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As a fanfiction it stuck to the material even with the oc’s involved and progressed chronologically without fault
i swear i like fanfic with power and stuf but this story ut realy hooked me , i couldnt stop and i finished it in 3 days
I mean, come one author, how did you manage to make a story where the mc is the worst character? I literally couldn’t care less if the mc just dropped dead he is so spineless and boring🤦
This was genuinely one of, if not THE best GOT stories I have ever had the pleasure to read. The story, the characters, the world building were all incredibly detailed. I look forward to reading your future stories.
in the beginning, it looked like another story to read but now it is one of the best if not the best stories I will ever read. thank you for giving us an amazing time we hope the other workers do the same 🤧😪🤧😪🤧😪🤧😪😔
Good Stuff. It's finished now and definitely worth a read. The epilogue showing the consequences of the main character's (and everyone else's) decisions was a nice touch.
I agree with the review that I took a screenshot of most these reviews were made by people that didn’t even read half the story, and others just keep saying the main character is a c*ckold (he isn’t and both he and his wife are loyal to each other) and that he is spineless, and while it is true that he was spineless to a certain extent once you read further into the story you’ll see why, and to add on top of that he eventually does become more assertive and decisive.
This is the 3rd fanfic of yours im reading all were great i genuinly enjoyed the story and am thankfull for you for introducing me to hotd i have been ignoring that till now the only con i have for you is that update was slow but quality comes before quantity and im thankfull for that if i had money i would have paid . i hope you continue to write great books and follow our passion to be a great author
because this story took a long time to finish most people left negative reviews about mc being spineless and left since some webnovel readers want self inserts to be gods who ca go to war when theyre 6 years old be an all around edge lord im not surprised but this is a great story finally an mc who is a regular human with no powerups using his knowledge and brains to make it by himself in the world this singular fic made me interested in hotd which i have been ignoring till now ignore the negative reviews theyre stuck in the beining of the story and are regular op powerfantasy people with no taste
Muy buena historia me alegra q tenga un final y allá quedado a mitad Espero con ansias el epílogo para ver cómo cambia el futuro ...............
This was such a well written story from beginning to end. The characters and their dialogue was well written and enjoyable to read. Most of the plot points made sense and was not predictable in any way. The author really outdid himself with this one, I hope he writes another book set in Asoiaf soon.
Started good, quickly went downhill, mc lacks agency and the fic is just drama drama drama and nothing else. It is a chore to read
Bem... é um pouco decepcionante. Parecia uma história boa. Parecia. Se não fosse a gramática e ortografia tão confusas quanto o enredo da história em questão.
It’s written decently but I just kept thinking so is this a flashback or a slow part to introduce something interesting then it just continued to disappoint me
The mc is spineless and the story is boring with very little substance 4/10 do not recommend
novelmu sangat buruk, kualitas tulisannya sangat membingungkan, tidak ada yang menceritakan awal mula MC nya, tiba2 langsung masuk kedalam ceritanya,. hiatuskan saja novel burukmu ini, sungguh menyesal saya membaca novel ini
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I’ve enjoyed reading it, it’s not a super complicated fic to get into with changes here and there to the story. I wish the MC didn’t take the abuse he gets from his brothers, even when he says that’s enough he just kinda runs off but still comes back with no real consequences for the offenders. In any case though I do like his character beyond the previous statement, and I think the fic is worth the read. :D
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This whole thing is straight trash. As soon as I saw all of the Alicent POV I knew this story was going to be trash. I dropped this nonsense after two chapters...
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I see a lot of people not liking this book but I think that it is good just because the MC is not a harem lord does not mean he is a bad character he is written like a person so hope you keep up the good work.
Muy buena historia, no la mejor pero si muy bien hecha en dar un cierre a la historia con unos de los mejores finales. Claro está que es una historia muy querida por su autor Haci como Ami, me encantaría más historia como está muy buena, no te desanimes por los malos comentarios siempre hablan de como está mal esto y aquello pero si son tan buenos por qué no hacen sus propios fanfic e historias y dejan de criticar y dejar malos comentarios que solo buscan hacer que el autor abandone su historia. Éxito es tus proyectos
As a fanfiction it stuck to the material even with the oc’s involved and progressed chronologically without fault
i swear i like fanfic with power and stuf but this story ut realy hooked me , i couldnt stop and i finished it in 3 days
I mean, come one author, how did you manage to make a story where the mc is the worst character? I literally couldn’t care less if the mc just dropped dead he is so spineless and boring🤦
This was genuinely one of, if not THE best GOT stories I have ever had the pleasure to read. The story, the characters, the world building were all incredibly detailed. I look forward to reading your future stories.
in the beginning, it looked like another story to read but now it is one of the best if not the best stories I will ever read. thank you for giving us an amazing time we hope the other workers do the same 🤧😪🤧😪🤧😪🤧😪😔
Good Stuff. It's finished now and definitely worth a read. The epilogue showing the consequences of the main character's (and everyone else's) decisions was a nice touch.
I agree with the review that I took a screenshot of most these reviews were made by people that didn’t even read half the story, and others just keep saying the main character is a c*ckold (he isn’t and both he and his wife are loyal to each other) and that he is spineless, and while it is true that he was spineless to a certain extent once you read further into the story you’ll see why, and to add on top of that he eventually does become more assertive and decisive.
This is the 3rd fanfic of yours im reading all were great i genuinly enjoyed the story and am thankfull for you for introducing me to hotd i have been ignoring that till now the only con i have for you is that update was slow but quality comes before quantity and im thankfull for that if i had money i would have paid . i hope you continue to write great books and follow our passion to be a great author
because this story took a long time to finish most people left negative reviews about mc being spineless and left since some webnovel readers want self inserts to be gods who ca go to war when theyre 6 years old be an all around edge lord im not surprised but this is a great story finally an mc who is a regular human with no powerups using his knowledge and brains to make it by himself in the world this singular fic made me interested in hotd which i have been ignoring till now ignore the negative reviews theyre stuck in the beining of the story and are regular op powerfantasy people with no taste
Muy buena historia me alegra q tenga un final y allá quedado a mitad Espero con ansias el epílogo para ver cómo cambia el futuro ...............
This was such a well written story from beginning to end. The characters and their dialogue was well written and enjoyable to read. Most of the plot points made sense and was not predictable in any way. The author really outdid himself with this one, I hope he writes another book set in Asoiaf soon.
Started good, quickly went downhill, mc lacks agency and the fic is just drama drama drama and nothing else. It is a chore to read
Bem... é um pouco decepcionante. Parecia uma história boa. Parecia. Se não fosse a gramática e ortografia tão confusas quanto o enredo da história em questão.
It’s written decently but I just kept thinking so is this a flashback or a slow part to introduce something interesting then it just continued to disappoint me
The mc is spineless and the story is boring with very little substance 4/10 do not recommend
novelmu sangat buruk, kualitas tulisannya sangat membingungkan, tidak ada yang menceritakan awal mula MC nya, tiba2 langsung masuk kedalam ceritanya,. hiatuskan saja novel burukmu ini, sungguh menyesal saya membaca novel ini
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I’ve enjoyed reading it, it’s not a super complicated fic to get into with changes here and there to the story. I wish the MC didn’t take the abuse he gets from his brothers, even when he says that’s enough he just kinda runs off but still comes back with no real consequences for the offenders. In any case though I do like his character beyond the previous statement, and I think the fic is worth the read. :D
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This whole thing is straight trash. As soon as I saw all of the Alicent POV I knew this story was going to be trash. I dropped this nonsense after two chapters...
Spoiler de révélation I see a lot of people not liking this book but I think that it is good just because the MC is not a harem lord does not mean he is a bad character he is written like a person so hope you keep up the good work.
Muy buena historia, no la mejor pero si muy bien hecha en dar un cierre a la historia con unos de los mejores finales. Claro está que es una historia muy querida por su autor Haci como Ami, me encantaría más historia como está muy buena, no te desanimes por los malos comentarios siempre hablan de como está mal esto y aquello pero si son tan buenos por qué no hacen sus propios fanfic e historias y dejan de criticar y dejar malos comentarios que solo buscan hacer que el autor abandone su historia. Éxito es tus proyectos