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I’m all for slow burn stories but I just don’t get the appeal of this one. It’s boring and I have no investment. Some of you might like this one but compared to some of the other novels in this trial read… I think this is one of the weaker ones.
Haven’t read it yet, but most other replies say it’s mediocre. Though from the synopsis, I think the novel is anout Johnny Sins and his kid. I mean who else but the man, the myth, and the legend himself can have so many different jobs at the same time…
Spoiler de révélation
In many countries, bringing a pocket knife into a school is a federal crime, much less a gun/grenade/tear gas.
Very bad novel. Kid bringing gun with rubber bullets and tear gas to school. Police go to the house to arrest the father and find black military technology and get scared.
trash thing the plot is he has tech his daughter invite police to his house house good good tech makes them astonish they wonder who he is they play with her daughter daughter cute repeat and slight racism from the start honestly it's a bad writing no substance we dont even get to see the mc till now it's 30 chapters already
Almost twenty chapters of setup. unless the whole story is told from second and third party perspectives. I'm tired of trying to get to the story proper. I'm done reading. The writing is decent though and the story is kinda interesting despite many typical flaws. I'm just not interested.
I tried looking for it in English but I didn’t find it try looking up in Chinese mainland language but it didn’t come up with any results either
Please release this novel.... Tbh this is the only interesting one so far in this pilot read🤷
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I’m all for slow burn stories but I just don’t get the appeal of this one. It’s boring and I have no investment. Some of you might like this one but compared to some of the other novels in this trial read… I think this is one of the weaker ones.
Haven’t read it yet, but most other replies say it’s mediocre. Though from the synopsis, I think the novel is anout Johnny Sins and his kid. I mean who else but the man, the myth, and the legend himself can have so many different jobs at the same time…
Spoiler de révélation In many countries, bringing a pocket knife into a school is a federal crime, much less a gun/grenade/tear gas.
Very bad novel. Kid bringing gun with rubber bullets and tear gas to school. Police go to the house to arrest the father and find black military technology and get scared.
trash thing the plot is he has tech his daughter invite police to his house house good good tech makes them astonish they wonder who he is they play with her daughter daughter cute repeat and slight racism from the start honestly it's a bad writing no substance we dont even get to see the mc till now it's 30 chapters already
Almost twenty chapters of setup. unless the whole story is told from second and third party perspectives. I'm tired of trying to get to the story proper. I'm done reading. The writing is decent though and the story is kinda interesting despite many typical flaws. I'm just not interested.
I tried looking for it in English but I didn’t find it try looking up in Chinese mainland language but it didn’t come up with any results either
Please release this novel.... Tbh this is the only interesting one so far in this pilot read🤷
raw??????????,,,?????????????,,,?????????????,,,?????????????,,,????????????,,,?????????????,,,?????????????,,,?????????????,,,???
this book is funny and has lots of potential.