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The story is super cool and straightforward, I predicted the swapping when I read the pronouns, that is an amazing way to keep engaging the readers.
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Great work. I really like how narrative and descriptive the writing style is. It really shows how good the Author is in terms of writing. The story is very interesting and unique and I hope it gets more attention from the readers.
Intriguing and awe-inspiring ,this is a great story to start with, well developed. love it's description vibe. great work
a very fast paced story done to it's finest, I love how the narrative is, The way you write, your choice of words to describe, everything is well done and placed I do hope you continue this book
You really know your ways to kickstart a story. Didn't realize I lost track of time whilst reading lol :) This is a criminally underrated story bruhh. I loved it so much![img=strong]
Definitely something I've never seen before. The story unfolds at a breakneck pace, incredibly fast-paced. I expected the main character to take a few chapters to adjust to the new body, but BAM!! He's already changed! He plunges headfirst into revenge! However, it's this very pace that keeps you engaged and immerses you further into the narrative. A fantastic story! Ganbatte
Unique read and has potential, Li Wei has been soul-swapped with a guy's body in an urban cultivation world. The amazing part was the updates per chapter speed was insane. Has to work on some sentence flow but overall it was good. Keep it up author!
A very well done work till now. Good pacing and writing. I hope the plot blooms as the author continue to upload. Loving it so far.
The story is super cool and straightforward, I predicted the swapping when I read the pronouns, that is an amazing way to keep engaging the readers.
Spoiler de révélation Great work. I really like how narrative and descriptive the writing style is. It really shows how good the Author is in terms of writing. The story is very interesting and unique and I hope it gets more attention from the readers.
Intriguing and awe-inspiring ,this is a great story to start with, well developed. love it's description vibe. great work
a very fast paced story done to it's finest, I love how the narrative is, The way you write, your choice of words to describe, everything is well done and placed I do hope you continue this book
You really know your ways to kickstart a story. Didn't realize I lost track of time whilst reading lol :) This is a criminally underrated story bruhh. I loved it so much![img=strong]
Definitely something I've never seen before. The story unfolds at a breakneck pace, incredibly fast-paced. I expected the main character to take a few chapters to adjust to the new body, but BAM!! He's already changed! He plunges headfirst into revenge! However, it's this very pace that keeps you engaged and immerses you further into the narrative. A fantastic story! Ganbatte
Unique read and has potential, Li Wei has been soul-swapped with a guy's body in an urban cultivation world. The amazing part was the updates per chapter speed was insane. Has to work on some sentence flow but overall it was good. Keep it up author!
A very well done work till now. Good pacing and writing. I hope the plot blooms as the author continue to upload. Loving it so far.