Webnovel Author: AdamFlores - Fanfic Collection

Can you tell me what makes Adam blank? Or what you think is actually an interesting MC? I feel like I've done better than most in regards to not making the MC have a hero complex or be an edge Lord. So I am not really sure how he could be more interesting

A bit harsh, but understandable. I suppose I didn't particularly make the Rwby arc engaging... or well, interesting enough Also, I have to correct you about the updates. I consistently update 1 time a week... Yes, it is slow, and there may be exceptions like when I have exams. But in most cases, a chapter a week is guaranteed As for the main character being bland... Well, I can't say anything in my defense. To be honest, I don't know how a reincarnated or a transmigratee MC with plot knowledge could interesting beyond being smart and using his knowledge of the plot. I tried to make him be as interesting as I could, but there is a limit to what you can do, and how much depth you can add to him in such a short time

Absolutely amazing. I feel like this fan fiction is quite underrated Grammar is near flawless. But the most impressive thing is that the characters actually stick to their canon self- it is amazing how the author can flawlessly write character interactions who stay true to their personality. They also get expanded upon, but it just feels so natural that it makes them have more depth, without sacrifcing anything or making a character OOC even in the slightest I honestly have nothing much to say. The MC uses his powers quite well. In fact, he took advantage of Alchemy as soon as he learned what his powers were, and he also plans to take advantage of forging. It is great that the MC utilises his 'system' to the fullest potential- though I suppose he could also buy a lot of staff and then sell them, repeat the process and reach max level speech skill, but that is a bit unrealistic as he has just started. Of course, there is also the romance aspect- but not much is currently going on. His interactions with Hestia are great. But as my personal preference, I would hope this is a harem, as Danmachi is a harem anime and well... We have to stay true to the theme of this world, don't we? Anyway, just from what was shown- I believe in the author, and I have faith that whatever romance is written by him will be amazing.... Although I hope it will be a harem, it would be better to let nature take its course. If the MC has multiple partners interested in him, then the next course of action is obvious. And if not... well, as long as it seemed natural and not forced by any external circumstances, then that is fine too

I have absolutely no experience writing murder scenes, or any mystery regarding this. I also don't have any inclination in writing such scenes. I feel there is no need to go too deep regarding this case, as it wouldn't be a big deal for Adam. I suppose it would be more like a passing interest, and if he truly wanted to find the murderer... Well, he could just get Great Sage to reconstruct the scene based on the data he already has, or do something simpler and monitor the whole area with his sense and catch the murderer in the act It would be too much of an extra effort to write clues and make an elaborate murder scene when it is not actually needed. Not only do I have no experience doing that, it is also pointless and I have little interest in brainstorming for uneeded details

I still have a question though... What constitutes the 'mid' period of Adam's stay in Menagerie? I feel like he has achieved everything he wanted, and I also lack ideas to write about. I also feel like his stay in Menagerie shouldn't be stretched out for so long as there are many regions that need to be explored, and focusing so much on only one isn't ideal Regarding that murder case... Honestly, I as the author need to have a sufficient understanding, as to let Adam uncover the 'mystery'. So with that in mind, why would Tyran just go on a killing spree? I don't think Salem would instruct him to do such a thankless task, and I don't think he is cunning enough to perfectly hide his tracks Also, if we make Tyrian the murderer, a problem arises- we have one less 'pawn' in the final battle of Atlas. Mere Grimm are like cannon fodder in front of Rimuru and Rias, so there is a need for humanoid and intelligent enemies, and Tyrian should be used for that role instead of perishing before that

Not really, my knowledge of Rwby is pretty limited, all things considered But before anything else, we have to get everything in order His next stop-Mistral. You suggested a murder case, and I suppose it could be interesting, but what else could be done in this case? Beyond enjoying the scenery and stumbling upon a murder case, I want Adam to have a clearer goal of coming here. I am not knowledgable about Rwby, so is there anything important going on in Mistral that Adam can focus on? I suppose a date with Rimuru is enough, but shouldn't it be done in Solitas? Though as the final destination, it isn't fitting, so a murder case and a date with Rimuru should be enough for Mistral By the way, when should I make the dream sequence with Adam Taurus? Should it be done before going to Mistral, or after he is done with the anima continent? By the way, who should the murdererer in that example you gave- if it will be implemented? I will be honest, I don't want it to be an OC, I would much prefer to be a character that is already known. It both saves me the effort of making an OC, and It would also be more engaging, as it would overall be better to have a familiar character we know than some no-name person that I created.

To be honest, I am not sure of what specifically I find boring and interesting. I can clearly say with confidence that the examples you had provided are too boring and mundane, but if you ask me of my opinion, I can't give any specific example or something that I have in mind I'd much rather hear you out and what you have in mind for Mistral, and then I can make a judgement regarding this Of course, generally, I would prefer something that is both engaging and interesting- something that makes me want to write about it, and brings out my passion. I would much prefer writing while enjoying something, than just doing it only for the superficial reason that it is more 'meaningful' and would be better for 'character development'. I suppose that is the largest part that contributes to it- my enjoyment. I write as a hobby, so it would be obvious that I would be much more active and passionate when writing about something that interests me. A vague premise such as a 'mystery' doesn't call out to me. If I had to give an example for what mysteries truly appeal to me.... Well, it would be Adam exploring a verse, and unveiling it's secrets slowly, while also expanding upon this verse and adding upon what has already been shown in the canon. I don't know if expanding upon a verse myself and having the MC slowly figure things out counts as a mystery, but I suppose this is the closest thing to a mystery that I would personally enjoy without specially brainstorming or seeking something specific

Thank you, but I still feel like it should be something 'big' and 'interesting', not something mundane like the examples you provided previously And in regard to that 'If Adam doesn't care, then why would the readers care?'. I meant that in the way that if Adam, the main protagonist of the story isn't interested in something, doesn't give it his all, and only does it because I imposed that on him because of my author power... Then it would not only would it be difficult for me to write it, but I also don't think I would be satisfied with reading it, and of course, other people won't care about it either And of course, it is an interesting premise. But I don't want to focus on any mundane mysteries, if it is not interesting and is mundane, Adam wouldn't care. It is not about his power, it is about perspective. Not only can he read minds and sense a lot around him with [Magic sense], but he also has the sub-skill of [Great sage], [All of creation], which if you didn't know, it allows him to know every non concealed phenomenon. Although I suppose it might not work in other worlds beside the Tensura verse, it still isn't particularly needed in this case Again, Adam's perspective and standards are a bit higher. He has been in the honkai verse for 16 years, he has fought against a 'Herscher', and he has also travelled to Tensura and Shiraori's world. Perhaps it still hasn't been long since he obtained power in comparison to his age, but after experiencing so many things, I really don't think he will go out of his way to meddle in other people's business- people who are from another world, which he will probably not visit again in the future. Of course, he will experience this trip to the fullest, but it would be more like an Observer or a Wanderer, not someone who actively seeks to involve himself, and seek mysteries. Of course, he might take the initiative to talk to 'canon' characters. Not because they are major characters from an anime, but because he at least knows of them, and because I guess he would be curious to know 'anime characters' from beyond from what was known

Oh, is that what you meant? Then that is quite easier, as Sakura is certainly best girl Best waifu, though? This is too difficult to decide. I suppose Tamamoe-no-mae is a good waifu, but I also think Tiamat would be a great waifu (If she returned to a normal mental state) I would also say Kiyohime, but... She is a bit too much of a yandere in my opinion. I wouldn't really want my wife to burn me down if I just so much as looked at another girl Anyway... That gender bent question is very weird. But I would also say Gilgamesh, as I once read a fate fan fiction where Gil was female, and she had some interesting interactions (and lemons) with the MC

I mean... There is also Kama and BB who I forgot to mention. Though, I have a certain fondness for OG Sakura But yeah, I can understand where you are coming from. Because indeed, Rin is certainly the best type of tsundere out there

Interesting idea... However, I feel like it would be a bit... boring, so to say. Adam certainly has top combat power in this world, and I feel like that in this world of Remnant, a 'mystery quest' like this would be too dull Besides, for the examples you gave... Adam wouldn't really care as much. And since he wouldn't care, why would the readers care? It would feel a bit forced to do such a thing. Because even so, his intelligence gathering abilities using Psionics can be shown in a different way And also, I am not really confident I have the required IQ and skills to set up a mystery that would be both interesting, and engaging