EvilBlueCrystal

The plot creative enough, it is the same as the manga, Mc acquires everything he desires easily. He is reincarnated into the world he wants to when he says so, becomes the same person as the original with no past of his own, follows the same training, gets the same system and abilities, takes the same path, and goes to the same dungeons. He has easy time leveling, in one chapter he reaches level 30 with little effort. He acts like a chuuni laughing when he kills a monster. He has no original abilities, but has overused skills like Gluttony that won't have any use and play any role.

The Mc is like a teenager pretending to be a young man but talks and acts more mature. He says he wants to stay low but gets himself in a life death battle with children acting like the righteous hero to stop bullying. He never thinks or says anything relevant, it's always about others and reacting to seeing them. He doesn't know the world he's in, he spent several years Not training or exercising at all, he claims that eating a lot of food without training makes you strong. He's a rare Sensor but still complains, his talent is wasted of his incompetence and inability to progress, so he wants to be Senju but doesn't do anything because he's afraid of Danzo, he doesn't practice Chakra control, when there isn't any way to discern talent and Chakra quality without testing, everyone is born with Chakra without awakening it, and being talented is different than how much Chakra you have. Also Naruto and Sasuke are women.

This plot is portrayed as something grim and dark survival, but the tone and writing is casual at best, more like slice-of-life in a modern world with ordinary humans than anything related to a complex shinobi world. The mc lacks sense of crisis, desperation, and caution, he's a weak scarred boy who seems more interested in making friends rather than to be an antagonist.

Outdated review. Mc is an ordinary novel reader reborn into a world where a person's ability is based on experience and understanding, paired with a shallow personality, beliefs and lack of background from his previous life make him an uninteresting character to follow. Mc no previous experience and time to train. As it stands now, the story falls flat it's following the original with an unremarkable protagonist. The first chapters are a complete waste since they don't introduce anything new or refreshing. Mc has future knowledge, but is unable to remember crucial details, seems forced, unrealistic, and frustrating that continually emphasizes his forgotten memories. Mc reveals his foreknowledge to his grandpa, when he should expect no reasonable outcome from it. His grandpa knowing about the concept of extreme physique is hard to believe, something that is known by clan leaders or those who have ancient knowledge. If someone wanted to create an overpowered main character, why not just make Bai Ning Ning the protagonist right from the beginning? At least she would have a more intriguing perspective, background, and two personalities one from previous world and one is future self. She would be forced to follow the original mc while making use of him, and after that she would do things her own way. The protagonist's presence undermines the plot's concept of survival, because so much of the original mc success is due to his carefully balanced strength, resources, luck, and timing. With this protagonist thrown into the mix, it disrupts the story's established flow, one change would mess up everything, and there's doesn't seem a place for the mc in the future plot, since the original protagonist dies at the start, and it becomes impossible to follow the original timeline. The current protagonist kinda lacks the capability to carry the narrative forward. If the mc isn't smart he should be following original mc like the northern dark ice girl did, while building alliances, planning for future events, and gathering resources.

Simplistic story, + first person, + excessive describing everything, + hard to read and take seriously. Mc is ordinary student that has the body of gojo and acts very smug. He keeps thinking random stuff all the time like any of it matters, bad friendship no build up, and young masters I mean thugs show up out of nowhere to attack him so that Mc can reveal his powers. Mc says he can't and won't beat criminals cause they have plot armor, so then what is he doing? Lots of details of how his room looks and about infinity but no development, no meaning and reason why is Mc doing anything or what he's aiming for in the future.

Gets fruit from God, first thing he does is explain and reveal it to everyone. His fruit ability is very op that can extract others fruits, why would he think noone would backstab him. Reincarnates but already has rivals and teammates the first day. Paragraphs too big, there's monologue multiplied by ten. Dialogue is very casual, they talk like children playing Minecraft pretending to be a polite and honest individuals. Mc explain his plans openly all the time, and gives friendly tips. Battles are too early, he's gathering fruits like it's nothing. His crew is only there to help him get more fruits.

Right at the start too many systems, abilities, rewards, points, ranks, and shops. No introduction or explaining anything, just straight up exercise, and npc thought process. First person very boring. Everything is power of friendship, effort, references to random anime and manga. Anything mc does or says is love, kindness, friendship, family, or harem related. Mc wants to learn martial arts but can copy anything instantly, and has universal level spiral abilities. Gets several techniques every chapter. System function sucks. Wish fulfillment plot, lame interactions of useless characters, street fights, nothing enjoyable or interesting.

Mc acts like he reincarnates every week and knows everything about every universe. Ten year time skip of him accomplishing nothing. Posses another person's body and says he loves 'his' sister. Gets random system that let's him travel to other universes to deliver packages, while he's immune to literally an attack. His entire existence is being submissive that goes to other words to save women for worthless virtual currency. The characters are worthless, gendrbend Denji sob story. Procceds to go on a date with someone with smells worse than a dumbster. Doesn't have any freedom of his own, needs to get permission from his sister. The last 2 chapters make no sense, characters from different universes are in chainsaw man so you idea who they are. Plot entirety consists of his thoughts and info dumps, no direction random events slapped together.