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Honestly, I wouldn't say I like the very long beginning with descriptions so detailed that I more or less think I am reading an essay about Loneliness. But, I really like the Story when he begins to go into the Hunger Games World. I like the World and there weren't any Stories about it so this may be a bit biased. Furthermore, considering that this Author already wrote stories with hundreds of chapters I also have the hope that this won't be dropped just a few chapters into it, and the seemingly consistent upload schedule looks promising :D Nobody is perfect so while there are some things that I don't like(objectively and subjectively), I think this can be a very good Story. Just, hopefully, the author doesn't suddenly have a " Brilliant " Idea and ruin the whole Story with it.
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The other reviews and powerstones on this novel got my hopes up, but so far this novel has a lot of problems. To start with the story takes way to long to get to the other worlds. The first chapters are just another generic edgy dark mc brooding. There are several strange inconsistencies that were off putting as well. I recommend just skipping to chapter 10 or so. The roulettes are a bit strange as the way the items work don’t seem fully explained. And finally and the biggest problem for me is their are just tons of unnecessary words and detials in this novel. There will be several paragraphs that could be said in one or two sentences. A lot of things are repeated and tons of random adjectives and adverbs are just thrown in. It made me just start skimming through large sections. Overall, if u really want a hunger games fic then go for it but I suggest skipping and skimming a lot of parts.
The story has progressed nicely with good length chapters, and the author seems to have good background knowledge about the hunger games world which is barely written about in fanfics.
Absolutely phenomenal world building, consistently high level of language and emotions to show the development of the story. A really good read that I hope will continue into the 100s of chapters that hopefully are made.
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i love your books so i am going to rate this 5 stars also who is the love interest
I mean it seems interesting but other then hunger games most of these worlds absolutely irrelevant to eachother nor really seem to make sense on the choices.
I like the potential of this story, and it has a good start. I hope this story has hundreds of chapters in the future :)
The story has been great so far, with gramme better than 90% of the fabrics on here. Good concept, and as of chapter 12 it's been great.
It’s good only thing wrong is that author switches between third and first person in the middle of a sentence.
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Honestly, I wouldn't say I like the very long beginning with descriptions so detailed that I more or less think I am reading an essay about Loneliness. But, I really like the Story when he begins to go into the Hunger Games World. I like the World and there weren't any Stories about it so this may be a bit biased. Furthermore, considering that this Author already wrote stories with hundreds of chapters I also have the hope that this won't be dropped just a few chapters into it, and the seemingly consistent upload schedule looks promising :D Nobody is perfect so while there are some things that I don't like(objectively and subjectively), I think this can be a very good Story. Just, hopefully, the author doesn't suddenly have a " Brilliant " Idea and ruin the whole Story with it.
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The other reviews and powerstones on this novel got my hopes up, but so far this novel has a lot of problems. To start with the story takes way to long to get to the other worlds. The first chapters are just another generic edgy dark mc brooding. There are several strange inconsistencies that were off putting as well. I recommend just skipping to chapter 10 or so. The roulettes are a bit strange as the way the items work don’t seem fully explained. And finally and the biggest problem for me is their are just tons of unnecessary words and detials in this novel. There will be several paragraphs that could be said in one or two sentences. A lot of things are repeated and tons of random adjectives and adverbs are just thrown in. It made me just start skimming through large sections. Overall, if u really want a hunger games fic then go for it but I suggest skipping and skimming a lot of parts.
The story has progressed nicely with good length chapters, and the author seems to have good background knowledge about the hunger games world which is barely written about in fanfics.
Absolutely phenomenal world building, consistently high level of language and emotions to show the development of the story. A really good read that I hope will continue into the 100s of chapters that hopefully are made.
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Fanfic of Hunger Games + SrCuervo = Good Fanfic!!!!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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i love your books so i am going to rate this 5 stars also who is the love interest
I mean it seems interesting but other then hunger games most of these worlds absolutely irrelevant to eachother nor really seem to make sense on the choices.
I like the potential of this story, and it has a good start. I hope this story has hundreds of chapters in the future :)
The story has been great so far, with gramme better than 90% of the fabrics on here. Good concept, and as of chapter 12 it's been great.
It’s good only thing wrong is that author switches between third and first person in the middle of a sentence.