Well, that's (my comment)my guess .
ch 148 Forcibly Assimilate Each Family
Fantasy · Whisk92
Bruh😐😑😮💨 With my personality, Eve if I am lacking manpower, I can never employ such a weak minded person to be included into such a secret operation — referring to the official.
ch 152 Destroying the Data
Fantasy · Whisk92
I don't know why you keep leaving Daphne without enslaving or bounding her, cuz out of all the players in that little organization squad, only Daphne isn't enslaved. Is this a plot key or point, where Daphne turns out to be the person to betray Sterl?
ch 148 Forcibly Assimilate Each Family
Fantasy · Whisk92
I thought you can't log out of the game unless you die, so who's gonna give them the info that they are traitors?
"First, we'll deal with your game characters. Then, in the real world, you will face a second trial!"
Fantasy · Whisk92
Yeah, she should go and die. I mean, why don't this kind of characters stay at home and stop causing trouble for people, usually needing rescue. What is a 14 year old business looking for Ice Lilies in that Great Forest, and into its depth too. Who sent you? Who begged you? She should just die, and not try acting cute and clingy with the MC.
'Why is this happening to me...? All I wanted to do was find a few 1000-year-old Ice Lilies growing out in the depths of the Great Wildlands Forest for my Grandmother's 12,000th birthday celebration, and yet...' Aqua gritted her teeth in anger before an expressionless look emerged on her small face.
Eastern · Astral_Pandemonium
For my first point about inappropriately putting female characters in almost every position, I was trying to emphasize on how it disrupts certain things, and makes some of the plot illogical or weird (I don't know a better word to use)
ch 13 Lara the Lighting Queen
Fantasy · Pen_Drop
I feel like I should just say this here, although some people might label it misogynistic. I feel like most authors this days, excluding CN authors who do such stuff 'normally', utilize their 🍆s while writing. Look at books like Global Awakening I got an SSS level Library system, Apocalypse - Infinite Plunder and so many more, you realize that most character roles are being inappropriately assigned to female characters. Yeah, nothing's 'wrong' with it especially the Global one, since it isn't that serious, but I believe that when a teacher and student start being too intimate, that relationship is no longer teacher-student, and the respect or reverence won't be the same. I am not gonna talk about the Apocalypse one were MC outrightly said that men shouldn't come into his shelter - that's where I stopped. I believe all this are caused because authors just keep placing characters in place, so that the MC can plough their holes or find a new romantic relationship. The whole kind of feels off, especially to me who uses logical thinking when reading original and non-chinese books (that is original works made on webnovel platform). Also there's the ones about females being leaders in various high positions, which isn't inappropriate if done correctly, but then, you the reader, realize that they all later had relationships and seggs with the MC in the future, or later joined his harem, which this isn't the main reason I'm pissed. I am pissed at the fact that in most of this books, the female leaders, elders and ancient beings, all adopted or have a youthful and beautiful appearance or body, but if it were a male elder, or leader, or ancient being, they always or mostly adopt elderly and old and wrinkled appearance, with most of them being hunch-backed. Does that seem logical or reasonable to you? If the female elders could maintain their youthful appearances from cultivating, with the note that elders are usually very talented geniuses or prodigies from previous generations, then, the males should be talented enough to be able to cultivate and retain his youthful appearance. There are many more vexes of mine, but I feel like I've 'yapped' enough.
ch 13 Lara the Lighting Queen
Fantasy · Pen_Drop
I'm calling this book for what it is, Cliché and cringey. I literally almost entered the book to fight this Feng Chen guy. Also considering that I literally predicted almost all his actions. If I knew it was a translated Chinese novel, I wouldn't be this vexed, but I started the book thinking it was an original work on webnovel.
ch 0 5 Chapter 005 Refusal
Eastern · Seven Luan
Bro, a person without a core, regardless of the fact that they are strategists, can't go to a war of such level, not to talk of surviving it.
Asura turned around only for his gaze to freeze momentarily as he saw a world surrounded by a burning wasteland. A woman with countless blades penetrating her body, blood pouring down as she refused to fall to her knees.
Fantasy · TheDragonSlayer
I don't know but I feel like he should have added his own wager that could significantly benefit him, and not just obediently accept Oscar's wager
ch 0 3 After A Gamble Bold, Loyalty Plummets to Twenty-Five!
Fantasy · we11doneyuris
🤨... I can't be bothered to argue with someone who doesn't get the point of my comment 😒
He deliberately omitted the part about his death experience and coming back to life. Instead, he tweaked the story slightly, not wanting them to be angry, knowing how fond they were of him.
Fantasy · Sam_OverPowered
Well, actually, people who can shamelessly and boldly say such things do exist. Came across quite a number of such people boldly stating it in podcasts from "UTube" shorts. Quite surprising, right?
"Hmph pussy. I have three boyfriends but I still get fucked by all men." The girl scoffed him off and went to a group of boys who were all alone.
Action · StumblingtoSuccess
Then, it should be specified and not bringing reader's expectations high with the word "anything" that the MC asked for.
ch 18 Chapter 18 - So Many Problems
Urban · Darpan_Biswas
Purchase it from the system, I thought the system was meant to sell everything including talents and houses, cultivation energy or mana, food, if not, then the author should clarify it, after all, the MC requested for a system shop were he could buy literally anything with the money he conjured. So in a sense, the MC can solely survive off of the countless resources from the system; based on the wide scope covered by the word "anything", he should be able to buy cultivation levels, talents, slaves, houses or secret realms, and so on, not to talk of mere ID.
I can procure a ID card from an Forgery specialist. But there's a another problem, I don't know any person who can do forgery or someone who knows a guy who knows a guy who knows someone who does forgery.
Urban · Darpan_Biswas
Really ? A demon "empress" bloodline for a male demon? I believe "emperor" sounds suitable
ch 0 5 Student Rewards ( Extra Chapters )
Fantasy · StrikerAuthor
I don't like how the powerful E-rank skill was replaced, I feel like he got nerfed for no reason 🤔😞
ch 0 4 Enslaving The Goddess (1)
Fantasy · Juan_Tenorio
With the large number of webnovels I've read, it's hard for me to believe that this goddess doesn't have a hand in their death 🧐. Also looks suspicious, her saying that she doesn't mean any harm. Does that mean that she could resurrect any of them who died during the period they spent saving her world, if not, I'd also like to believe that you definitely mean harm to them.
Yes, that's right!
Fantasy · Juan_Tenorio
I thought the title — Merciless Hunter got upgraded to E
ch 33 Chapter 33 - Break
Fantasy · ExSoldierLv99
No... Personally, I feel that their current situation shouldn't call for such prolonged twists and turns; he should have at least gone a bit straight to the point, instead he kept talking in riddles and stuff. Think about it logically, if it were in real life, you might not (even I) have the patience to keep listening to such riddle-like, twists and turns, conversation. Although the information he fed her at the beginning might be important, they weren't needed at that moment; he should've gotten a bit straight to the point, and later on break things down for her. But remember, all these are just minor mistakes, nothing serious😉
"I told you that he died remember?" He asked Alice and she bit her lips trying to stop herself from doing something stupid.
Fantasy · Cosmic_Ceaser
I don't know why, but I find that Nick's action a bit disrespectful to Alex. Why would you think I wanna hurt my own student; also you have to ask for permission before checking up or diagnosing my student, especially in front of me, regardless if you are their family friend. Imagine Alex walking up to Michel to examine him because he suspects that his training or his teacher's training pattern is harmful to Michael. That could harm reputation 🤷🏿♂️ Just saying what i felt when the Nick guy rushed to examine Isabella's body
ch 37 Michel Roberts and His Mentor, the Esteemed Drug Saint, Nick Peterson
Global Awakening: I Got A SSS-level Library System
Fantasy · we11doneyuris