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A young man stuck in the viltrumite body in space with a broken communicator. Will he get lucky, or starve to death before he finds a new planet?
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Great start. Great grammar. Very much looking forward to seeing the development of the plot.
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for just two chapters this is a great start so far can't wait to read the next one and see how the story progresses
Feel free to tell me if I made any mistakes, as English is not my first language. ^^
This is good...keep it up :D .. chapters lengths are good too........................................................................................
An interesting novel, that's all i can say. Author!!! Bring me more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
the novel is great. first of all, his perspective on the marvel universe as an ff is beyond amazing. an ff that isn't stuck in the world like EVERY other ff. We can get news from anywhere in the universe. Even xander is included in the novel. Although there are still 6 episodes, it did not immediately go and connect to the shield. normally they are all immediately connected to the shield. This novel is very good in every way. so start reading.
This is the best viltrimite novel I have ever seen. Please at least get this up to 20 chapters. ……………………………………………………………………………….. …………………………. …………………….
The protagonist doesn't have any goals, he is not that interesting or unique, he lacks memorable introduction, he is without distinct personality, special qualities or traits. His desire is to explore the world or universe and engage in missions which is not that original or captivating. He is not intelligent either as he freely reveals information about himself and his strengths, without any semblance of strategic thinking or hidden agenda, and his abilities, which consist of being strong and immune to various things, are far from unique. While the writing may be good and the chapters are long, the story itself is boring, lacking any standout moments, elements to pique the reader's interest, or an engaging and gradual storyline, instead of thrusting the protagonist into an instant galactic race and mundane missions, it would have been more intriguing to see them explore a small, unfamiliar planet starting his journey to become stronger as a villain.