Omniverse: The Orderless Worlds

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youareme

Aurthor here as this is my first story there may be some mistakes, so all the criticism as requested. I hope you enjoy this story and the upload schedule will depend on the time.

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youareme

So, the beginning chapters were quite rough grammar-wise. But don't worry I have improved it. (I think I did I can't be sure as I am not a Reader) Still, I hope you enjoy my work and don't forget to drop a review on what you think. Bye for now.

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Jackleell

The story is good, but the grammar and spelling are bad. You need to fix that. Maybe use ChatGPT if English is not your strong suit. The main character seems to be dull and boring; you don't tell us anything about him or how he looks. The powers seem cool. I hope you keep up the good work.

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GodOfLight

Too many grammatical errors, stupid and hypocritical main character, stretching things out dozens of times when it could have been done in one or two chapters, forced plot

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Rose_BloodKill

I guess I'll put five star review first and think about it in the future if i change it so keep up with the good work author-san

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AlastorGF

Sinceramente no me gusto, el hecho que mágicamente en menos de 8 horas tiene la capacidad de hacker todo los gobiernos del mundo y sin ningún explicación de cómo mierd pasa de un 0 conocimiento a nivel súper dios ssj fase 4 realmente me saco toda ganas de leer este fanfic

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Guard_the_Azkaban

Dear author, could you tell me at what point in your novel, does Mc fix himself and stop being a coward and tell the truth to Sora, Yukino and his friends?

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Daoistnd3HCw

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DaoistPzdVsl

Muito bom mesmo 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😃😊😊dhu3628whwygdysbhedudhsjdudhdhdhdhdhdhdbussnusdjdudjdhrdkzosmxuneoxndyqnKj;38*;$-$-*8$;$7$;$7

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ghost_316x

A hidden diamond that’s all I could say

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TrueMonarch00

Great story development by the author, though the update isn’t frequent the story is Great hope the author does not drop this novel. For those whom read reviews about a novel before reading this is for the you the story would be the greatest novel to read. I will be waiting for you guys to leave your opinions of the fan fic in the comments

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ArdaPendragon

a pathetic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]main character

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NeaCambelt

Nul trop long [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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PerfectZero

It has a interesting plot but the author drags everything out making a something that would have taken at max 3 chapters into 12. The first 20 chapters are in need of editing cause the grammar can kill.

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jonathan_santosmtz

Muy buena. realmente me gustó la temática, espero con ansias que yukino sea la primera pareja" .......................................................

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NOT_OMNISCIENT

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