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Novel is pretty entertaining. Thank you for novel ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Not a bad story per se. It's entertaining and the author has put some thoughts into it. There's no plot or planned path for the MC. It's a more casual approach to writing. Though, at some point, it becomes clear that the author has become constrained by his own MC power. Both because its potential is too high and its drawback are equally devastating. It's not an ability that anyone would wish to have. Because rather than controlling it, it controls you. I think the author was a bit too ambitious with this ability. But otherwise, it was a pleasant ride. The writing style was funny and interesting to read.
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good story and understandable nerf. however it was a bit zero to 100 on conceqences. more plez
Your stupid if you think the nerve t set is a good idea there are many other ways you could’ve set him back but no you act like a idiot
I love the story please don't cancel it and I understand that you had to nerf the ability it makes since when you think of it.
For a hesitant reader that isn't sure if they should read it or not, YOU SHOULD!!Spoilers:TBH, I never met a story that has a plot twist like this! it's not actually a plot twist but it kind of is, and thats'swhat makes it so unique and addictive! i didnt even finish HXH nor watch Naruto, and the fact you explain the things/powers/characters made it much more addictive to read! Its has a very good plot, that doesn't just make the OC follow the MC/s or plot. The OC isnt'tannoyingly overpowered, he is but to the point it's controlled and chapter 20-21 really made it much more controlled than ever. It also told me a much more deeper understanding in the OC's character and personality.It has its own life, and that's really rare to come by! I like it so much, I started hitting my pillow when I reached the last chapter updated. I rarely do that unless the story is really good, I'm disappointed that ended, or if I'm having butterflies or thrill.
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The chapter 20 ruins some things and is against The nen logical, but The rest of the history is meh, its a good pastime. .........................
4-5-5-2-2: 3.6 Sometimes thwre are wrong words used, so I deducted a point. The story development os great so far, not too tedious to read and well paced enough to keep you interested. The characters so far is similar to their OG counterparts. The updating stability, is random. I'm not sure if this is dropped. WB, Author made a doozy about vows and nen rules. I get that the nerf is needed, but it was executed poorly.
[From solid 5/5 star to 3.8/5 star] Its been very clear to me that READERS dont like MCs who are slave to their golden finger, asking mc for such a steep price and MC having no way than to comply literally gutted the story for me. MC gave up 2 OP skill to use this loophole and shoul've been allowed. Also, if he broke the rule, removing his access to merchant shop for a fix amount of time like a month or year or increasing the time limit of shop would've punishiment enough instead of turning him into system slave. The way merchant forced him with physical punsihment and literally ripping out a core skill from him shows what is given can be taken away in a whim. God forbid mc break any of the merchant rule in the future and he'd end up cripple with all the skill, experience and strength taken from him. What do you call it if not system slave?!
Good story so far, it’s hard to find a good and creative hxh fanfic. No major spelling or grammar errors. Unique and interesting Nen ability. It's a little fast-passed would be my only complaint.
so many dumb people I don't get why they give 1 star for ch 20 if it is not to your liking still why 1 star is story not good. only for people who gave 1 star for ch 20
I understand why many give 1 star; the author made a mistake in the laws of Nen. I'll give an example: is there a Nen user in HxH who doesn't know about the boundaries or oaths that the user can't break? Nothing, even Kurapika, knows that the limitation of one of his Hatsu (Chain Jail) cannot be used other than by members of the Gennei Ryodan; if Kurapika violates the rule, he will die (HxH Episode 47). So in conclusion, there isn't a single Nen user in the entire Hunter X Hunter series who doesn't know a boundary that shouldn't be crossed. Meanwhile, our MC actually violates these limits because he doesn't know, Where is this common sense?
I was honestly going to wait a little more before writing a review, but the cry babies with those 1 star reviews forced my hand. The story starts in the hunter exam arc like most HxH fanfics, however the author skims through this arc pretty fast which I liked. The Mc ends up going to heavens arena but does not spend a lot of time with gon and killua. The Mc is his own character, not just someone following gon and reliving the canon. The interactions between characters need a little more work but is still good enough. His hatsu is pretty op and would have probably made him stronger than the ant king by the time the chimera arc starts, which was why it needed a small nerf (chapter 20). He is still very op and will likely surpass netero in the future, so no issues there. Updates have been stable up till now so give it a try, it's better than 99% of HxH fanfics.
If you read up to chapter 20, you will know why this deserves 1 star ...........................................................................
This is a pretty good hxh fanfic compared to almost all of the other ones I have read. The main character is strong but isn’t so strong that he has no problems. The story has good pacing. And even though the author needs him he does it in a way that makes sense especially for the world of hxh. The nerf isn’t even that bad and his ability is still really good. He tried cheating the nen system of hxh and got hit with the consequences of his actions.
Story is good so far ( cap 21). Don't understand why some people are dissatisfied with cap 20 ( and giving bad review's at that). Nen is a give and take kind of power, so it is not far fetched. Just look at kurapika's power's. Giving it 5 stars to counter som of the bad review's.
Começou bem mais aí no penúltimo capítulo o autor cagou em tudo e depois piorou mais ainda tô fora :) ....................................................... .............................................................................................................. ....................................................... ....................................................... .............................................................................................................. ....................................................... ....................................................... .............................................................................................................. .......................................................
The fun of the story got spoiled after Chapter 20 😢[img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update]
Chapter 20 was a huge disappointment. His own hatsu cripples him.I would have been fine with the nerf to his random ability. I would have even liked it, but taking away abilities he already has is stupid. Add on top bodily mutilation and his own ability screwing him over for breaking never established rules.Could have made it so he has beginner's boost for the first few months, and then you go to new monthly pulls.Might change my rating depending on the authors response or drop altogether.
It's ok … But at CHP 20 it went down bad … nerfed MC and his NEN has power over him more than he has over it, lame, that's why I hate random power ups based on luck!
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I've been wanting to read a HxH ff and this one hits all the right notes. Keep up the good work.
Man this is one of the best or perhaps the best HxH fanfic out there! The writting is of high quality, the Hatsu is original, OP but not too OP. The only thing that will make the story is if the Bleach prize he will get to choose will work on Nen. I don’t want it to be some kind of MC with Reitsu instead of Nen. The updates are once a day which is good. We are only at the start of the story so we didn’t get a big character development but from what I have seen so far it’s ok. Nothing exceptional but again we are at the start of the story
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5 stars just because it's a hxh ff🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑
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Novel is pretty entertaining. Thank you for novel ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Not a bad story per se. It's entertaining and the author has put some thoughts into it. There's no plot or planned path for the MC. It's a more casual approach to writing. Though, at some point, it becomes clear that the author has become constrained by his own MC power. Both because its potential is too high and its drawback are equally devastating. It's not an ability that anyone would wish to have. Because rather than controlling it, it controls you. I think the author was a bit too ambitious with this ability. But otherwise, it was a pleasant ride. The writing style was funny and interesting to read.
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good story and understandable nerf. however it was a bit zero to 100 on conceqences. more plez
Your stupid if you think the nerve t set is a good idea there are many other ways you could’ve set him back but no you act like a idiot
I love the story please don't cancel it and I understand that you had to nerf the ability it makes since when you think of it.
For a hesitant reader that isn't sure if they should read it or not, YOU SHOULD!!Spoilers:TBH, I never met a story that has a plot twist like this! it's not actually a plot twist but it kind of is, and thats'swhat makes it so unique and addictive! i didnt even finish HXH nor watch Naruto, and the fact you explain the things/powers/characters made it much more addictive to read! Its has a very good plot, that doesn't just make the OC follow the MC/s or plot. The OC isnt'tannoyingly overpowered, he is but to the point it's controlled and chapter 20-21 really made it much more controlled than ever. It also told me a much more deeper understanding in the OC's character and personality.It has its own life, and that's really rare to come by! I like it so much, I started hitting my pillow when I reached the last chapter updated. I rarely do that unless the story is really good, I'm disappointed that ended, or if I'm having butterflies or thrill.
Spoiler de révélation The chapter 20 ruins some things and is against The nen logical, but The rest of the history is meh, its a good pastime. .........................
4-5-5-2-2: 3.6 Sometimes thwre are wrong words used, so I deducted a point. The story development os great so far, not too tedious to read and well paced enough to keep you interested. The characters so far is similar to their OG counterparts. The updating stability, is random. I'm not sure if this is dropped. WB, Author made a doozy about vows and nen rules. I get that the nerf is needed, but it was executed poorly.
[From solid 5/5 star to 3.8/5 star] Its been very clear to me that READERS dont like MCs who are slave to their golden finger, asking mc for such a steep price and MC having no way than to comply literally gutted the story for me. MC gave up 2 OP skill to use this loophole and shoul've been allowed. Also, if he broke the rule, removing his access to merchant shop for a fix amount of time like a month or year or increasing the time limit of shop would've punishiment enough instead of turning him into system slave. The way merchant forced him with physical punsihment and literally ripping out a core skill from him shows what is given can be taken away in a whim. God forbid mc break any of the merchant rule in the future and he'd end up cripple with all the skill, experience and strength taken from him. What do you call it if not system slave?!
Good story so far, it’s hard to find a good and creative hxh fanfic. No major spelling or grammar errors. Unique and interesting Nen ability. It's a little fast-passed would be my only complaint.
so many dumb people I don't get why they give 1 star for ch 20 if it is not to your liking still why 1 star is story not good. only for people who gave 1 star for ch 20
I understand why many give 1 star; the author made a mistake in the laws of Nen. I'll give an example: is there a Nen user in HxH who doesn't know about the boundaries or oaths that the user can't break? Nothing, even Kurapika, knows that the limitation of one of his Hatsu (Chain Jail) cannot be used other than by members of the Gennei Ryodan; if Kurapika violates the rule, he will die (HxH Episode 47). So in conclusion, there isn't a single Nen user in the entire Hunter X Hunter series who doesn't know a boundary that shouldn't be crossed. Meanwhile, our MC actually violates these limits because he doesn't know, Where is this common sense?
I was honestly going to wait a little more before writing a review, but the cry babies with those 1 star reviews forced my hand. The story starts in the hunter exam arc like most HxH fanfics, however the author skims through this arc pretty fast which I liked. The Mc ends up going to heavens arena but does not spend a lot of time with gon and killua. The Mc is his own character, not just someone following gon and reliving the canon. The interactions between characters need a little more work but is still good enough. His hatsu is pretty op and would have probably made him stronger than the ant king by the time the chimera arc starts, which was why it needed a small nerf (chapter 20). He is still very op and will likely surpass netero in the future, so no issues there. Updates have been stable up till now so give it a try, it's better than 99% of HxH fanfics.
If you read up to chapter 20, you will know why this deserves 1 star ...........................................................................
This is a pretty good hxh fanfic compared to almost all of the other ones I have read. The main character is strong but isn’t so strong that he has no problems. The story has good pacing. And even though the author needs him he does it in a way that makes sense especially for the world of hxh. The nerf isn’t even that bad and his ability is still really good. He tried cheating the nen system of hxh and got hit with the consequences of his actions.
Story is good so far ( cap 21). Don't understand why some people are dissatisfied with cap 20 ( and giving bad review's at that). Nen is a give and take kind of power, so it is not far fetched. Just look at kurapika's power's. Giving it 5 stars to counter som of the bad review's.
Começou bem mais aí no penúltimo capítulo o autor cagou em tudo e depois piorou mais ainda tô fora :) ....................................................... .............................................................................................................. ....................................................... ....................................................... .............................................................................................................. ....................................................... ....................................................... .............................................................................................................. .......................................................
The fun of the story got spoiled after Chapter 20 😢[img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=fp][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update]
Chapter 20 was a huge disappointment. His own hatsu cripples him.I would have been fine with the nerf to his random ability. I would have even liked it, but taking away abilities he already has is stupid. Add on top bodily mutilation and his own ability screwing him over for breaking never established rules.Could have made it so he has beginner's boost for the first few months, and then you go to new monthly pulls.Might change my rating depending on the authors response or drop altogether.
It's ok … But at CHP 20 it went down bad … nerfed MC and his NEN has power over him more than he has over it, lame, that's why I hate random power ups based on luck!
Spoiler de révélation I've been wanting to read a HxH ff and this one hits all the right notes. Keep up the good work.
Man this is one of the best or perhaps the best HxH fanfic out there! The writting is of high quality, the Hatsu is original, OP but not too OP. The only thing that will make the story is if the Bleach prize he will get to choose will work on Nen. I don’t want it to be some kind of MC with Reitsu instead of Nen. The updates are once a day which is good. We are only at the start of the story so we didn’t get a big character development but from what I have seen so far it’s ok. Nothing exceptional but again we are at the start of the story
Spoiler de révélation 5 stars just because it's a hxh ff🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑🍑
where are you love the story need more plz