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Now in chapter 18 that I'm reading the story is developing very well, Mc's pace to gain strength is not fast but also not very slow this adds weight to the story because he can't solve everything with brute force and needs help of other characters
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This is a great work. Reincarnation or isekai into honkai impact fan fictions are rare, so this has been a pleasure to read. I only hope that the MC isn't dense in the future and ignores the obvious signs that Mei and Kiana are both giving him
the story is good but the development is kind of slow because the author wants a stable friendship before starting the novel even with the kind of world it is. the story is very good
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I absolutely love this story so far its well written and with a good pace. Not to mention the MC has a cheat that works but isn't overpowered from what I can see. Well balqnced, well written, well organized, and well paced. Amazing story I hope to read more.
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Now in chapter 18 that I'm reading the story is developing very well, Mc's pace to gain strength is not fast but also not very slow this adds weight to the story because he can't solve everything with brute force and needs help of other characters
Spoiler de révélation This is a great work. Reincarnation or isekai into honkai impact fan fictions are rare, so this has been a pleasure to read. I only hope that the MC isn't dense in the future and ignores the obvious signs that Mei and Kiana are both giving him
the story is good but the development is kind of slow because the author wants a stable friendship before starting the novel even with the kind of world it is. the story is very good
Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍
Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍
I absolutely love this story so far its well written and with a good pace. Not to mention the MC has a cheat that works but isn't overpowered from what I can see. Well balqnced, well written, well organized, and well paced. Amazing story I hope to read more.
As per the time-honored tradition in webnovel. Here is the author's shameless 5-star review. Shameless Review! Shameless Review! Shameless Review! Shameless Review! Shameless Review! Shameless Review!