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Love it don’t know why I gave a review this late when I have almost been here since the start of this
really, like the reincarnated man reshapes history. Also, it's really fun read.
It’s a very good story from what I’ve read with great writing. Sadly the mistakes were to big and many for me to keep reading but that is only because of the lack of realism in the novel I think those that can get around that would love the book and do recommend it to them. Now onto why I can’t keep reading it sadly. First off the child has his mothers last name which wouldn’t happen unless she was a prostitute or someone who has slept with a random person other than that his should have his fathers as at this time only when you don’t know the fathers name do you give him his mothers last name. Secondly they are a wealthy family but don’t act like it but more like a modern one. This is one of the two or three major problems I had with it. He had to ask his grandfather for tutoring when a wealthy family would have started it at probably five on their own. He then gets a random servents son who trespassed on his private tree house sort of like just doing what you want in someone’s room which servents can’t do never the less their children. The grandfather then asks the servant if her child could learn with his son which would not be allowed and wouldn’t ask her as she is a women and for this time period their opinion doesn’t matter at all. The MC is already placing his modern ideals into the story with no repercussions and in an unrealistic way. The mother is still unmarried which would be realistic if she had a child outside marriage normally but they are a wealthy family so would be able to find a less wealthy family to marry her into but doesn’t. Also the granfather doesn’t look for any betrothals for his grandson who would be his heir which is also unrealistic as at age 16 you are expected to have your first child and they are an influential family so they should already look for one in other families for connections or just of equal wealth for relations between the families and so they don’t have to marry into lesser families. All in all other than the unrealism it’s a great novel that I would recommend if you can get around that.
good book always liked historical transmigration novels please edit "lesion" to "lesson" I'm a nursing student so I'm always picturing tissue lesions when reading the word.
I’ve only said this once before,about 4 years ago.This is one of the best books out there please don’t leave it on patreon.
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I really like the book so far. and I like the attention to detail. only problem is it needs more chapters
Love it one of my favorite time periods of history to read about. 2 questions 1. What will MC political affiliation be Federalist or Democratic Republican 2. Who is love interest or will there be none, and if there will be will his political side decide who that will be, because if he Federalist I would say daughter of John Adams or OC child of Washington and if Democratic Repuclican I would say daughter of Jefferson or Madison
Thank you for bring something I've always wanted to read but always found trash instead, so please continue to be the goat who brought something to us that no one, or rarely, has been able to accomplish.
This story is fantastic. Love the writing and concept, can't wait for more.
Not what I was expecting , but I love the idea so I read all the available chapters out right now and I have to say this is amazing can’t wait for more !
really great, not too unrealistic and "overpowered", but still progression and so on
Me encanta está historia por favor continúa con la escritura y si es posible con más frecuencia. Honestamente me importa menos los grandes discursos revolucionarios que el desarrollo coherente tecnológico y económico, o la inestabilidad social, pero de momento me gusta mucho.
Love the book so far seems like a really interesting direction to take the story can't wait for more updates
Me encanta este tipo de historia ojalá actualizará con más frecuencia. También me gustaría conocer alguna historia de este tipo solo conozco un par similares y de verdad que es una temática específica que disfruto.
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this is really good but sometimes there's ome or two cringe worthy moments... but don't be discouraged this novel has great potential
Great book author at first I didn’t think it would be this good I the way the character interact with each other. Also the unique business ideas that you come up with
I think that's a great original story. It might be a good idea to create a compromise, between the colonies and England, similar to how Ireland got its independance. Some historians say the lack of communication let to the war, but with a moderate negotiator such as John, they might come to an agreement.
This novel is looking promising. MC is not an a...hole with supper ego or OP and shows emotions beside happiness.Please, if it is possible, and not too time-consuming. Add some pictures as a comment.
Love the story very interesting concept wish you all the luck in keeping the quality of the novel consistent
The writing quality is great, nothing a newbie like me can provide an opinion for. I know you said you'll do weekly updates and I'm really exited to see what happens next. The story is developing nicely, I like how you handled the father situation. It added an extra layer to the characters that I really enjoyed. I hope you can do more with Eli, his relationship with John hasn't been explored much now that they are teenagers. I don't remember if you had an pictures for the characters, but the cover art is really cool and I'm assuming that's the main character. The world background is done really well, I personally do not like to research much when writing a story as I feel like that ruins the fun for me a little bit. But I can appreciate it when you can tell that an author knows what they are talking about. Especially with the complicated history of America's independence.
Love it don’t know why I gave a review this late when I have almost been here since the start of this
really, like the reincarnated man reshapes history. Also, it's really fun read.
It’s a very good story from what I’ve read with great writing. Sadly the mistakes were to big and many for me to keep reading but that is only because of the lack of realism in the novel I think those that can get around that would love the book and do recommend it to them. Now onto why I can’t keep reading it sadly. First off the child has his mothers last name which wouldn’t happen unless she was a prostitute or someone who has slept with a random person other than that his should have his fathers as at this time only when you don’t know the fathers name do you give him his mothers last name. Secondly they are a wealthy family but don’t act like it but more like a modern one. This is one of the two or three major problems I had with it. He had to ask his grandfather for tutoring when a wealthy family would have started it at probably five on their own. He then gets a random servents son who trespassed on his private tree house sort of like just doing what you want in someone’s room which servents can’t do never the less their children. The grandfather then asks the servant if her child could learn with his son which would not be allowed and wouldn’t ask her as she is a women and for this time period their opinion doesn’t matter at all. The MC is already placing his modern ideals into the story with no repercussions and in an unrealistic way. The mother is still unmarried which would be realistic if she had a child outside marriage normally but they are a wealthy family so would be able to find a less wealthy family to marry her into but doesn’t. Also the granfather doesn’t look for any betrothals for his grandson who would be his heir which is also unrealistic as at age 16 you are expected to have your first child and they are an influential family so they should already look for one in other families for connections or just of equal wealth for relations between the families and so they don’t have to marry into lesser families. All in all other than the unrealism it’s a great novel that I would recommend if you can get around that.
good book always liked historical transmigration novels please edit "lesion" to "lesson" I'm a nursing student so I'm always picturing tissue lesions when reading the word.
I’ve only said this once before,about 4 years ago.This is one of the best books out there please don’t leave it on patreon.
Spoiler de révélation I really like the book so far. and I like the attention to detail. only problem is it needs more chapters
Love it one of my favorite time periods of history to read about. 2 questions 1. What will MC political affiliation be Federalist or Democratic Republican 2. Who is love interest or will there be none, and if there will be will his political side decide who that will be, because if he Federalist I would say daughter of John Adams or OC child of Washington and if Democratic Repuclican I would say daughter of Jefferson or Madison
Thank you for bring something I've always wanted to read but always found trash instead, so please continue to be the goat who brought something to us that no one, or rarely, has been able to accomplish.
This story is fantastic. Love the writing and concept, can't wait for more.
Not what I was expecting , but I love the idea so I read all the available chapters out right now and I have to say this is amazing can’t wait for more !
really great, not too unrealistic and "overpowered", but still progression and so on
Me encanta está historia por favor continúa con la escritura y si es posible con más frecuencia. Honestamente me importa menos los grandes discursos revolucionarios que el desarrollo coherente tecnológico y económico, o la inestabilidad social, pero de momento me gusta mucho.
Love the book so far seems like a really interesting direction to take the story can't wait for more updates
Me encanta este tipo de historia ojalá actualizará con más frecuencia. También me gustaría conocer alguna historia de este tipo solo conozco un par similares y de verdad que es una temática específica que disfruto.
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this is really good but sometimes there's ome or two cringe worthy moments... but don't be discouraged this novel has great potential
Great book author at first I didn’t think it would be this good I the way the character interact with each other. Also the unique business ideas that you come up with
I think that's a great original story. It might be a good idea to create a compromise, between the colonies and England, similar to how Ireland got its independance. Some historians say the lack of communication let to the war, but with a moderate negotiator such as John, they might come to an agreement.
This novel is looking promising. MC is not an a...hole with supper ego or OP and shows emotions beside happiness.Please, if it is possible, and not too time-consuming. Add some pictures as a comment.
Love the story very interesting concept wish you all the luck in keeping the quality of the novel consistent
The writing quality is great, nothing a newbie like me can provide an opinion for. I know you said you'll do weekly updates and I'm really exited to see what happens next. The story is developing nicely, I like how you handled the father situation. It added an extra layer to the characters that I really enjoyed. I hope you can do more with Eli, his relationship with John hasn't been explored much now that they are teenagers. I don't remember if you had an pictures for the characters, but the cover art is really cool and I'm assuming that's the main character. The world background is done really well, I personally do not like to research much when writing a story as I feel like that ruins the fun for me a little bit. But I can appreciate it when you can tell that an author knows what they are talking about. Especially with the complicated history of America's independence.