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The best I have ever seen. Honestly, I wasn't expecting it to be as good as it is and thought it to be mediocre at best.
I like it. Made me me like cultivation novels again I like it. Made me me like cultivation novels again I like it. Made me me like cultivation novels again I like it. Made me me like cultivation novels again
was iffy about reading this but after reading the first few chapters I couldn't stop because the the two leads just kept making me laugh, it's a solid comedy
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recommended to the high heaven. There is no poison here.keep up the greatest work 💪💪💪.Author go.go.go.go.go
Muah, so far this is perfection! The character interactions are by far the most realistic I‘ve ever seen and I’m loving the dynamic that the two main characters have! Not to mention the absolute absurd growth in power that comes from the combo of both their systems! And it’s like bringing common sense to cultivation, brilliant! The plot seems to be focusing on the development of the male protagonist’s city and I have actually thoroughly enjoyed it! There have only been few spelling errors as well, and the updates have been steady! Keep it up! This is by far my favorite original novel!
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I LOVE THIS NOVEL, I LOVE THE INTERACTIONS AND PERSONALITIES OF THE PROTAGONISTS, IT DEFINITELY ENTERS MY TOP 3 BEST NOVELS I'VE READ. DON'T DROP IT OR...
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Even if it is half novel half fanfic I would still put it in the novels section because while fanfics might be better for short term power stone gain long term novels gain more.
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so far so good I like it (but pls update op injustice before u update this it feels like I've been waiting years) keep going just like all your other books this one is a masterpiece
When I think of a modern person reincarnated in a cultivation world, I always hoped for something like this, but I never found it, so now I can live in peace.
For the trust that AUTHOR has gain till date that Author Completes the story with GREATNESS & GRACE. Therefore, ALL 5 STARS. Hope & Pray that AUTHOR will do great with this FANFIC-STORY too! Will give a proper review after the completion of the story. ALL HAIL AGENTMONKE!
I'm not interested in double MC stories. Hope it goes well. .......................................................................................
This is a very fun read with characters who are very aware of the tropes in the cultivation world and an author who has fun playing around with various cliches. 10/10 a very fun and funny read, definitely worth giving a try at the very least. 😁👍
It had a fun start and overall seems like a interesting story and I'm sure it'll be a good one like all of his previous ones
It is a great book so far the background of the world is pretty fleshed out for the only 5 chapters that are out. The writing quality always top tier and great but even with all that the main thing that puts it all together is all of the random cliché and twists which somehow work overall the book is like a pot full of potential and gunk that somehow due to the skill of the chef is working and tastes great
This young master is expecting good things! Don't you dare you lowly mortal disappoint me! Or I'll make you see you ancestors today ! !
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The best I have ever seen. Honestly, I wasn't expecting it to be as good as it is and thought it to be mediocre at best.
I like it. Made me me like cultivation novels again I like it. Made me me like cultivation novels again I like it. Made me me like cultivation novels again I like it. Made me me like cultivation novels again
was iffy about reading this but after reading the first few chapters I couldn't stop because the the two leads just kept making me laugh, it's a solid comedy
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recommended to the high heaven. There is no poison here.keep up the greatest work 💪💪💪.Author go.go.go.go.go
Muah, so far this is perfection! The character interactions are by far the most realistic I‘ve ever seen and I’m loving the dynamic that the two main characters have! Not to mention the absolute absurd growth in power that comes from the combo of both their systems! And it’s like bringing common sense to cultivation, brilliant! The plot seems to be focusing on the development of the male protagonist’s city and I have actually thoroughly enjoyed it! There have only been few spelling errors as well, and the updates have been steady! Keep it up! This is by far my favorite original novel!
Spoiler de révélation I LOVE THIS NOVEL, I LOVE THE INTERACTIONS AND PERSONALITIES OF THE PROTAGONISTS, IT DEFINITELY ENTERS MY TOP 3 BEST NOVELS I'VE READ. DON'T DROP IT OR...
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Even if it is half novel half fanfic I would still put it in the novels section because while fanfics might be better for short term power stone gain long term novels gain more.
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so far so good I like it (but pls update op injustice before u update this it feels like I've been waiting years) keep going just like all your other books this one is a masterpiece
When I think of a modern person reincarnated in a cultivation world, I always hoped for something like this, but I never found it, so now I can live in peace.
For the trust that AUTHOR has gain till date that Author Completes the story with GREATNESS & GRACE. Therefore, ALL 5 STARS. Hope & Pray that AUTHOR will do great with this FANFIC-STORY too! Will give a proper review after the completion of the story. ALL HAIL AGENTMONKE!
I'm not interested in double MC stories. Hope it goes well. .......................................................................................
This is a very fun read with characters who are very aware of the tropes in the cultivation world and an author who has fun playing around with various cliches. 10/10 a very fun and funny read, definitely worth giving a try at the very least. 😁👍
It had a fun start and overall seems like a interesting story and I'm sure it'll be a good one like all of his previous ones
It is a great book so far the background of the world is pretty fleshed out for the only 5 chapters that are out. The writing quality always top tier and great but even with all that the main thing that puts it all together is all of the random cliché and twists which somehow work overall the book is like a pot full of potential and gunk that somehow due to the skill of the chef is working and tastes great
This young master is expecting good things! Don't you dare you lowly mortal disappoint me! Or I'll make you see you ancestors today ! !