JJK: Unrivaled Under The Heavens

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TrashyWriter01

You drop all of your stories before they hit 20 chapters, then you start a new one and drop that story, again and again. Your going to drop the new story your making befor it hits 20 chapters i can already see it. Nice stories though

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void_ouroboros

Mc has a hero complex. If others like it fine, just not for me. Character interactions feel off, I’m trash at explaining so I won’t elaborate. If I read correctly, after chapter 2-3 his system is completely useless as anything other than a status screen. The characters have reactions that make no sense that make me feel as the picture states.

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writers_adviser_69

man you jjust had to destroy ours dreams of to see a good mha fanfic that the mc have a system but is not super hiper mega ultra over power

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DiabloRedfox

sadly 1 is the least amount of stars i can give if I could I'd have given negative

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Oppenheimer

Really cool start of the novel. I hope the novel is going to continue with being so good and you are not going to drop it.

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Emibm2468

This story starts so well but the author literally says something just to contradict it in the next chapter. Also the MC supposedly wants to explore Japan and then out of nowhere he just starts living with a random family. Also that family just decides to invite a random person to their house for no apparent reason and they act as if they had always lived together when they literaly met the previous day.

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Lizrock

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Plutonwoody7

This author always has amazing work however he never finished them, so as you can guess this fanfic also has an amazing start so far but do expect him to drop it after 20 chapters or so, and believe me nothing you say will change his mind after he/she drop it, I don't think bro even check our comments or reviews. It's sad but hey what can we do?🤷

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kingGenovaGodfrey

this is a good fanfic but the update is slow but it's okay for people that are patient

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DollShururu

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tujan_pokhrel

very slow update...i forgot half the story when i read a new chapter after a month off update or so.... I'm quitting this fanfic...very bad story development too.😮‍💨😮‍💨

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kingGenovaGodfrey

please don't droppe this story 😭your storys are amazing but you dropped them so please don't droppe this

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DaoistOfeOTA

Turn your brain off if you wanna read this cause there are just so many contradictions and the mc acting like an actual bozo it’s just annoying only reason I read this is cause nobara is fl and author most likely gonna drop before it even gets to that point overall if you have nothing better to do read it ig (this meme can sum up the entire story)

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Daoist984428

В принципе очень даже классно .Правда немного грустно , что мало кензяку. . .

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Aleksic

Amazing novel author, I truly enjoyed reading so thanks! The characters are good, the way you put everting together it’s just good!!

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Victor_7740

Solid fanfic also the low rating is because of trolls who spamming 1 stars rating for some reason

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Axel_

really good. Can't wait for more chapters.

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Nouflex

hey there author I hope you are doing well and I hope this message reachs you. I noticed that you have problems with uploading and I guess you probably are like me, you feel lazy to write and upload and I found a solution for that. I created a p@rteon for my books and started uploading, this both motivated me to write and upload and made me gain money. so as a fellow author, who think that you work is really great and deserve to be finished I suggest you start a p@treon where you sell your books, while uploading here at the same time.

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Andretlr_0119

To be honest everything is amazing about this book the except for your update speed but all in all good writing and pacing and great way of making your story fit in seemlessly