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Author Review -I don't know much whether my writing quality has improved to my first ever story. But I do think that I have at least become better at it. The updates of the story would be slow as I am not doing this as a full-time job so please forgive me about that. About the plot, character, and the world background... Well, it's a surprise.
Hey, update more chapter or else we readers will call the madara uchiha and start fourth great ninja war
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sorry, for not giving chapters for such a long time, but be happy guys, because now I am back with a lot of chapters which are even better than previous ones. hold your hearts.
We want more chapter! We want more chapter! We want more chapter! We want more chapter! We want more chapter! We want more chapter! We want more chapter!
please keep the chapters coming or we will come with all the villains there are to demand more chapters, because we readers are all together in this war of wanting more chapters.
[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] We want more chapters, because this is right of readers, support my comment other readers
[img=More pls]chapters, author this books deserve more chapters, please keep uploading
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Author Review -I don't know much whether my writing quality has improved to my first ever story. But I do think that I have at least become better at it. The updates of the story would be slow as I am not doing this as a full-time job so please forgive me about that. About the plot, character, and the world background... Well, it's a surprise.