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its a disappointment .... most of the sentences does not even make sense .... didn't even do the proofreading ..... can't even remember the mc's name because it changes in every chapter..... can't understand what the sentences trying to say ..... total waste of time
Setidaknya saya suka melihat bab yang begitu banyak, tidak seperti novel naruto yang lain, sangat sedikit bab. Saya sudah terbiasa melihat MTL karya cina nama char menjadi aneh tapi masih bisa ditebak. Cerita nya juga cerah tidak gelap atau penuh dendam dan emosi negatif. Sistem nya juga gak keterlaluan op, banyak yang masih masuk akal, alur nya gak mengikuti aslinya dan masih bagus. #Lanjutkan saja walaupun merepotkan tapi men translite lebih mudah daripada membuat. "Jika kamu suka bacalah, jika tidak tinggalkan. Jangan meninggalkan komentar hinaan rendahan mu"[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
it reads like someone translated it through MTL over 40 times using different languages and the result of when it finally gets to English is whatever abortion of a novel i just read.
O Mc é completamente irrelevante para a história, tanto faz ele estar lá como não. Para mim essa fic é só uma reescrita copiada do original sem ter mudado nada praticamente só coloco um MC irrelevante nela. PS: tradução tão muito ruim para que lê pelo Google tradutor.
there are a lot of idiots talking about copies, tell me where the original is, I looked for it, I read it here so stop bothering me .....................................
Pls...Stop!!!!! You think this is very good? Why you still f****** upload????
dont bother to read the MC cant kill evn a single prominent ninja that was in the canon and only those nameless npc is not lucky dont bother to read the MC cant kill evn a single prominent ninja that was in the canon and only those nameless npc is not lucky
atleast translate it it's so hard for me to read the skill jutsu or even just name it's still purely mtk can't read it
its a disappointment .... most of the sentences does not even make sense .... didn't even do the proofreading ..... can't even remember the mc's name because it changes in every chapter..... can't understand what the sentences trying to say ..... total waste of time
Setidaknya saya suka melihat bab yang begitu banyak, tidak seperti novel naruto yang lain, sangat sedikit bab. Saya sudah terbiasa melihat MTL karya cina nama char menjadi aneh tapi masih bisa ditebak. Cerita nya juga cerah tidak gelap atau penuh dendam dan emosi negatif. Sistem nya juga gak keterlaluan op, banyak yang masih masuk akal, alur nya gak mengikuti aslinya dan masih bagus. #Lanjutkan saja walaupun merepotkan tapi men translite lebih mudah daripada membuat. "Jika kamu suka bacalah, jika tidak tinggalkan. Jangan meninggalkan komentar hinaan rendahan mu"[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=coins][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
it reads like someone translated it through MTL over 40 times using different languages and the result of when it finally gets to English is whatever abortion of a novel i just read.
O Mc é completamente irrelevante para a história, tanto faz ele estar lá como não. Para mim essa fic é só uma reescrita copiada do original sem ter mudado nada praticamente só coloco um MC irrelevante nela. PS: tradução tão muito ruim para que lê pelo Google tradutor.
there are a lot of idiots talking about copies, tell me where the original is, I looked for it, I read it here so stop bothering me .....................................
Pls...Stop!!!!! You think this is very good? Why you still f****** upload????
dont bother to read the MC cant kill evn a single prominent ninja that was in the canon and only those nameless npc is not lucky dont bother to read the MC cant kill evn a single prominent ninja that was in the canon and only those nameless npc is not lucky
atleast translate it it's so hard for me to read the skill jutsu or even just name it's still purely mtk can't read it
bro, i died reading this synopsis.......