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mc kuat tapi tidak pernah berusaha mengubah plot menandakan kurangnya kreativitas
Honestly, it's an incredible premise and such amazing potential, but it becomes a self insert about the authors dreams extremely quick, so if u like that, read. If not, I'd avoid it.
Constant miss information with alot of mid figjt nerfing of the charictor. The main character doesn’t really do anything other than waiting untill his allies need him then one shoting his opponent after toying with them.
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What the story says it is: Naruto world with Dragonball abilities What it actually is: Use the same 3 techniques for almost the entire story, swap universes a bunch, get nerfed to the point where your weaker then yamcha, no actual ki.
the problem with this fanfic is that the author gave him op powers. this has made for the battles the mc has to be boring and uninteresting. and he knows how to write battle scenes, the fight with Naruto vs Sasuke was honestly pretty good, but with mc they always end up being boring. and on the latest chapters it has become worse, now all of the sudden he went from being on the fairy tail world to somehow go to fighting Luffy 5th gear. this story has the problem that ff with op characters have, authors don't know how to balance an op character with way weaker world. MC has dragon ball powers and we all know that even at the lowest they were already planet busters, even when the mc is nerfed he is still stronger than everything in naruto, fairy tail and one piece.
it's good but hiruzen is alive.only for this i quit, sorry writer it's realy good but how can you let him live[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Pure and hard Plot Armor... Not to mention how the author's likes or dislikes towards certain characters lead to a very boring plot......................................
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I only read to the end of Naruto shippuden and it is a good story. there are few problems here and there but in all I loved it.
This is the best Goku FF that I have read!. It really is entertaining, as much as I'd like to admit. I will love it if the author posted more chapters. But I guess o would rather have Quality than quantity.
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Evaluation: Subpar.WQ: Multiple gramm errors which can be improved on. Monotonous dialogues/interaction & redundant thought process. 3/5SD: With a slow to average pace of development and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster. 2/5CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. MC is like a stupid Naruto with hero complex no kill rule which is the frustrating part as we all know what a NINJA world is. Lacks utilization of NarutoVerse foreknowledge & his earth/previous life experiences. 2/5US: Chapters are short, stability of update is up to speed compared to the quality of this FF. 3/5WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided that MC follows/observe cannon. 3/5Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
[Portuguse Review] Foi divertido de ler, apesar da tradução automática ser uma bosta me obrigando a usar o Google Tradutor. O maior problema dessa obra em minha opinião é o fraco desenvolvimento dos personagens, falta muitas relações, não no sentido romântico, o protagonista fica amigo de todo mundo mas não parece natural, ainda assim me diverti lendo.
fr if u cant make a proper story why not just sell your ideas to someone who can make it bloom if u know what i am talking about...............
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One of the best books I read plus the creativity most people with powers like the z fighters would just one shot everything I'm glad your different and keep it inside the power scale and also the funny moments in there keep it up👍
Okay from the title I thought this was going to be way different and I have to say I'm really disappointed also the main characters is too passive but the updating stability is ok writing quality is also ok overall I wouldn't read it
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Excelente trabalho amigo Nao ligue para os críticos ..................................................... ...................................................... ...................................................... .....................
The grammer is terrible and the dialogue is honestly really incoherent at times. The premise and knowledge is there and it would be a good story if the author could at least enlist a editor who can understand English. Hopefully this story can improve in the future.
Trying to rate this story accurately is impossible. The writing quality is just all over the place with so many grammar and coherence problems. It's hard to make sense of anything, which makes it impossible to properly evaluate other important aspects like the plot, characters, and world background. I can't even tell if there's a real story hiding in this jumbled mess. If I could, I would give the writing quality an even lower rating because, honestly, it's pretty bad.
i like your novel a lot except for the grammar mistakes the whole story is worthwhile. I like the path in which the story is following right now. and iam expecting it to be a good one even in the world war arc.
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Awesome work and I don't know what to say about this because i am only typing extra words to complete 140 words limit haha haha haha haha haha
The first world (Naruto) had a pretty good history till the end, however, the remaining two got pretty much rushed and the interactions weren't as much deep as intended, like, the One Piece world ended without the MC returning to the crew, he didn't even send his goodbyes, even worse, he broke his promise to return to them and the Dragon Ball world l, although very rushed had a pretty good ending and it's understandable they didn't wanted to leave that world, but I still got disappointed that the MC didn't came back to the previous worlds to at least explain things, like, he just left his friends aside from previous worlds. Despite these flaws the fanfic was pretty much solid, it was great.
mc kuat tapi tidak pernah berusaha mengubah plot menandakan kurangnya kreativitas
Honestly, it's an incredible premise and such amazing potential, but it becomes a self insert about the authors dreams extremely quick, so if u like that, read. If not, I'd avoid it.
Constant miss information with alot of mid figjt nerfing of the charictor. The main character doesn’t really do anything other than waiting untill his allies need him then one shoting his opponent after toying with them.
Spoiler de révélation What the story says it is: Naruto world with Dragonball abilities What it actually is: Use the same 3 techniques for almost the entire story, swap universes a bunch, get nerfed to the point where your weaker then yamcha, no actual ki.
the problem with this fanfic is that the author gave him op powers. this has made for the battles the mc has to be boring and uninteresting. and he knows how to write battle scenes, the fight with Naruto vs Sasuke was honestly pretty good, but with mc they always end up being boring. and on the latest chapters it has become worse, now all of the sudden he went from being on the fairy tail world to somehow go to fighting Luffy 5th gear. this story has the problem that ff with op characters have, authors don't know how to balance an op character with way weaker world. MC has dragon ball powers and we all know that even at the lowest they were already planet busters, even when the mc is nerfed he is still stronger than everything in naruto, fairy tail and one piece.
it's good but hiruzen is alive.only for this i quit, sorry writer it's realy good but how can you let him live[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Pure and hard Plot Armor... Not to mention how the author's likes or dislikes towards certain characters lead to a very boring plot......................................
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I only read to the end of Naruto shippuden and it is a good story. there are few problems here and there but in all I loved it.
This is the best Goku FF that I have read!. It really is entertaining, as much as I'd like to admit. I will love it if the author posted more chapters. But I guess o would rather have Quality than quantity.
Awesome sauce love it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Evaluation: Subpar.WQ: Multiple gramm errors which can be improved on. Monotonous dialogues/interaction & redundant thought process. 3/5SD: With a slow to average pace of development and it also lacks MC & story progression since author-san decided to follow cannon/plot which is lackluster. 2/5CD: MC is a transmigrator but his foreknowledge & adult mentality are lacking. MC is like a stupid Naruto with hero complex no kill rule which is the frustrating part as we all know what a NINJA world is. Lacks utilization of NarutoVerse foreknowledge & his earth/previous life experiences. 2/5US: Chapters are short, stability of update is up to speed compared to the quality of this FF. 3/5WB: There's nothing new as author-san decided that MC follows/observe cannon. 3/5Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD
[Portuguse Review] Foi divertido de ler, apesar da tradução automática ser uma bosta me obrigando a usar o Google Tradutor. O maior problema dessa obra em minha opinião é o fraco desenvolvimento dos personagens, falta muitas relações, não no sentido romântico, o protagonista fica amigo de todo mundo mas não parece natural, ainda assim me diverti lendo.
fr if u cant make a proper story why not just sell your ideas to someone who can make it bloom if u know what i am talking about...............
Spoiler de révélation One of the best books I read plus the creativity most people with powers like the z fighters would just one shot everything I'm glad your different and keep it inside the power scale and also the funny moments in there keep it up👍
Okay from the title I thought this was going to be way different and I have to say I'm really disappointed also the main characters is too passive but the updating stability is ok writing quality is also ok overall I wouldn't read it
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Excelente trabalho amigo Nao ligue para os críticos ..................................................... ...................................................... ...................................................... .....................
The grammer is terrible and the dialogue is honestly really incoherent at times. The premise and knowledge is there and it would be a good story if the author could at least enlist a editor who can understand English. Hopefully this story can improve in the future.
Trying to rate this story accurately is impossible. The writing quality is just all over the place with so many grammar and coherence problems. It's hard to make sense of anything, which makes it impossible to properly evaluate other important aspects like the plot, characters, and world background. I can't even tell if there's a real story hiding in this jumbled mess. If I could, I would give the writing quality an even lower rating because, honestly, it's pretty bad.
i like your novel a lot except for the grammar mistakes the whole story is worthwhile. I like the path in which the story is following right now. and iam expecting it to be a good one even in the world war arc.
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Awesome work and I don't know what to say about this because i am only typing extra words to complete 140 words limit haha haha haha haha haha
The first world (Naruto) had a pretty good history till the end, however, the remaining two got pretty much rushed and the interactions weren't as much deep as intended, like, the One Piece world ended without the MC returning to the crew, he didn't even send his goodbyes, even worse, he broke his promise to return to them and the Dragon Ball world l, although very rushed had a pretty good ending and it's understandable they didn't wanted to leave that world, but I still got disappointed that the MC didn't came back to the previous worlds to at least explain things, like, he just left his friends aside from previous worlds. Despite these flaws the fanfic was pretty much solid, it was great.