Doom_Writer

Doom_Writer

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2023-08-05 Joint Australia
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Doom_Writer
1 years ago
Posted

Approve.The first chapter is extra exciting and intriguing, followed by the awakening of the Mc and his unique skills. So far I didn't find problems in writing quality. That is all! Please upload more chapters 🙏.

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Doom_Writer
1 years ago
Posted

Story- Good Power system- good Story potential- exceptional Character development- Above average Emotional prospective- Need little improvement System Designing- Exceptional Keep up good work

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Doom_Writer
1 years ago
Posted

sorry, for not giving chapters for such a long time, but be happy guys, because now I am back with a lot of chapters which are even better than previous ones. hold your hearts.

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Doom_Writer
1 years ago
Posted

More Chapter! More Chapter! More Chapter! More Chapter! More Chapter! More Chapter! More Chapter! More Chapter! More Chapter! More Chapter!

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Doom_Writer
1 years ago
Posted

You better write more chapter. Because I am waiting here for them

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Doom_Writer
1 years ago
Replied to DaoistwOqXyh

Done solving problem.

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Doom_Writer
1 years ago
Replied to DaoistwOqXyh

But if you message it mean you kind of liked story right. Thank you message. I will correct it.

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Doom_Writer
1 years ago
Replied to DaoistwwYBDC

thank your for review, and enjoy the story.

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