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Shameless author review! I give this story 5* since I like how the MC act like a real villain in the game while he can mantain his ordinary life in real world. He is a complex individual who's both brutal and charismatic. I guarantee you will drawn to him despite his evil persona. He also cunning and have a lot of tricks. The romantic relationships and revenge will add extra layer to the story. There's also a lot of action, war and bloody scenes in this story. Overall, I believe you will enjoy this story 🤗 Note: There's no NTR or Yuri in this story. So don't worry 😉
Well time to get a review done on this book/novel/series. This book has a very simple ,but good premise. It starts with Allen playing a new game and meeting the seven sin sister as I like calling them. They become husband and wives in game. but outside the game they our total strangers. This starts slow as they build trust and know who they our. Allen past is very dark in my view. This give the MC why he nice but distanced at the same time. During this time the girls take a interest in Allen due to this. Now saying this as a quick summary of the start of the book. This book gives some good twist and turns. I mean that you don't see it coming sometimes shocking. this book also funny. there also good drama. the only con i see is not enough in real world time and see the character build from there. There is a lot in game but not in the real world yet. I do feel that the book is still building and needs more chapter/ word count. I do highly enjoy the book just needs more time to show the character building and development. This I feel is the only lacking thing is all. The fighting scene and the gore is spot on and the evil the writer is on point. This the review for now and will do another when there more chapter in the future thank you for this book and I really do enjoy the character. Team Zoe and Jane and Shea lol. review from Will and Barb
I really like it. Chapters are not overly long like some other novels (in a positive way), the characters are cool and the demons vs players is a cool setup. Only thing I dislike so far is that he’s playing with the enemy. Feels off / boring
Great novel. Plot is top tier and full of depth Great world building Outstanding character depth Great revenge plot. Truly rewarding
this is possibly one of the best novels I have read on here, the story is well written, the characters have distinct personalities, the author is visually descriptive but not overly so, the hrem dynamic isn't overly dry. the MC actually cares. There is drama but it is written such that it is not painful to read.
nice story I just started reading and enjoying it a lot just one question is the MC going to get other wives from the seven sins?
I usually don't read videogame novels because the heroine can do it there and still say they are v. but I think I'll give this a read if you spoil me about their past(in game).
The story is decent, but I dont like multiple MCs. Also quite a lot spelling mistakes. I‘ll continue reading but skipp the boring second main character (the „good guy“)
Author san, you lied! You said no ntr but the hoe gets a reverse harem which she does not deserve and gets to live a happy satisfied life....but I am still at ch 163 and can’t say much about that but I felt betrayed by the authorsan... Also can someone spoil me and let me know if she suffers in the future I could continue reading this great novel.I really want to continue but the reverse harem of self entitled hoe is offputting me somehow....Great work anyway!!!
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a very boring novel it is like i am reading a slice of life novel with a little bit of shojo mixed in but little i mean like 1-5%? the mmo is basically 0 the status of the mc never saw again after the first time well... overall boring novel but readable but not for me
I look forward to your chapters. I love the way you describe your characters. Best of luck for you
A unique take where Allen the Mc, is the demon emperor in the game. I do like it, but it’s unfortunate that Allen and his demon wives don’t get to have equipment drops from unaliving enemies nor do they get the double exp like players in special events. Grammar is ok, character development is coming along. My main issue is the situation with the ex who cheated on Mc. Allen already met with her, they hashed it out. He rejected her and is moving on with his in game wives to irl. For some odd reason, the author keeps forcing the Sophia situation. 400+ chapters and she’s still in the picture. Chapters are dedicated to her and her simps when they def could’ve been used to flesh out Allen’s relationships with his seven wives. I mentioned how obvious and forceful these tedious situations were and the author responded by using Amber Heard as an example. Apparently, she’s now accusing Jason Mamoa of something. When I read that response, I sat there in disbelief for a moment, bc what?!? That’s your justification for dragging out this nonsense? Welp, just as I exited myself from reading anything Amber related(bc that too was dragged too long), I am exiting this novel. A shame too bc I really enjoyed Allen and his women. Good luck in your writing endeavors. ✌🏾
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Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
A very interesting novel. I expected the usual ”mysterious game” done by some powerful strong alien organization kinda stuff but was surprised to see that it is focused on Real Life. A very interesting and unique novel.
From what I’ve read so far, the book is very good. It's just that the author did a good job of making Sofia annoying and hatable. Too good of a job qctually...
is this story gonna stay as virtual or will the game will merge to original?pls I need to know if it's not gonna merge I'm not gonna read it
I can't believe how much I love this story, I mean its such a fun take on a VRMMO. The MC and 7 others become the villains of a brand new VRMMO, unbeknownst to the rest of the player base who all think they're up against advanced AI's. I'm really enjoying reading about these 8 completely stomping an entire literal player base. Another plus is the romance, the MC's backstory is that he is married to the other 7 in game, and we get to watch as their relationships bloom both in game and in real life.
What, how can I only find this masterpiece now?! Someone could've recommended this to me, but no one did?? Anyway I don't wanna spoil you anything 👀 It is very refreshing to read, and the plot t--- oops, okay I told you I'm not gonna spoil you. Go read! 5/5 👍
Ahhhhh so nerv wracki this is peak writing everyone peak I tell y ou[img=strong][img=strong][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=Feeling it]
First review of mine and unsee what to write down so I’ll speak my mind about the story. Great story so far with interesting characters, going at a good pace. The only thing that I feel somewhat lacking might be the world/story of the game they are playing on and how it feels weird that the demon emperor is not like a last boss, instead is a constant antagonist trying to stop players. When he is a ‘emperor’. With this their actions seem similar to team rocket and their constant harassment to Ash. But in this instance succeeding and destroying the player base. However over all the story is really good and would recommend and the past of the MC is really interesting and would be interesting how it will affect more of the story. Furthermore maybe also include some past of the other FMLs and allow it to integrate into the story, that might make it more enriched.
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you all should read this if you don't your a foool!!!!sorry about that so sorry your not a fool
Really enjoy your novel. Character dynamic is great and the interactions are fun. Creepy nursery rhymes are 10/10.
So far so good let's see just started reading but although unrealistic is a new thought I feel soo [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Quite a fun book, good romance and realistic human interactions, pace is great aswell. Definitely deserves to be one of the top books on Webnovel.
It is a really nice story where the balance between the game and real world is good.
300 chapters in. It's a good story with well written characters, good plot, good "plot," and an overall fun read.
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This is a great start for a very polished work. I am really enjoying the premise and look forward to future chapters.
Shameless author review! I give this story 5* since I like how the MC act like a real villain in the game while he can mantain his ordinary life in real world. He is a complex individual who's both brutal and charismatic. I guarantee you will drawn to him despite his evil persona. He also cunning and have a lot of tricks. The romantic relationships and revenge will add extra layer to the story. There's also a lot of action, war and bloody scenes in this story. Overall, I believe you will enjoy this story 🤗 Note: There's no NTR or Yuri in this story. So don't worry 😉
Well time to get a review done on this book/novel/series. This book has a very simple ,but good premise. It starts with Allen playing a new game and meeting the seven sin sister as I like calling them. They become husband and wives in game. but outside the game they our total strangers. This starts slow as they build trust and know who they our. Allen past is very dark in my view. This give the MC why he nice but distanced at the same time. During this time the girls take a interest in Allen due to this. Now saying this as a quick summary of the start of the book. This book gives some good twist and turns. I mean that you don't see it coming sometimes shocking. this book also funny. there also good drama. the only con i see is not enough in real world time and see the character build from there. There is a lot in game but not in the real world yet. I do feel that the book is still building and needs more chapter/ word count. I do highly enjoy the book just needs more time to show the character building and development. This I feel is the only lacking thing is all. The fighting scene and the gore is spot on and the evil the writer is on point. This the review for now and will do another when there more chapter in the future thank you for this book and I really do enjoy the character. Team Zoe and Jane and Shea lol. review from Will and Barb
I really like it. Chapters are not overly long like some other novels (in a positive way), the characters are cool and the demons vs players is a cool setup. Only thing I dislike so far is that he’s playing with the enemy. Feels off / boring
Great novel. Plot is top tier and full of depth Great world building Outstanding character depth Great revenge plot. Truly rewarding
this is possibly one of the best novels I have read on here, the story is well written, the characters have distinct personalities, the author is visually descriptive but not overly so, the hrem dynamic isn't overly dry. the MC actually cares. There is drama but it is written such that it is not painful to read.
nice story I just started reading and enjoying it a lot just one question is the MC going to get other wives from the seven sins?
I usually don't read videogame novels because the heroine can do it there and still say they are v. but I think I'll give this a read if you spoil me about their past(in game).
The story is decent, but I dont like multiple MCs. Also quite a lot spelling mistakes. I‘ll continue reading but skipp the boring second main character (the „good guy“)
Author san, you lied! You said no ntr but the hoe gets a reverse harem which she does not deserve and gets to live a happy satisfied life....but I am still at ch 163 and can’t say much about that but I felt betrayed by the authorsan... Also can someone spoil me and let me know if she suffers in the future I could continue reading this great novel.I really want to continue but the reverse harem of self entitled hoe is offputting me somehow....Great work anyway!!!
Spoiler de révélation here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse
a very boring novel it is like i am reading a slice of life novel with a little bit of shojo mixed in but little i mean like 1-5%? the mmo is basically 0 the status of the mc never saw again after the first time well... overall boring novel but readable but not for me
I look forward to your chapters. I love the way you describe your characters. Best of luck for you
A unique take where Allen the Mc, is the demon emperor in the game. I do like it, but it’s unfortunate that Allen and his demon wives don’t get to have equipment drops from unaliving enemies nor do they get the double exp like players in special events. Grammar is ok, character development is coming along. My main issue is the situation with the ex who cheated on Mc. Allen already met with her, they hashed it out. He rejected her and is moving on with his in game wives to irl. For some odd reason, the author keeps forcing the Sophia situation. 400+ chapters and she’s still in the picture. Chapters are dedicated to her and her simps when they def could’ve been used to flesh out Allen’s relationships with his seven wives. I mentioned how obvious and forceful these tedious situations were and the author responded by using Amber Heard as an example. Apparently, she’s now accusing Jason Mamoa of something. When I read that response, I sat there in disbelief for a moment, bc what?!? That’s your justification for dragging out this nonsense? Welp, just as I exited myself from reading anything Amber related(bc that too was dragged too long), I am exiting this novel. A shame too bc I really enjoyed Allen and his women. Good luck in your writing endeavors. ✌🏾
Spoiler de révélation Hello author! I would like to know if there is ntr in the work (I hope not) or yuri (I hope not). I would also like to know if yanderes, and if the protagonist really likes girls, doesn't just use... please answer me
A very interesting novel. I expected the usual ”mysterious game” done by some powerful strong alien organization kinda stuff but was surprised to see that it is focused on Real Life. A very interesting and unique novel.
From what I’ve read so far, the book is very good. It's just that the author did a good job of making Sofia annoying and hatable. Too good of a job qctually...
is this story gonna stay as virtual or will the game will merge to original?pls I need to know if it's not gonna merge I'm not gonna read it
I can't believe how much I love this story, I mean its such a fun take on a VRMMO. The MC and 7 others become the villains of a brand new VRMMO, unbeknownst to the rest of the player base who all think they're up against advanced AI's. I'm really enjoying reading about these 8 completely stomping an entire literal player base. Another plus is the romance, the MC's backstory is that he is married to the other 7 in game, and we get to watch as their relationships bloom both in game and in real life.
What, how can I only find this masterpiece now?! Someone could've recommended this to me, but no one did?? Anyway I don't wanna spoil you anything 👀 It is very refreshing to read, and the plot t--- oops, okay I told you I'm not gonna spoil you. Go read! 5/5 👍
Ahhhhh so nerv wracki this is peak writing everyone peak I tell y ou[img=strong][img=strong][img=nervous][img=nervous][img=Feeling it]
First review of mine and unsee what to write down so I’ll speak my mind about the story. Great story so far with interesting characters, going at a good pace. The only thing that I feel somewhat lacking might be the world/story of the game they are playing on and how it feels weird that the demon emperor is not like a last boss, instead is a constant antagonist trying to stop players. When he is a ‘emperor’. With this their actions seem similar to team rocket and their constant harassment to Ash. But in this instance succeeding and destroying the player base. However over all the story is really good and would recommend and the past of the MC is really interesting and would be interesting how it will affect more of the story. Furthermore maybe also include some past of the other FMLs and allow it to integrate into the story, that might make it more enriched.
Spoiler de révélation you all should read this if you don't your a foool!!!!sorry about that so sorry your not a fool
Really enjoy your novel. Character dynamic is great and the interactions are fun. Creepy nursery rhymes are 10/10.
So far so good let's see just started reading but although unrealistic is a new thought I feel soo [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Quite a fun book, good romance and realistic human interactions, pace is great aswell. Definitely deserves to be one of the top books on Webnovel.
It is a really nice story where the balance between the game and real world is good.
300 chapters in. It's a good story with well written characters, good plot, good "plot," and an overall fun read.
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This is a great start for a very polished work. I am really enjoying the premise and look forward to future chapters.