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3.6 / 5 I like the story. The OG of the story is pretty interesting even if he is as generic as he could possibly be. My problem with the story is the following: essentially the first 10 chapters are a quick recap of the Hunter exam. Nothing really changes and we get a condensed version focusing almost solely on the OG. It's pretty interesting but nothing special. The author has so many chances to describe fights in details, explain things, expand the world... he just does not do it. A small spoiler here: The MC is a specialist... he of course does the test featuring the glas with water with a leaf on top. Every HXH fan knows: specialists have UNIQUE responses to the test and every time something different happens... so what happens for our mc? We do not now. The author decides to skip it and just writes a 1 liner where the mc says: "so I am a specialist". This type of writing runs like a red thread through the story. It's IMO lazy and boring writing even though the author has a pretty decent plot going for himself. Overall I still like the story and maybe I am just a bit harsher than all those "I like it so 5/5" drones but I feel at this point it may have potential but it also has obvious flaws that stop it from being a top story here.
Pretty great so far, his hatsu is strong and has the potential to make him op. All in all worth a read 👍
HxH wow ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
no he leido nada pero por la frescura de HXH te doy 5 estrellas. que la FUERZA te guie que la motivacion te acompañe que la depravacion se aleje de esta novela y que los lectores no molesten tanto
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I have high hope, I'm in need of HxH ff and you provide me with one so I hope you do a good job
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3.6 / 5 I like the story. The OG of the story is pretty interesting even if he is as generic as he could possibly be. My problem with the story is the following: essentially the first 10 chapters are a quick recap of the Hunter exam. Nothing really changes and we get a condensed version focusing almost solely on the OG. It's pretty interesting but nothing special. The author has so many chances to describe fights in details, explain things, expand the world... he just does not do it. A small spoiler here: The MC is a specialist... he of course does the test featuring the glas with water with a leaf on top. Every HXH fan knows: specialists have UNIQUE responses to the test and every time something different happens... so what happens for our mc? We do not now. The author decides to skip it and just writes a 1 liner where the mc says: "so I am a specialist". This type of writing runs like a red thread through the story. It's IMO lazy and boring writing even though the author has a pretty decent plot going for himself. Overall I still like the story and maybe I am just a bit harsher than all those "I like it so 5/5" drones but I feel at this point it may have potential but it also has obvious flaws that stop it from being a top story here.
Pretty great so far, his hatsu is strong and has the potential to make him op. All in all worth a read 👍
HxH wow ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
no he leido nada pero por la frescura de HXH te doy 5 estrellas. que la FUERZA te guie que la motivacion te acompañe que la depravacion se aleje de esta novela y que los lectores no molesten tanto
Spoiler de révélation I have high hope, I'm in need of HxH ff and you provide me with one so I hope you do a good job
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