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- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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I see a lot of potential in this novel, I'll let the chapters accumulate, don't disappoint. _____________________________________________________
Love it so far! ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..…………………………………………………………………………. …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..………………………………………………………………………….
I was reluctant to give a comment on my own work, but since there are many people appreciating it, I would like to ask you to visit my official account, HenriqueB2_0, which has already left a review. THX
Hi how are you? here is the same author of this Fan-fic, I'm here to ask that the fans of this Fan-Fic, pass in my official book, he is very good too, whoever is by Fan-fic comment on your favorite character of Fan-fic, down here this account of Fan-fic will state what I'm talking about
parabéns pelo história mano, tem uns erros(provavelmente na hora da tradução) aqui e ali, mas a história tá bem legal, duas sugestões uma de fazer capítulos um pouco maiores e se teria como você postar em português também? Sucesso
I see a lot of potential in this novel, I'll let the chapters accumulate, don't disappoint. _____________________________________________________
Love it so far! ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..…………………………………………………………………………. …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..………………………………………………………………………….
I was reluctant to give a comment on my own work, but since there are many people appreciating it, I would like to ask you to visit my official account, HenriqueB2_0, which has already left a review. THX
Hi how are you? here is the same author of this Fan-fic, I'm here to ask that the fans of this Fan-Fic, pass in my official book, he is very good too, whoever is by Fan-fic comment on your favorite character of Fan-fic, down here this account of Fan-fic will state what I'm talking about
parabéns pelo história mano, tem uns erros(provavelmente na hora da tradução) aqui e ali, mas a história tá bem legal, duas sugestões uma de fazer capítulos um pouco maiores e se teria como você postar em português também? Sucesso