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I advise you not to even read the ending, it's a worse ending than School Days
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Don't read. Author sticks random chapters every so often behind pateon so you all of sudden can't tell what happened. It's one thing to release smut or bonus chapters but it's another thing to redact the plot and story in some pathetic money making scheme.
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it was kinda okay at the beginning. it slowly worsens as the mc gained op powers. and author gave tragic experience/endings to many characters. the character development of the mc did not flesh out well. but i like how he did not end up sleeping with all the "heroines." actually some of the said heroines are with their respective male protagonist. but yeah, the tragedies leave a very bad taste. and i guess author got tired and just rushed the ending altogether. not worth the time. to anyone reading this review, i suggest you look for another fic to enjoy.
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Why? Kenapa harus ending yang buruk kenapa kau tidak membuat ending yang lebih baik seperti mungkin dia mati MELINDUNGI keluarga atau mungkin bisa memperbaiki Dunia nya percuma 100 lebih chapter jika ending nya kayak sampah
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Author. Please write what happened in the last closed chapter? What did Issei do to Etsuba? Why does the main character hate Issei? What happened? We don't necessarily need a colorful description of 18+ moments. I understand when authors post 18+ on Patreon. This can be called fan service. But the last chapter is not just an 18+ chapter. This is a chapter that greatly influences the plot. Without knowing what happened, it is difficult to understand the reason for the main character's actions. Therefore, author. Please tell me what happened to Etsuba.
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this is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will there be any yuri in the harem not a fan. i know there is not any lemons but is it implied or not 🤞
Just write what you feel and like in your novel, as long as it's decent, improvement will naturally come along.
this story is annoying he is OP but do nothing in every corner there is girl so much that it is already annoying and he didnt focus on the attack from the group idk just he just too dumb,useless interaction
Sigo si saber por que no tiene mas de 4.0 estrellas si esta muy bueno. Si tuviera alguna queja es que los lemon no aparecen y ni aparece una descripción de lo que paso en el capitulo, Y QUE NO SALE NADA DE DE DATE A LIVE... Quisiera que hubiera al menos un simple capitulo de mi anime favorito pero que se le puede hacer.😩😩 Muy buena la novela la recomiendo encarecidamente. 👍👍♥️♥️
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Honestly, I liked the story, but I was disappointed that it cut content for payment and from what I see it happens more than once, I have paid to read more chapters and see additional content. If I have to choose between staying up to date on a novel that I've been following for a while and a couple of chapters of a novel I read today, I guess it's a shame.
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bang, aku dari indonesia. dan aku rasa keren abang bisa bikin fan-fik sampe 200 bab dan mendapatkan peminat yang banyak termasuk aku [img=merekomendasikan] lanjutkan bang, dan semangat selalu.
another one of the stories that are ruined by 3rd person writing. the concept was great but the writing is as if someone is explaining the story to me which is honestly annoying.
I advise you not to even read the ending, it's a worse ending than School Days
Spoiler de révélation Don't waste your time on this shit [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Don't read. Author sticks random chapters every so often behind pateon so you all of sudden can't tell what happened. It's one thing to release smut or bonus chapters but it's another thing to redact the plot and story in some pathetic money making scheme.
Bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.ba d.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.bad.
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it was kinda okay at the beginning. it slowly worsens as the mc gained op powers. and author gave tragic experience/endings to many characters. the character development of the mc did not flesh out well. but i like how he did not end up sleeping with all the "heroines." actually some of the said heroines are with their respective male protagonist. but yeah, the tragedies leave a very bad taste. and i guess author got tired and just rushed the ending altogether. not worth the time. to anyone reading this review, i suggest you look for another fic to enjoy.
Spoiler de révélation Why? Kenapa harus ending yang buruk kenapa kau tidak membuat ending yang lebih baik seperti mungkin dia mati MELINDUNGI keluarga atau mungkin bisa memperbaiki Dunia nya percuma 100 lebih chapter jika ending nya kayak sampah
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Author. Please write what happened in the last closed chapter? What did Issei do to Etsuba? Why does the main character hate Issei? What happened? We don't necessarily need a colorful description of 18+ moments. I understand when authors post 18+ on Patreon. This can be called fan service. But the last chapter is not just an 18+ chapter. This is a chapter that greatly influences the plot. Without knowing what happened, it is difficult to understand the reason for the main character's actions. Therefore, author. Please tell me what happened to Etsuba.
The author has a fetish for being cheated on[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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this is not a proper review will write one if this novel is for me, just got a question. Will there be any yuri in the harem not a fan. i know there is not any lemons but is it implied or not 🤞
Just write what you feel and like in your novel, as long as it's decent, improvement will naturally come along.
this story is annoying he is OP but do nothing in every corner there is girl so much that it is already annoying and he didnt focus on the attack from the group idk just he just too dumb,useless interaction
Sigo si saber por que no tiene mas de 4.0 estrellas si esta muy bueno. Si tuviera alguna queja es que los lemon no aparecen y ni aparece una descripción de lo que paso en el capitulo, Y QUE NO SALE NADA DE DE DATE A LIVE... Quisiera que hubiera al menos un simple capitulo de mi anime favorito pero que se le puede hacer.😩😩 Muy buena la novela la recomiendo encarecidamente. 👍👍♥️♥️
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Honestly, I liked the story, but I was disappointed that it cut content for payment and from what I see it happens more than once, I have paid to read more chapters and see additional content. If I have to choose between staying up to date on a novel that I've been following for a while and a couple of chapters of a novel I read today, I guess it's a shame.
Bruh..,.........................................,Bruh..,.........................................Bruh..,.........................................,,Bruh..,.........................................,Bruh..,.........................................,Bruh..,.........................................Bruh..,.........................................,Bruh..,.........................................,,
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bang, aku dari indonesia. dan aku rasa keren abang bisa bikin fan-fik sampe 200 bab dan mendapatkan peminat yang banyak termasuk aku [img=merekomendasikan] lanjutkan bang, dan semangat selalu.
another one of the stories that are ruined by 3rd person writing. the concept was great but the writing is as if someone is explaining the story to me which is honestly annoying.