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SrCuervo

Dear readers! I am pleased to announce the release of my new novel. I want to emphasize from the beginning that this work is a creation based on a previously written novel that you can find on my profile, in order to offer a completely new perspective and development, better and with quality writing alongside its translation. The central concept of this story is inspired by all the ideas I had about the previous story that only ended in 22 sad chapters, where the worlds the protagonist travels to are tiny. However, it is important to highlight that this novel presents a unique approach and a completely different narrative development. With the announcement of the new Hunger Games movie, I felt motivated to rewrite this novel and use some of the ideas to create this story. I put a lot of effort into highlighting the character development, where everyone will be able to understand it in the first 13 chapters, learning everything about him and his desires, immersing themselves in a unique and surprising adventure within a familiar universe. Although I share the conceptual foundation of the original novel, I have made significant modifications to the plot, the characters, and the events that take place throughout the story are not entirely the same. I had to study a lot about laws, procedures, and situations so that no one complains about the events in the beginning. I have focused on exploring new perspectives, expanding existing worlds, and developing relationships between characters that are not original. My intention is to offer new experiences in unexplored worlds, immersing myself in realms that no other writer has focused on, hoping to capture your attention. I respect and value literature, and I want to make it clear that all the chapters will be published here. Your support, if you like what I do, would mean a lot to me in my life, so you can support me on my Patreon: SrCuervo. Constructive criticism and supportive comments are welcome. Please refrain from negative comments, and I hope this story brings you enjoyment!

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Golden_Gamer_7564

It's good overall. The grammar is good don't really remember any big mistakes. The story is good as well. The development is also good whit the start. And the best is updating stability because 2 chapters a day is very good in my opinion. And to the author good luck with the novel and hope you wont drop it.

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TaterRumble

Obviously either AI generated or heavily altered by AI. The entire story feels like someone ran it through Chat GPT. That being said, for an AI assisted novel it's not bad, not good mind you, just not bad. The MC is pretty generic and the story is also pretty generic. Nothing about this story sticks out in any way other than it being a rare hunger games fic.

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Gamerzone

It was an awesome book great characters and a trully unique take on a world jumper ficall in all great story

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Bob_Uchiha_XD

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ghostjk

I'm on chapter 14, but I don't know if I should keep reading, I just read the mc, get op stuff, and I don't like books that make the mc op af in the beginning.Also it took 13 chapters to start like really.

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R_Franco

Me gusta ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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caprotx_war

great story a bit of slow start to give background but overall awesome stuff

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TrueMonarch00

Spent hours watching the first three worlds he world visit before reading the fanfic, hope it meets my wasted hours reputation. P.s. I will come and give a review about it if I donโ€™t like but if there is no other review then I like and lโ€™m too lazy to do it, cause it is 12:43 pm in the evening, and I always sleep early but I just had to watch the movies ๐ŸŽฅ of the worlds I donโ€™t know about.

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BoredCrow

I liked it for a while but then it suddenly started sounding ai generated. Some monologues stretched out and too much details. i get its supposed to be this way but its just plain boring. The romance and dialogues are too predictable and the story started lacking a bit of flavor near the middle chapters.

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Charly_MadSon

It's really fascinating to see how new stories are created, I'm not a fan of the hunger games, maybe that's why I like this story more: v[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Sanchos_sboba

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Cocoerloko

Good fanfic, I had never read a fanfic that was about Hunger games and I must say that your fancic has made me see all the movies again. 10/10 fanfic, highly recommended. Do not abandon it because it would be a shame if this jewel were lost. ๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿ’ช

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Greg63636638485746

Nice fanfic. Itโ€™s rare to see something like this nowdays. Though some action scenes can have more details to make it more interesting.

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Deisy_Marin

๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

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Kakatua

Seriously, I don't know why people are bothered by the beginning, they are barely 10 ch and so far it has been the best part of the novel. You can identify with the Mc and they are full of emotion, I almost skipped them because of some of these reviews. I recommend Do not skip them, they really do not become heavy or long. In fact, I like them more than the first chapters in the world of games. I feel a disconnection with the Mc from the time skip of 1 year.

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kristian_andres

I loved the novel, thank you author for writing this fanfic....... And I hope we have many more chapters.๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ (Traductor),..........................

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byTraaq
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Frankly I canโ€™t get passed how you just send him on his adventure before seeking a conclusion for his trailโ€ฆ Iโ€™m sure itโ€™s a good story, but now Iโ€™m going to be stuck with this constant anxiety due to it. Iโ€™ll probably just have to wait (who knows how long) until he gets back to the regular world and the truth (or false hood) is confirmed. Super disappointing since I was looking forward to my first Hunger Games FFโ€ฆ

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DaoistVkK20U

This story is really good, im hooked, the characters are well represented and the mc is very interesting and unique. Give it a shot.[img=update]

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MahoV
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I like the story, while the beginning was annoying the rest is good (if like me you don't like it jump to chapter 10)Strongly recommend to give it a try

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cristofer_mojica

I love it, I'm just saying MuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMu

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Raziel_Bloodborn

Instant 5 stars because of no-harem. great work author-san.

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HereForGoodRead

I love it but there not enoughs chapters

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DontWorry

Eu gostei da histรณria, mesmo jรก tendo sido explorada de outras formas em novels, o fato do Mc ir para um mundo por determinado tempo e obter de lรก habilidades, essa fanfic tem o fator positivo de primeiro: dar uma importรขncia para a vida atual do Mc, gerando assim expectativa para o desenrolar, e segundo: escolher mundos jรก familiares mas que nรฃo dรฃo amplamente explorados em fanfic. Continue assim autor, ansioso para mais capitulos

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UnsimpleMexicano

Muy bueno pero recomiendo hojear al capรญtulo 8 ahรญ es cuando se pone interesante toda la historia ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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SrCuervo

Dear readers! I am pleased to announce the release of my new novel. I want to emphasize from the beginning that this work is a creation based on a previously written novel that you can find on my profile, in order to offer a completely new perspective and development, better and with quality writing alongside its translation. The central concept of this story is inspired by all the ideas I had about the previous story that only ended in 22 sad chapters, where the worlds the protagonist travels to are tiny. However, it is important to highlight that this novel presents a unique approach and a completely different narrative development. With the announcement of the new Hunger Games movie, I felt motivated to rewrite this novel and use some of the ideas to create this story. I put a lot of effort into highlighting the character development, where everyone will be able to understand it in the first 13 chapters, learning everything about him and his desires, immersing themselves in a unique and surprising adventure within a familiar universe. Although I share the conceptual foundation of the original novel, I have made significant modifications to the plot, the characters, and the events that take place throughout the story are not entirely the same. I had to study a lot about laws, procedures, and situations so that no one complains about the events in the beginning. I have focused on exploring new perspectives, expanding existing worlds, and developing relationships between characters that are not original. My intention is to offer new experiences in unexplored worlds, immersing myself in realms that no other writer has focused on, hoping to capture your attention. I respect and value literature, and I want to make it clear that all the chapters will be published here. Your support, if you like what I do, would mean a lot to me in my life, so you can support me on my Patreon: SrCuervo. Constructive criticism and supportive comments are welcome. Please refrain from negative comments, and I hope this story brings you enjoyment!

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Golden_Gamer_7564

It's good overall. The grammar is good don't really remember any big mistakes. The story is good as well. The development is also good whit the start. And the best is updating stability because 2 chapters a day is very good in my opinion. And to the author good luck with the novel and hope you wont drop it.

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TaterRumble

Obviously either AI generated or heavily altered by AI. The entire story feels like someone ran it through Chat GPT. That being said, for an AI assisted novel it's not bad, not good mind you, just not bad. The MC is pretty generic and the story is also pretty generic. Nothing about this story sticks out in any way other than it being a rare hunger games fic.

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Gamerzone

It was an awesome book great characters and a trully unique take on a world jumper ficall in all great story

1yr
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Bob_Uchiha_XD

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ghostjk

I'm on chapter 14, but I don't know if I should keep reading, I just read the mc, get op stuff, and I don't like books that make the mc op af in the beginning.Also it took 13 chapters to start like really.

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R_Franco

Me gusta ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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caprotx_war

great story a bit of slow start to give background but overall awesome stuff

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TrueMonarch00

Spent hours watching the first three worlds he world visit before reading the fanfic, hope it meets my wasted hours reputation. P.s. I will come and give a review about it if I donโ€™t like but if there is no other review then I like and lโ€™m too lazy to do it, cause it is 12:43 pm in the evening, and I always sleep early but I just had to watch the movies ๐ŸŽฅ of the worlds I donโ€™t know about.

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GuroMaDezzNutss0D

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BoredCrow

I liked it for a while but then it suddenly started sounding ai generated. Some monologues stretched out and too much details. i get its supposed to be this way but its just plain boring. The romance and dialogues are too predictable and the story started lacking a bit of flavor near the middle chapters.

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Charly_MadSon

It's really fascinating to see how new stories are created, I'm not a fan of the hunger games, maybe that's why I like this story more: v[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Sanchos_sboba

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Cocoerloko

Good fanfic, I had never read a fanfic that was about Hunger games and I must say that your fancic has made me see all the movies again. 10/10 fanfic, highly recommended. Do not abandon it because it would be a shame if this jewel were lost. ๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿ’ช

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Greg63636638485746

Nice fanfic. Itโ€™s rare to see something like this nowdays. Though some action scenes can have more details to make it more interesting.

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Deisy_Marin

๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐ŸคŒ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

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Kakatua

Seriously, I don't know why people are bothered by the beginning, they are barely 10 ch and so far it has been the best part of the novel. You can identify with the Mc and they are full of emotion, I almost skipped them because of some of these reviews. I recommend Do not skip them, they really do not become heavy or long. In fact, I like them more than the first chapters in the world of games. I feel a disconnection with the Mc from the time skip of 1 year.

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kristian_andres

I loved the novel, thank you author for writing this fanfic....... And I hope we have many more chapters.๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ (Traductor),..........................

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Hambled

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byTraaq
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Frankly I canโ€™t get passed how you just send him on his adventure before seeking a conclusion for his trailโ€ฆ Iโ€™m sure itโ€™s a good story, but now Iโ€™m going to be stuck with this constant anxiety due to it. Iโ€™ll probably just have to wait (who knows how long) until he gets back to the regular world and the truth (or false hood) is confirmed. Super disappointing since I was looking forward to my first Hunger Games FFโ€ฆ

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DaoistVkK20U

This story is really good, im hooked, the characters are well represented and the mc is very interesting and unique. Give it a shot.[img=update]

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MahoV
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I like the story, while the beginning was annoying the rest is good (if like me you don't like it jump to chapter 10)Strongly recommend to give it a try

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Louafi_Bilal

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AbelWizard

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cristofer_mojica

I love it, I'm just saying MuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMuneshiroMu

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Raziel_Bloodborn

Instant 5 stars because of no-harem. great work author-san.

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Tico_Pendra

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HereForGoodRead

I love it but there not enoughs chapters

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DontWorry

Eu gostei da histรณria, mesmo jรก tendo sido explorada de outras formas em novels, o fato do Mc ir para um mundo por determinado tempo e obter de lรก habilidades, essa fanfic tem o fator positivo de primeiro: dar uma importรขncia para a vida atual do Mc, gerando assim expectativa para o desenrolar, e segundo: escolher mundos jรก familiares mas que nรฃo dรฃo amplamente explorados em fanfic. Continue assim autor, ansioso para mais capitulos

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UnsimpleMexicano

Muy bueno pero recomiendo hojear al capรญtulo 8 ahรญ es cuando se pone interesante toda la historia ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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