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sorry I haven't gotten to reading this yet it in my library but I was wondering if the author was going to continue there tensura based fanfics and yes planning to read this two but I started the tensura first
A very interesting story that tells the life of Poseidon, in the event that he leaves the life in which he believes that he does not need anyone and begins a journey in search of power, since he is not perfect as he thought. very good story
Una muy buena historia se desenvuelve muy bien tiene una trama atrapante los personajes también se desarrollaron bien no tienen incongruencias en general todo está bien echo
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the story itself are good i thinks i am on the run too see all of his fan-fic lol
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So I am currently up to date on this fanfic and man I have to say this is one of the top fanfics I have read so far. The main charatcers background and motivations are clearly explained. The changes he has made to the events in fate have been very interesting and we have yet to hit the biggest events in fate either. So I can only see this getting better with time. This fanfic also has romance/harem and thank goodness it’s not Pokémon style the MC knows what he wants from his women. So if they don’t fit it he won’t romance them. I strongly recommend this fanfic if you like fate.
Really nice story and i hope you continue in the Fgo timeline to the lostbelts. Really wanna see Beryl die by being impaled or one shoting some lostbelt king like ivan or zeus.
At first ive put off from reading this mostly because fate is just complete stupid and messing but i have found my self deply enjoying pls never never stop working on this.
Está chvre el fic, el tiempo de actualizaciones es buena, el desarrollo de personajes ya establecidos me encanta, aunque no se desarrollar más al mc, porque lo siento más plano? Inclusive los personajes secundarios lo siento vivos, podrías jugar un poco más con la imagen que todos tiene de Poseidón de ser una cara estoica e indiferente.
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O personagem,o mundo e tudo nessa fanfic é incrível,eu leio desde os primeiros capítulos e só tenho a dizer parabéns pq não tem outra história q me deixa tão preso quanto esta
Quite an interesting idea of the plot and narration. There are problems with grammar, but it's not for me to judge (English is my 4th language). I would like to see Poseidon in Douluo Dalu and see how he will interact with Poseidon from this universe.
Great Work. Love the story and hope to see Poseidon go out of fateverse more *grins*
Great work, Great author, personally inspired me to write even better stories love it man, It's a great story you should definitely give it a try
Amazing story and idea, the execution? the execution is okay but the grammar and the writing style is not. I recommend to improve upon them, overall this story is okay if you can get pass that
I have bren reading this book since its chapters were only 15 , My honest rating for this is this:Writing quality:⭐️⭐️⭐️Reason: This might be a prespective thing but as someone who usually has very high standards for writing quality this feels lacking in areas such as conversation and grammatical flow.Story Development:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Reason:While the story has been paced at a correct rate the romance and overall charachters reaction at some point feel like either over the top or too damped , in simpler words the charachters are not developing at the same pace as the story progressesCharachter Design: ⭐️⭐️⭐️Reason : Again this is a prespective thing , while i do enjoy a selfish and evil Mc , they ultimately become redundent in my eyes and the Authors decision of using Poseidon's charachter as base reduced the emotional approach he could have brought about in the story , many great fics use emotional moments to take a place in our hearts if only for an instant it still impacts me and others as a reader .Updating stability:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Reason:No explaination needed the updates are at okay enough paceWorld Background:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Reason: Fate has extensive background and so does this fic and sooner or later we will get The ROR arc i would say it is okayish but i am only giving this five stars to at least give the author 4 full starsYou may or may not agree with me this is my opinion on this Interesting work of Fiction that made my day multiple times
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sorry I haven't gotten to reading this yet it in my library but I was wondering if the author was going to continue there tensura based fanfics and yes planning to read this two but I started the tensura first
A very interesting story that tells the life of Poseidon, in the event that he leaves the life in which he believes that he does not need anyone and begins a journey in search of power, since he is not perfect as he thought. very good story
Una muy buena historia se desenvuelve muy bien tiene una trama atrapante los personajes también se desarrollaron bien no tienen incongruencias en general todo está bien echo
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the story itself are good i thinks i am on the run too see all of his fan-fic lol
Nuevas reseña para que no piensen que soy un bot ,..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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So I am currently up to date on this fanfic and man I have to say this is one of the top fanfics I have read so far. The main charatcers background and motivations are clearly explained. The changes he has made to the events in fate have been very interesting and we have yet to hit the biggest events in fate either. So I can only see this getting better with time. This fanfic also has romance/harem and thank goodness it’s not Pokémon style the MC knows what he wants from his women. So if they don’t fit it he won’t romance them. I strongly recommend this fanfic if you like fate.
Really nice story and i hope you continue in the Fgo timeline to the lostbelts. Really wanna see Beryl die by being impaled or one shoting some lostbelt king like ivan or zeus.
At first ive put off from reading this mostly because fate is just complete stupid and messing but i have found my self deply enjoying pls never never stop working on this.
Está chvre el fic, el tiempo de actualizaciones es buena, el desarrollo de personajes ya establecidos me encanta, aunque no se desarrollar más al mc, porque lo siento más plano? Inclusive los personajes secundarios lo siento vivos, podrías jugar un poco más con la imagen que todos tiene de Poseidón de ser una cara estoica e indiferente.
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O personagem,o mundo e tudo nessa fanfic é incrível,eu leio desde os primeiros capítulos e só tenho a dizer parabéns pq não tem outra história q me deixa tão preso quanto esta
Quite an interesting idea of the plot and narration. There are problems with grammar, but it's not for me to judge (English is my 4th language). I would like to see Poseidon in Douluo Dalu and see how he will interact with Poseidon from this universe.
Great Work. Love the story and hope to see Poseidon go out of fateverse more *grins*
Great work, Great author, personally inspired me to write even better stories love it man, It's a great story you should definitely give it a try
Amazing story and idea, the execution? the execution is okay but the grammar and the writing style is not. I recommend to improve upon them, overall this story is okay if you can get pass that
I have bren reading this book since its chapters were only 15 , My honest rating for this is this:Writing quality:⭐️⭐️⭐️Reason: This might be a prespective thing but as someone who usually has very high standards for writing quality this feels lacking in areas such as conversation and grammatical flow.Story Development:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Reason:While the story has been paced at a correct rate the romance and overall charachters reaction at some point feel like either over the top or too damped , in simpler words the charachters are not developing at the same pace as the story progressesCharachter Design: ⭐️⭐️⭐️Reason : Again this is a prespective thing , while i do enjoy a selfish and evil Mc , they ultimately become redundent in my eyes and the Authors decision of using Poseidon's charachter as base reduced the emotional approach he could have brought about in the story , many great fics use emotional moments to take a place in our hearts if only for an instant it still impacts me and others as a reader .Updating stability:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Reason:No explaination needed the updates are at okay enough paceWorld Background:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️Reason: Fate has extensive background and so does this fic and sooner or later we will get The ROR arc i would say it is okayish but i am only giving this five stars to at least give the author 4 full starsYou may or may not agree with me this is my opinion on this Interesting work of Fiction that made my day multiple times
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