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How come that Percy is the worst dark souls gamer in history. Having 600 deaths in a single run of any soul game, is horrendous. I had about 80 to 90 deaths in dark souls 3, which is my first dark souls game run experienced. and I am not Percy Jackson. Percy would probably be able to complete all the souls games without dying once.
the premise of the story has potential, but the grammar and writing style are just terrible.
Bro I don't understand at all bruh you make so many short story of multivers types of percy it makes me insane I not understand at all when start dark soul 3 it became weir D and weird to me I not longer understand you story😭😭😭😭😭😭
please keep posting chapters it's an interesting idea for a book and I'd hate to have it end up unfinished
It feels more like a game run-through than a story.. There's not really a world description nor a build-up of anything, and the writing reads kinda choppy to me.. other than a few more minor issues I have with this story, it's a meh kinda of story to me. one that I'd read if I was waiting on other story updates...
I love the plot, writing style, etc, and I love how, despite the bad grammar and punctuation, it is still very easy to read, at least, compared to your average webnovel book. Thank you for writing this author, you're doing great so far.
40 chapters but only 5 reviews... I'll read it, but you gotta admit that's pretty sus...
First of all this story is literally at the bottom of the Pearcy Jackson tag, and it intrigued me.secondly the story and premise are good, but the Pov changes are a bit confusing, like one moment its 3rd person and mid paragraph it switches to first personOther than that it's fine
It doesn't feel like a percy Jackson dark souls crossover, it kinda reads like a novelization of a darksouls play through with some extra flavor text added in here and there to make it seem like a crossover. There is so much more possible than just some tiny little flecks of the Percy Jackson world thrown in. Like the fact that you've made Percy a pyromancer, Rick Roridan has put into place that the Greek gods hate it when another god, or another god's child, encroaches on their divinity. I mean, that was the premise of the first book, and it keeps getting brought up later on in the series. Sure, most of the Greek gods or goddesses that have something to do with fire are depicted as kinda chill, but they are still Greek gods/goddesses, and pety comes with the territory.Now sure, you can argue that dark souls pyromancy comes from the first flame and the dark soul, which are separate from the greeks, but that doesn't change the fact that percy has a spark of greek divinity right there inside of him ready to feel him use pyromancy. also, a side note on that praise the sun gets heard by Apolo, and he'd recognize that you, a Greek demigod, are not praising him.sighlook, I really enjoy the idea of a Percy Jackson cross with Dark Souls. there's so much you can do there, but you've basically thrown out most of the Percy Jackson lore, and individuality of the main character. Right now, I would never call this story a Percy Jackson Dark Souls crossover.
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interesting, can't wait to see how this develops.though slightly worried about the updating Stability due to the author playing the game side by side with the story.
Percy Jackson in dark souls. what more is there to say. (worlds he's going to)dark soulsdark souls 2demon souls
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Criminally underrated love it so far and only hope it becomes more popular in the future good work Scáthach keep up the good work. . Yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah
How come that Percy is the worst dark souls gamer in history. Having 600 deaths in a single run of any soul game, is horrendous. I had about 80 to 90 deaths in dark souls 3, which is my first dark souls game run experienced. and I am not Percy Jackson. Percy would probably be able to complete all the souls games without dying once.
the premise of the story has potential, but the grammar and writing style are just terrible.
Bro I don't understand at all bruh you make so many short story of multivers types of percy it makes me insane I not understand at all when start dark soul 3 it became weir D and weird to me I not longer understand you story😭😭😭😭😭😭
please keep posting chapters it's an interesting idea for a book and I'd hate to have it end up unfinished
It feels more like a game run-through than a story.. There's not really a world description nor a build-up of anything, and the writing reads kinda choppy to me.. other than a few more minor issues I have with this story, it's a meh kinda of story to me. one that I'd read if I was waiting on other story updates...
I love the plot, writing style, etc, and I love how, despite the bad grammar and punctuation, it is still very easy to read, at least, compared to your average webnovel book. Thank you for writing this author, you're doing great so far.
40 chapters but only 5 reviews... I'll read it, but you gotta admit that's pretty sus...
First of all this story is literally at the bottom of the Pearcy Jackson tag, and it intrigued me.secondly the story and premise are good, but the Pov changes are a bit confusing, like one moment its 3rd person and mid paragraph it switches to first personOther than that it's fine
It doesn't feel like a percy Jackson dark souls crossover, it kinda reads like a novelization of a darksouls play through with some extra flavor text added in here and there to make it seem like a crossover. There is so much more possible than just some tiny little flecks of the Percy Jackson world thrown in. Like the fact that you've made Percy a pyromancer, Rick Roridan has put into place that the Greek gods hate it when another god, or another god's child, encroaches on their divinity. I mean, that was the premise of the first book, and it keeps getting brought up later on in the series. Sure, most of the Greek gods or goddesses that have something to do with fire are depicted as kinda chill, but they are still Greek gods/goddesses, and pety comes with the territory.Now sure, you can argue that dark souls pyromancy comes from the first flame and the dark soul, which are separate from the greeks, but that doesn't change the fact that percy has a spark of greek divinity right there inside of him ready to feel him use pyromancy. also, a side note on that praise the sun gets heard by Apolo, and he'd recognize that you, a Greek demigod, are not praising him.sighlook, I really enjoy the idea of a Percy Jackson cross with Dark Souls. there's so much you can do there, but you've basically thrown out most of the Percy Jackson lore, and individuality of the main character. Right now, I would never call this story a Percy Jackson Dark Souls crossover.
Spoiler de révélation interesting, can't wait to see how this develops.though slightly worried about the updating Stability due to the author playing the game side by side with the story.
Percy Jackson in dark souls. what more is there to say. (worlds he's going to)dark soulsdark souls 2demon souls
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Criminally underrated love it so far and only hope it becomes more popular in the future good work Scáthach keep up the good work. . Yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah