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Ya book was really good when I read it last year. It’s been an year…I wish author picks it up again. I liked that author was engaging and using commentator’s names in the Chat. It was a lot of fun.
This was just tons of fun to read! Really wish it’d be continued though
Great grammar, story, and excellent writing. It doesn’t have a lot of chapters yet, but I highly recommend it still. I was smiling/laughing the whole time while I was reading the fic
great story with a fresh concept & likeable main character with great interaction between characters. looking forward to more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like the story, it's cool. Everything is great other than the fact that MC is trying to woo May's mom when he already have May herself.
Honestly, probably the beat pokemon ff i have read, hooked and looking foward to the storys progression. ;)
is actually a fresh concept for a pokemon story, it have a totally natural and fun interaction betwen characters is teh story keeps like it is now it will be one of those stories u dont forget
this has got to be the most interesting book I have seen yet and it's original and the writing is good and the author is really good at portraying the other characters personality it's tame and the system is mostly not part of it and it has some of the greatest comedy out there and take it from me I have read almost all the books on 4 different tags like the system tags and I spend almost 24 hours reading just all my other accounts were lost though the author just uploads whenever they feel like it but it's great overall
Seriously probably my most looked forward too novel. It's so good. I love the interactions though I'm a little worried because in the last 3 chapters (9,10,11) Mc seemed much angrier and really edgy than the other chapters
THIS IS SO GOOD y'all missing out if you not reading it. MC has a likeable personality imo Chat isn't bland and dumb like every other fanfic of this kind actually done well
Один из лучших фанфиков про Покемонов. Надеюсь автор не дропнет и напишет историю до конца. Больше всего понравилось взаимодействие между персонажами.
I rarely review something, but when I do it’s because I really believe it’s good. The story is unique and the characters has personalities. If you read this Author please add Cynthia as a lover that’s all I ask. May and Cynthia are a must, whoever else you want I leave up to you.
One of the best concepts ive read yet and the story is executed very well,the chat feels very real and is amazing
Best Pokemon Fanfic... The notion of live streaming in a Pokemon world was such a fun idea. The Mc has a fun personality and I especially like the chat messages and their interaction with each other. It's just a very fun and entertaining to read, you can't help but get hooked on it.
This is legitimately a great ff. Love the characters and the chat interactions are great. The comedy is great and its execution has a very 'anime' style as opposed to other ff.
Love the story so far! Although would like to request a list of all the people who watches the MC and their counter parts. At least those who are known. That would be amazing Hahaha
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Pretty good ……………….. love your dad so I don’t think he wants his money lol I think he’s a little more like he wants to be with him and he is so much better with his dad lol I think he’s so funny lol I think he was just a kid he didn’t want it lol I think he
Love the concept and hope you will continue this work of art!. Looking forward what comes next
This already has 9 reviews? Huh, guess I'll be the 10th. I'm obviously biased but I think it's really good, give it a try. I've been frequently told the concept is unique so give it a try for that at least.
Ya book was really good when I read it last year. It’s been an year…I wish author picks it up again. I liked that author was engaging and using commentator’s names in the Chat. It was a lot of fun.
This was just tons of fun to read! Really wish it’d be continued though
Great grammar, story, and excellent writing. It doesn’t have a lot of chapters yet, but I highly recommend it still. I was smiling/laughing the whole time while I was reading the fic
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I like the story, it's cool. Everything is great other than the fact that MC is trying to woo May's mom when he already have May herself.
Honestly, probably the beat pokemon ff i have read, hooked and looking foward to the storys progression. ;)
is actually a fresh concept for a pokemon story, it have a totally natural and fun interaction betwen characters is teh story keeps like it is now it will be one of those stories u dont forget
this has got to be the most interesting book I have seen yet and it's original and the writing is good and the author is really good at portraying the other characters personality it's tame and the system is mostly not part of it and it has some of the greatest comedy out there and take it from me I have read almost all the books on 4 different tags like the system tags and I spend almost 24 hours reading just all my other accounts were lost though the author just uploads whenever they feel like it but it's great overall
Seriously probably my most looked forward too novel. It's so good. I love the interactions though I'm a little worried because in the last 3 chapters (9,10,11) Mc seemed much angrier and really edgy than the other chapters
THIS IS SO GOOD y'all missing out if you not reading it. MC has a likeable personality imo Chat isn't bland and dumb like every other fanfic of this kind actually done well
Один из лучших фанфиков про Покемонов. Надеюсь автор не дропнет и напишет историю до конца. Больше всего понравилось взаимодействие между персонажами.
I rarely review something, but when I do it’s because I really believe it’s good. The story is unique and the characters has personalities. If you read this Author please add Cynthia as a lover that’s all I ask. May and Cynthia are a must, whoever else you want I leave up to you.
One of the best concepts ive read yet and the story is executed very well,the chat feels very real and is amazing
Best Pokemon Fanfic... The notion of live streaming in a Pokemon world was such a fun idea. The Mc has a fun personality and I especially like the chat messages and their interaction with each other. It's just a very fun and entertaining to read, you can't help but get hooked on it.
This is legitimately a great ff. Love the characters and the chat interactions are great. The comedy is great and its execution has a very 'anime' style as opposed to other ff.
Love the story so far! Although would like to request a list of all the people who watches the MC and their counter parts. At least those who are known. That would be amazing Hahaha
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Pretty good ……………….. love your dad so I don’t think he wants his money lol I think he’s a little more like he wants to be with him and he is so much better with his dad lol I think he’s so funny lol I think he was just a kid he didn’t want it lol I think he
Love the concept and hope you will continue this work of art!. Looking forward what comes next
This already has 9 reviews? Huh, guess I'll be the 10th. I'm obviously biased but I think it's really good, give it a try. I've been frequently told the concept is unique so give it a try for that at least.