and such are OK. the story isn't bad. I guess if you are into scientific formulae. the formulas really annoy me, and the way the mc talks by using hipster terms is annoying. Also, he is a genius, but he's trying to talk like the cool him. rge story is getting a little loopy also. the story was OK to read for free, but I wouldn't spend for it.
Way better after you get past the first 5 or 6 chapters. MC stops speaking like he's some 90s high school kid, and dialog between characters becomes way better to read. im starting to really love this novel.
I just want to ask the author of his background in math particularly statistics. I am quite interested in PDF estimation using Kernel Functions, but I am not really familiar with Bayesian something. I am solving these equations for me to be able to approximate the PDF for a research study of mine for Social Science about the relationship of distance of dorm rooms and the probability of friendship. It will also serve as practice for me to be able to use the Kelly Criterion by plugging a PDF instead of just a constant. I will maximize the growth of investment that way even if the probability has some level of uncertainty. I am also delving into Beta Distributions. Actually, I rarely have an internet connection so I rediscovered it myself. Anyways, the point of my comment is not to flex, but to find a colleague that has the same interests. Namely earning money by analyzing probability distribution functions.
this book told me that I was dumb in all types of ways so I decided not to be dumb and installed the app brilliant to get better at math and I realized that math could be fun ,because its the way its teached that makes it boring and tiring not math in of its self atleast for me. but any way the story isn't just about math but the mc geting general super intelligence and something deeper something more... but anyway wont spoil to much as this is my first review so things that I might say will probably be wrong.
I love this novel so much! It combines the science and slice of live aspect in such a nice way! Additionally, the bits of mystery which are slowly added to the story are also implemented fantasticly! For those who know the novel, it sometimes gives me "Scholar's Advanced Technological System" vibes but written in a better way with more story building and more specific! All in all, it's one of my favorite novels by far! Post Scriptum: I hope the Author keeps updating consistently and doesn't drop this!
Xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx
Spoiler de révélation Kinda nice. The MC is not egoistic right now so I want to see if it changes. I think it's cool to see an academic journey from him. I've read only one novel similar to this in the past.
Spoiler de révélation This is an interesting novel, not the best, but I'm digging it overall. Only thing, wish the MC wasn't so hard-bend on university live, anyways, it's pretty chill. and the main plot is starting to show up.
After the recent chapter I must write a review, the mystery is gearing up which is nice and some interesting plot-points are incomming. The science is pretty detailed. Wanna see how the author is gonna continue this.[img=update][img=update]
Interesting concept, a bit different than everything else I've read. There is no systwm, but there is something that makes him smarter, nothing that could be pinpointed at the moment. The ideas are described in detail, there are hot scenes and you can see the progress.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Interesting concept, a bit different than everything else I've read. There is no systwm, but there is something that makes him smarter, nothing that could be pinpointed at the moment. The ideas are described in detail, there are hot scenes and you can see the progress.
This is pretty good at the moment. There are some interesting fact used to make it more colorfull and I like the mystery, but it doesn't feel like a harem novel and the MC doesn't seem egoistic or arogant, so I'm looking forward to see how this will develop will he cheat on Oliv?
Spoiler de révélation I really enjoyed the first 14 chapters. The science is on point so far, I think the author is going for more of a scientific curiosities approach, at least in the later stages. The mystery is developing slowly. The hot scenes are pretty good. Some of the characters are interesting. I guess we have kind of an average guy becoming smart trope here. Will see where this goes. It's in the early stages, but I can't wait to read more of this. [img=update]
Shameless review from the Scholar here.This story is not simply about a smart MC who comes up with smart ideas and brings up technology to the table, as the mysteries start to unfold, and the characters change this will transform to a story about what lays beyond human reach.